Magic Martial World (Moved to WSA)

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Simp_Chaos

Shameless Author review here: 1. This is my creative world. Anything and everything can happen here. 2. This is a fairly slow paced novel. You don't have to read everything though since I'll write the novel in a way where you can start anywhere and still understand the story's direction. 3. The systems you'll see in my novel were referenced from Japanese webnovels so the [Quest Log] doesn't exist. 4. I don't know how to write romance so there'll be no romance in this novel. Yay. 5. I gave myself 3 stars for Stability of Updates since I only have time to post 3 chaps a week max. Lol, I just realized that this review is more of a disclaimer post than it is of an actual review XD.

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Top_otch

An interesting premise combined with an op mc, what more can one ask for? Writing quality is godly with little to no mistakes and I can safely say world-building is well. However, some parts are rather confusing and are fillers or filters. If you can get past them, it is a pretty solid story. Updating stability, however, yes.

Boring and uninspired plot, I see some potential but reading this novel feels like a chore. The writing quality isn’t bad but I won’t come back to read any future chapters.

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funkiller_562

In the end I found you myself 😅😅😅so just wait till I become your top fan. Not really a fan of eastern fantasy but this one looks promising. I look forward to seeing how the book grows.

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Mark_Tyler_0762

Oh dear author, the one that needs motivation to write. I am impressed with the story so far. The first two chapters hooked me in from the get go. The story is funny and also interesting in the same go as well. Nice job author, you have my honest review. If you don't write chapters quickly I will send Ivan to bonk your head😂

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Enigma21

I'm going to be completely honest, this is a rinse and repeat plot used a million times throughout the enjoy. Perhaps other people can enjoy it but at this point, I am quite sick of it. In the future I hope to see an original take from you, maybe not something cliché. In terms of writing quality, its quite good. A few hiccups here and there but it won't be noticed by a regular reader. Enjoyed the writing, didn't stay for the plot. I hope you will use this review as an aspect of improvement rather than hold a grudge against me. I wish you good luck in your endeavors.

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proking

According to the first three chapters I read, I must say the story has the potential to grow but there are a few flaws in it which makes it more bland and uninteresting. I'm not saying it out of a bad perspective, don't get me wrong. Sure, the pace would be slow and the author is just trying to establish the MC's character and world building. However, if there is no hooking incident at the start, readers might get bored. The first three chapters are golden ones and the author must try to attract audiences with his plot in any way. The cliche start of the mc getting bullied and, the bystanders explaining his character and whatnot won't cut it. Because these same things we read in another novel, there should be something unique in it so that IT CAN STAND OUT FROM THE OTHER NOVELS. I wrote this sentence caps on purpose, which is to emphasize that a proper foundation of a novel always starts with mc ending up in a dangerous situation or going through some bullying and he found some cheating system to turn the tables around or he found himself in another world or he just found a loophole in a magic spell that does not need mana or talent to use it or he found some pill making him use mana? The possibilities are endless. but the one who has to write is you. So, I won't say no more. The only flaws I saw were extremely slow pace without any smooth flow in the story development and a few exaggerated words not fitting for a young kid who's just in elementary lol. Other than that, author's writing skills are decent. so, I have no complaints about that. Overall, the story is good. After some adjustments to the story flow, it can do wonders. That's all I have to say. All the best author, hope you do well.