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I never publish reviews criticizing errors in grammar because I hardly know how to read the English language, much less write it (I write this with the help of the translator). But this time I will make an exception since the story is very difficult to read even for me, there are several sentences in a single paragraph so it is difficult to know who says each sentence; There are also cases where quotation marks are omitted in each dialogue, making it difficult to follow the conversations between the characters. As for the plot of the story, the truth is not clear to me, since from the beginning it is revealed that the mc in his strongest transformation can fight against OAA, so maybe he will only be the nanny of the Avengers. Something about the story that I found completely unnecessary is that the author took 5 CHAPTERS to describe the scene where Thor infiltrates the SHIELD base to retrieve mjolnir. Hopefully the author will take the trouble to fix these errors. (Google translate)
Definitely quite interesting and intriguing with OC/MC being the older brother of Thor and Loki not to mention being friends with Jesus as well TOAA not to mention Laufey being afraid of him not just that but of what he is the God of as well being the strongest of all Asgardians overall enjoyed reading this book and the plot that is going on look forward to reading more of this book and cant wait for when ur able to get the chance to continue on with this book
how is he friends with the one above all that guy doesn't even stay in the marvel universe and rarely appears.?????? but it a good story but why does every fanfic think that that actually like mortals or gods.
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Hey Author! I noticed you didn't have a book cover. You gotta have one, it helps with viewership. When people see a novel without a cover they think less chapters or already dropped. Here's a pic I found online if you're interested! I like your style, my only critique is that you kinda ensured a serious lack of tension when you made him a nigh omnipotent being from the start, but maybe that's the point.
i dont normally post revews but after I binged read this entire thing, I njoy it so much, and it constantly throws surprise after suprise. because of this I give this story a five star rating
I won't say this is a good novel, it have no good devlopment nor character design and there are many plot holes...But I can assure i enjoy the read..and thats what I look for a fanfic, it doesn't necessarily need to have a great story, if it has then its good,, but this is the type you just enjoy without a care in the world..
This is pretty enjoyable, as long as your not like me and constantly think of the fact Sun Wukong and the Norse god's are from completely different
U tixed it he doesnt meet bulma with the wish he is summoned gor the god one instead much better also like thats hes training them hope fore more
El primer capítulo muestra lo poderoso que es el mc muestra sus habilidades y sus capacidades pero Jo como lo logro y es aburrido tiene todo desde el principio es aburrido
THe beginning is very good, but towards the 6 to 7th chapter the mc becomes sorta like a background character, but 7 chapters later he becomes the main character again, it is a pretty interesting story though nonetheless, The only reason why I did not write 5 stars was because the quality at the end of the story seemed to go down, it lost some of its glory, other than that good story I recommend it.
Unfortunately, I was kicked out of my account, and for some reason could not log back in, so I created a new one, this is my new account write here, I will tell you when I have uploaded a chapter to the new story, once again I am sorry.
I Can't Say,But I Just Love This Story Mannn Please Don't Drop I Will Literally Just Drop Here Some Power Stones Everyday So Pleaseeeeee🥺🥺🥺🥺
I love op mc trope but that also have to have a plot..... This story so far even though have good plot points still have some problems... Like what happened to bruce since he was effectively non hulk at that point and was captured by ross he jumped from the chopper and almost died to become hulk..... Just add hulk in previous chs so that plot hole can be fixed. Great read so far
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this is sooooo good thanks for giving us this.....................................................................................👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
omg I loved this give me more.................................................................................................................NOW
This is pretty enjoyable, as long as your not like me and constantly think of the fact Sun Wukong and the Norse god's are from completely different pantheons
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I normally do not write reviews, but I have to say I am hooked on this story, I cannot wait to see what happens next author, you have my full support and my powerstones
cyz it's pretty good (for me)🤷→_→→_→→_→→_→→_→→_→→_→→_→→_→→_→→_→→_→→_→→_→→_→→_→→_→→_→→_→→_→→_→→_→→_→→_→→_→→_→→_→→_→→_→→_→→_→→_→→_→→_→→_→→_→→_→
Wow. So good. So MC WAS the ancient one first sexual partner. What a twist. Need more. Wow. So good. So MC WAS the ancient one first sexual partner. What a twist. Need more.
Quick Review
Nice. Cant wait to see the fights. Loving the story. Nice. Cant wait to see the fights. Loving the story.Nice. Cant wait to see the fights. Loving the story.
Just why? Odin have many children and the last name is Odinson, for example: Thor Odinson, Hela Odinson, so why the MC name is Sun Gokong? if you use the Nordic naming. Will you become Sun Gokong Odinson? that just weird
I have not read it yet after finding this book so I'm just going to ask one question here but why is Sun Wukong an Asgardian a Norse Mythology, shouldn't he be from Chinese Pantheon
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Is amazing, grammar needs work. (I honestly never thought i would be able to say that to anyone.) The book is amazing and i feel its going down a good path. Im just worried cause i think i can see whats coming, but it should be exciting enough to keep me reading. even if i predicted the ending already.
I really wanted to give 5 stars but with all the mistakes it makes it hard to understand things. Past the mistakes it's quite good till chapter 23
There a few mistakes, like a capitalized letter on a word/paragraph that doesn't need to be capitalized, and the almost nonexistent use of commas. It's good, other than the few mistakes that I've said, it was a good read for me.
I love op mc trope but that also have to have a plot..... This story so far even though have good plot points still have some problems... Like what happened to bruce since he was effectively non hulk at that point and was captured by ross he jumped from the chopper and almost died to become hulk..... Just add hulk in previous chs so that plot hole can be fixed. Great read so far
I never publish reviews criticizing errors in grammar because I hardly know how to read the English language, much less write it (I write this with the help of the translator). But this time I will make an exception since the story is very difficult to read even for me, there are several sentences in a single paragraph so it is difficult to know who says each sentence; There are also cases where quotation marks are omitted in each dialogue, making it difficult to follow the conversations between the characters. As for the plot of the story, the truth is not clear to me, since from the beginning it is revealed that the mc in his strongest transformation can fight against OAA, so maybe he will only be the nanny of the Avengers. Something about the story that I found completely unnecessary is that the author took 5 CHAPTERS to describe the scene where Thor infiltrates the SHIELD base to retrieve mjolnir. Hopefully the author will take the trouble to fix these errors. (Google translate)
Definitely quite interesting and intriguing with OC/MC being the older brother of Thor and Loki not to mention being friends with Jesus as well TOAA not to mention Laufey being afraid of him not just that but of what he is the God of as well being the strongest of all Asgardians overall enjoyed reading this book and the plot that is going on look forward to reading more of this book and cant wait for when ur able to get the chance to continue on with this book
how is he friends with the one above all that guy doesn't even stay in the marvel universe and rarely appears.?????? but it a good story but why does every fanfic think that that actually like mortals or gods.
bit.ly/3LyRF1N 💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗
Hey Author! I noticed you didn't have a book cover. You gotta have one, it helps with viewership. When people see a novel without a cover they think less chapters or already dropped. Here's a pic I found online if you're interested! I like your style, my only critique is that you kinda ensured a serious lack of tension when you made him a nigh omnipotent being from the start, but maybe that's the point.
i dont normally post revews but after I binged read this entire thing, I njoy it so much, and it constantly throws surprise after suprise. because of this I give this story a five star rating
I won't say this is a good novel, it have no good devlopment nor character design and there are many plot holes...But I can assure i enjoy the read..and thats what I look for a fanfic, it doesn't necessarily need to have a great story, if it has then its good,, but this is the type you just enjoy without a care in the world..
This is pretty enjoyable, as long as your not like me and constantly think of the fact Sun Wukong and the Norse god's are from completely different
U tixed it he doesnt meet bulma with the wish he is summoned gor the god one instead much better also like thats hes training them hope fore more
El primer capítulo muestra lo poderoso que es el mc muestra sus habilidades y sus capacidades pero Jo como lo logro y es aburrido tiene todo desde el principio es aburrido
THe beginning is very good, but towards the 6 to 7th chapter the mc becomes sorta like a background character, but 7 chapters later he becomes the main character again, it is a pretty interesting story though nonetheless, The only reason why I did not write 5 stars was because the quality at the end of the story seemed to go down, it lost some of its glory, other than that good story I recommend it.
Unfortunately, I was kicked out of my account, and for some reason could not log back in, so I created a new one, this is my new account write here, I will tell you when I have uploaded a chapter to the new story, once again I am sorry.
I Can't Say,But I Just Love This Story Mannn Please Don't Drop I Will Literally Just Drop Here Some Power Stones Everyday So Pleaseeeeee🥺🥺🥺🥺
I love op mc trope but that also have to have a plot..... This story so far even though have good plot points still have some problems... Like what happened to bruce since he was effectively non hulk at that point and was captured by ross he jumped from the chopper and almost died to become hulk..... Just add hulk in previous chs so that plot hole can be fixed. Great read so far
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this is sooooo good thanks for giving us this.....................................................................................👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
omg I loved this give me more.................................................................................................................NOW
This is pretty enjoyable, as long as your not like me and constantly think of the fact Sun Wukong and the Norse god's are from completely different pantheons
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I normally do not write reviews, but I have to say I am hooked on this story, I cannot wait to see what happens next author, you have my full support and my powerstones
cyz it's pretty good (for me)🤷→_→→_→→_→→_→→_→→_→→_→→_→→_→→_→→_→→_→→_→→_→→_→→_→→_→→_→→_→→_→→_→→_→→_→→_→→_→→_→→_→→_→→_→→_→→_→→_→→_→→_→→_→→_→→_→
Wow. So good. So MC WAS the ancient one first sexual partner. What a twist. Need more. Wow. So good. So MC WAS the ancient one first sexual partner. What a twist. Need more.
Quick Review
Nice. Cant wait to see the fights. Loving the story. Nice. Cant wait to see the fights. Loving the story.Nice. Cant wait to see the fights. Loving the story.
Just why? Odin have many children and the last name is Odinson, for example: Thor Odinson, Hela Odinson, so why the MC name is Sun Gokong? if you use the Nordic naming. Will you become Sun Gokong Odinson? that just weird
I have not read it yet after finding this book so I'm just going to ask one question here but why is Sun Wukong an Asgardian a Norse Mythology, shouldn't he be from Chinese Pantheon
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Is amazing, grammar needs work. (I honestly never thought i would be able to say that to anyone.) The book is amazing and i feel its going down a good path. Im just worried cause i think i can see whats coming, but it should be exciting enough to keep me reading. even if i predicted the ending already.
I really wanted to give 5 stars but with all the mistakes it makes it hard to understand things. Past the mistakes it's quite good till chapter 23
There a few mistakes, like a capitalized letter on a word/paragraph that doesn't need to be capitalized, and the almost nonexistent use of commas. It's good, other than the few mistakes that I've said, it was a good read for me.
I love op mc trope but that also have to have a plot..... This story so far even though have good plot points still have some problems... Like what happened to bruce since he was effectively non hulk at that point and was captured by ross he jumped from the chopper and almost died to become hulk..... Just add hulk in previous chs so that plot hole can be fixed. Great read so far