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Marvel System In A One Piece World
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Enes was born into a rich family and was a genius at a very young age.
However, the world he lived in began to bore him and after his parents died he secluded himself in his room living off of their wealth.
He became a massive otaku and was planning on leaving the rest of his life as one until one day an accident befalls him.
He wakes up on a remote island with no civilization in sight. But luckily it wasn't all bad as he was given a Marvel System.
(This is my first novel so please give me feedback. I did not make and do not own the picture used for the novel.)
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This has the potential to be amazing in every sense of the word, the writing is managable but it does seem a bit rushed in the speed of plot so that should be considered, the story should not be rushed. This story is great could be one of my favourites if these things are considered, also the system needs to a more specific ay of working and maybe a hyd or differnt text type? Keep up the good work my dude.
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Good start, I would suggest that you go back to chapter one to remove the last few sentences, those were supposed to be for the start of the chapter, not the end.