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Write a reviewEu ja tinha lido no tempo do wattpad era fida a historia , acho que agora o mc ficou meio trevoso mas ta massa so um pouco complicado o fato dele fugir de mulher mas ta massa.
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The story at first sounds interesting, but as I read, I realized that MC was a stupid guy, he had a lot of power and still didn't think of protecting his family or hiding his name in the previous life and the present life, for his persecutors, only causing hate. MC doesn't care who dies and cares little about the people he knows. It's an interesting story, but the background is bad.
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Another overrated fiction. It's suffering from a lot of issues, and inconsistencies are everywhere. Although it was an entertaining read before chapters 30 onwards. He was a hundreds of thousands year old god before reincarnation, but for some reason, he acts dumb, even when he's not intentionally acting. I'm fine with his people progressing quick because of him, but when they start overtaking him cause "reasons", and suddenly regressing cultivation because he went and punched his grimoire (which is something he shouldn't have done with his mental age), it's disappointing. If those things are made for the sake of "comedic effect" then it failed badly, it's not funny at all, and the built premise in early chapters are just falling apart instead. Grammatical errors are everywhere, sometimes the MC is referred to by "he", and suddenly becoming "you", or something similar. It also happens with the females, being referred to as "her" sometimes then "him" other times. The events seem like they are written on the fly. Things happen out of nowhere without any hints, making the narrative suffer. One example is the appearance of his master, only being said that the MC felt his presence days before when the guy already appeared in front of him. The characters are bland. The female characters follow common templates, but the execution is lacking, their characters aren't built from the ground up, you get the end results via timeskips. The "bad guys" are mostly, if not all "arrogant young master" template, no depth in personality whatsoever, only either obnoxiously loud, or h*rny b*st*rds.
Good history, light and interesting. The writer is a lich then he never die and can write forever it is the best point. The main character is really great and smart, he had a sad past but now he can enjoy a new life. π»
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Man, tu veio la da pqp da kuork pra ca, seloko, e tuas outras WN, vai continuar elas? Ou vai ser so essa mesmo? ou to confundindo os esqueletos?
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Estou gostando bastante, sei que estΓ‘ no inicio, mas espero ver momentos Γ©picos atrelados ao desenvolvimento do personagem. Coisas como uma ponta solta, que depois de dezenas de capΓtulos depois, gere uma dor de cabeΓ§a que atΓ© mesmo nosso herΓ³i tenha dificuldades para resolver. Claro nada jogado, tem que ser bem trabalho e trazer novos questionamentos e informaçáes. Acharia fod# se comedor de merda e seu mestre se unissem de alguma forma com os Deuses, fazendo JΓΊlio nΓ£o ficar tΓ£o confortΓ‘vel como estΓ‘ agora.
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I love the story, and it has a very good concept behind it, but stories where the mc gets dominated by his wife is not for me. I get that he would do anything for them but to me you can love your girl but still wear the pants in the household.
I really like this novel but at 29-31 it takes a turn for the worst. As Julius was a god before and even was in the process of devloping his IDEA before being reincarnated. So being hit by an arrogant book is so RUBBISH author please get your story together ianti his soul powerful enough to reflect the books damage. But overall I think it's a GOOD book if you like this kind of novel
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I can't describe how much this novel it's good. Obviously you can't actually take my word because I'm make the revision of this novel with insane amounts of mistakes that some I can't even see. I'm actually just waiting for me to reach 140.......................
Reveal SpoilerLooking forward to it. Amazing story. Creative writing. Keep up the good work. Can I post a review in another language other than English? π love it π
Good read only ready first part but from what I have read so far it is an amusing story full of subtle serious notes while having a healthy dose of comedy
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I really want to thank all of you readers for the support you are giving my story, this makes me very happy! NOW TOWARDS THE 100K OF VIEWS!!!!
O escritor que escreveu esta histΓ³ria Γ© um amigo meu e venho declarar uma poesia para ele. Fiz uma promessa pra mim mesmo nunca mais comer torresmo AlguΓ©m me disse, outro dia, que para sentir satisfação e alegria Γ© necessΓ‘rio ser caridoso Me dΓ‘ um real, me da um real aΓ JoΓ£o camainha mainha mania monai O que fazer se nΓ£o fazer e aceitar o tΓ©dio enfadonho EntΓ£o acho a receita de caminhar na caminhada E subindo o morro, penso na sensação agradΓ‘vel de vir mais rΓ‘pido na descida pois estou numa bike Corro o risco de tropeΓ§ar em mim mesmo e cair quebrando o pescoΓ§o PescoΓ§o em francΓͺs Γ© Γ’nus! Γnus Γ© a parte aboral do corpo, vivendo e aprendendo O que o gato disse para o leite antes de bebe-lo? Miaaau! NΓ£o procure saber onde vou meu caminho Γ© toda manhΓ£ VocΓͺ gosta de maçã? Eu tambΓ©m, mas nΓ£o tem! Aleluia, aleluia, aleluia! Reze uma ave maria um pai nosso e um graio pai e assim vocΓͺ deverΓ‘ ser feliz, ser feliz A felicidade nΓ£o esta no pico da montanha, estΓ‘ enquanto vocΓͺ escala esta montanhaο»Ώ!
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Eu ja tinha lido no tempo do wattpad era fida a historia , acho que agora o mc ficou meio trevoso mas ta massa so um pouco complicado o fato dele fugir de mulher mas ta massa.
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The story at first sounds interesting, but as I read, I realized that MC was a stupid guy, he had a lot of power and still didn't think of protecting his family or hiding his name in the previous life and the present life, for his persecutors, only causing hate. MC doesn't care who dies and cares little about the people he knows. It's an interesting story, but the background is bad.
Reveal SpoilerHmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm I....... Know from just looking at a novel cover or title that this is a good story my guts feel it(3 month old in reading novel)a good story created from mistakes and failures to learn(even my Grammar is likely basic Level well am from PH good at reading but basic in writing and speaking English)
Boa noite eu sou br tb entao essa novel tem em portugues quero muito le em pt br ahh 140 140 Boa noite eu sou br tb entao essa novel tem em portugues quero muito le em pt br ahh 140 140 Boa noite eu sou br tb entao essa novel tem em portugues quero muito le em pt br ahh 140 140 Boa noite eu sou br tb entao essa novel tem em portugues quero muito le em pt br ahh 140 140
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Another overrated fiction. It's suffering from a lot of issues, and inconsistencies are everywhere. Although it was an entertaining read before chapters 30 onwards. He was a hundreds of thousands year old god before reincarnation, but for some reason, he acts dumb, even when he's not intentionally acting. I'm fine with his people progressing quick because of him, but when they start overtaking him cause "reasons", and suddenly regressing cultivation because he went and punched his grimoire (which is something he shouldn't have done with his mental age), it's disappointing. If those things are made for the sake of "comedic effect" then it failed badly, it's not funny at all, and the built premise in early chapters are just falling apart instead. Grammatical errors are everywhere, sometimes the MC is referred to by "he", and suddenly becoming "you", or something similar. It also happens with the females, being referred to as "her" sometimes then "him" other times. The events seem like they are written on the fly. Things happen out of nowhere without any hints, making the narrative suffer. One example is the appearance of his master, only being said that the MC felt his presence days before when the guy already appeared in front of him. The characters are bland. The female characters follow common templates, but the execution is lacking, their characters aren't built from the ground up, you get the end results via timeskips. The "bad guys" are mostly, if not all "arrogant young master" template, no depth in personality whatsoever, only either obnoxiously loud, or h*rny b*st*rds.
Good history, light and interesting. The writer is a lich then he never die and can write forever it is the best point. The main character is really great and smart, he had a sad past but now he can enjoy a new life. π»
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Man, tu veio la da pqp da kuork pra ca, seloko, e tuas outras WN, vai continuar elas? Ou vai ser so essa mesmo? ou to confundindo os esqueletos?
Grammar is terrible. '...................................................................................................................................
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Estou gostando bastante, sei que estΓ‘ no inicio, mas espero ver momentos Γ©picos atrelados ao desenvolvimento do personagem. Coisas como uma ponta solta, que depois de dezenas de capΓtulos depois, gere uma dor de cabeΓ§a que atΓ© mesmo nosso herΓ³i tenha dificuldades para resolver. Claro nada jogado, tem que ser bem trabalho e trazer novos questionamentos e informaçáes. Acharia fod# se comedor de merda e seu mestre se unissem de alguma forma com os Deuses, fazendo JΓΊlio nΓ£o ficar tΓ£o confortΓ‘vel como estΓ‘ agora.
Very good.......i Love it π Keep it up.........we need more chapters. Mass release!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!βοΈβοΈβοΈβοΈβοΈβοΈβοΈβοΈβοΈβοΈβοΈβοΈβοΈβοΈβοΈβοΈβοΈβοΈβοΈβοΈβοΈβοΈβοΈππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©π€©
I love the story, and it has a very good concept behind it, but stories where the mc gets dominated by his wife is not for me. I get that he would do anything for them but to me you can love your girl but still wear the pants in the household.
I really like this novel but at 29-31 it takes a turn for the worst. As Julius was a god before and even was in the process of devloping his IDEA before being reincarnated. So being hit by an arrogant book is so RUBBISH author please get your story together ianti his soul powerful enough to reflect the books damage. But overall I think it's a GOOD book if you like this kind of novel
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I can't describe how much this novel it's good. Obviously you can't actually take my word because I'm make the revision of this novel with insane amounts of mistakes that some I can't even see. I'm actually just waiting for me to reach 140.......................
Reveal SpoilerLooking forward to it. Amazing story. Creative writing. Keep up the good work. Can I post a review in another language other than English? π love it π
Good read only ready first part but from what I have read so far it is an amusing story full of subtle serious notes while having a healthy dose of comedy
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I really want to thank all of you readers for the support you are giving my story, this makes me very happy! NOW TOWARDS THE 100K OF VIEWS!!!!
O escritor que escreveu esta histΓ³ria Γ© um amigo meu e venho declarar uma poesia para ele. Fiz uma promessa pra mim mesmo nunca mais comer torresmo AlguΓ©m me disse, outro dia, que para sentir satisfação e alegria Γ© necessΓ‘rio ser caridoso Me dΓ‘ um real, me da um real aΓ JoΓ£o camainha mainha mania monai O que fazer se nΓ£o fazer e aceitar o tΓ©dio enfadonho EntΓ£o acho a receita de caminhar na caminhada E subindo o morro, penso na sensação agradΓ‘vel de vir mais rΓ‘pido na descida pois estou numa bike Corro o risco de tropeΓ§ar em mim mesmo e cair quebrando o pescoΓ§o PescoΓ§o em francΓͺs Γ© Γ’nus! Γnus Γ© a parte aboral do corpo, vivendo e aprendendo O que o gato disse para o leite antes de bebe-lo? Miaaau! NΓ£o procure saber onde vou meu caminho Γ© toda manhΓ£ VocΓͺ gosta de maçã? Eu tambΓ©m, mas nΓ£o tem! Aleluia, aleluia, aleluia! Reze uma ave maria um pai nosso e um graio pai e assim vocΓͺ deverΓ‘ ser feliz, ser feliz A felicidade nΓ£o esta no pico da montanha, estΓ‘ enquanto vocΓͺ escala esta montanhaο»Ώ!
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Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.