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This makes no sense. As a writer, you have no rightto hold back few chapters to the readers. This makes the story less interesting. You keep giving us a link that goes "********". Cmon! Who does that? How do you expect us to understand the full story when some chapters are missing. The story is really nice and worth the time. But I would appreciate it if you could work on the typographical errors and releasing the other chapters.
i hate the ending lol but pls make a part three or i will die and you can imagine me dramatically type this but this book was great and i hope there is a part three
Really Author🙄🙄, why would you end the story in such a terrible way, not cool at all ...its not well organized towards the ending at all...Cool beginning and cool storyline but the ending is a No no, haha Kilode now
i love this book so much i hope you make a 3rd book that's how much i love this book because this is my favorite book periodttt i hope you please continue sincerly antianna
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I really loved the book. It is a very beautiful and touching story. However the ending is a bit abrupt and isn't very clear. But I would still recommended it.
this story is kind of nice in the start although it start with kidnapping then organization and others, but in the latter part there is love of two people... what happened to the end? they end with a huge blow of disgust for us readers because not only that the ending has no specific turn of events just like that killed the main character... hoping next time you make another story please make sure that not this kind of story again.... how dissappointing...
The story differs than other usual love story out there..but still, i like that the MC has grown up both physically n mentally..😂😂...anyway, i hv high expectation for this..looking forward to the rest updates
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First of all I hope author you r doing fine..... Thanks for the sequel it's really nice eye catching type of...thanks for your hard work...I am really enjoying reading... The flow is just good......waiting as how they get reunite with each other... Love u author
Thanks author your work is good the grammar is alright but my concern is the novel is confusing now no update on time and when there is update it's something else
I'm loving your story already it is good for me to read during my free time which is a the because I am free now that I'm done with school I can just lay 8n bed and read all day long.💜💜💜💜💜💖💖💖💖💔🖤🖤🖤🖤💫💗💗💗💗💗💗💗
Why keep on pretending Talia..heheh.. But i love how strong your character is. Axel do your best to win her back😊 Thanks dear author
HAHAHA finally another chapter that was posted. why did it take too long to update? dear author are you in a holiday? pls. update more chapter the next time, i really wanted to know what will happen to talia & axel.
Thanks author this is quite interesting but what really happened for almost how many weeks no update one is beginning to forget the plot of the novel well let us know what is happening
Nice story..waiting for update..keep it up ..characters are interesting finished the first book looking forward on how the story goes as the first book left readers hanging
Now that am going through the book One, I don't think axel deserves a second chance from Talia. She's gone through alot because of him. Thanks for starting the second book author, please update more often. Xoxo loyal reader ❤️
Reveal Spoiler The story is very interesting, the character design is sooo good but the rate at wish the update is coming is very poor. Please update more, thanks
I really love this second volume. The cliffhangers are always graet leaving me eager for the next update. I hope we get to see what our ML has been doing since our FL escaped .
I love your story but you delay for the updating chapter I love all your novel and I'm crazy hungry for the new novel YOUR STORY ARE THE BEST
O rhe girl is no less, she is grown up I think the story is going to be interesting I love this novel even though I don't like the first part much but I m enjoying this one 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
This is going to be as awesome as the last one. Lady Talia has grown up!!!! Squeal. In all seriousness though, it is well written. Nearly flawless english and fantastic plot. Read the first one first. Then you will be joining the ranks of bitting our nails waiting for updates. Worth it.
Iys been a long time since I jave waited for the next chapter to released. Im so excited what will happen next. Im thrilled how will she take her revenge.
The story is really nice the progress of FL from a naive, gentle and simple girl to a smart , strong and straight forward girl is really amazing.... thanks author
This makes no sense. As a writer, you have no rightto hold back few chapters to the readers. This makes the story less interesting. You keep giving us a link that goes "********". Cmon! Who does that? How do you expect us to understand the full story when some chapters are missing. The story is really nice and worth the time. But I would appreciate it if you could work on the typographical errors and releasing the other chapters.
i hate the ending lol but pls make a part three or i will die and you can imagine me dramatically type this but this book was great and i hope there is a part three
Really Author🙄🙄, why would you end the story in such a terrible way, not cool at all ...its not well organized towards the ending at all...Cool beginning and cool storyline but the ending is a No no, haha Kilode now
i love this book so much i hope you make a 3rd book that's how much i love this book because this is my favorite book periodttt i hope you please continue sincerly antianna
Reveal Spoiler I really loved the book. It is a very beautiful and touching story. However the ending is a bit abrupt and isn't very clear. But I would still recommended it.
this story is kind of nice in the start although it start with kidnapping then organization and others, but in the latter part there is love of two people... what happened to the end? they end with a huge blow of disgust for us readers because not only that the ending has no specific turn of events just like that killed the main character... hoping next time you make another story please make sure that not this kind of story again.... how dissappointing...
The story differs than other usual love story out there..but still, i like that the MC has grown up both physically n mentally..😂😂...anyway, i hv high expectation for this..looking forward to the rest updates
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First of all I hope author you r doing fine..... Thanks for the sequel it's really nice eye catching type of...thanks for your hard work...I am really enjoying reading... The flow is just good......waiting as how they get reunite with each other... Love u author
Thanks author your work is good the grammar is alright but my concern is the novel is confusing now no update on time and when there is update it's something else
I'm loving your story already it is good for me to read during my free time which is a the because I am free now that I'm done with school I can just lay 8n bed and read all day long.💜💜💜💜💜💖💖💖💖💔🖤🖤🖤🖤💫💗💗💗💗💗💗💗
Why keep on pretending Talia..heheh.. But i love how strong your character is. Axel do your best to win her back😊 Thanks dear author
HAHAHA finally another chapter that was posted. why did it take too long to update? dear author are you in a holiday? pls. update more chapter the next time, i really wanted to know what will happen to talia & axel.
Thanks author this is quite interesting but what really happened for almost how many weeks no update one is beginning to forget the plot of the novel well let us know what is happening
Nice story..waiting for update..keep it up ..characters are interesting finished the first book looking forward on how the story goes as the first book left readers hanging
Now that am going through the book One, I don't think axel deserves a second chance from Talia. She's gone through alot because of him. Thanks for starting the second book author, please update more often. Xoxo loyal reader ❤️
Reveal Spoiler The story is very interesting, the character design is sooo good but the rate at wish the update is coming is very poor. Please update more, thanks
I really love this second volume. The cliffhangers are always graet leaving me eager for the next update. I hope we get to see what our ML has been doing since our FL escaped .
I love your story but you delay for the updating chapter I love all your novel and I'm crazy hungry for the new novel YOUR STORY ARE THE BEST
O rhe girl is no less, she is grown up I think the story is going to be interesting I love this novel even though I don't like the first part much but I m enjoying this one 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
This is going to be as awesome as the last one. Lady Talia has grown up!!!! Squeal. In all seriousness though, it is well written. Nearly flawless english and fantastic plot. Read the first one first. Then you will be joining the ranks of bitting our nails waiting for updates. Worth it.
Iys been a long time since I jave waited for the next chapter to released. Im so excited what will happen next. Im thrilled how will she take her revenge.
The story is really nice the progress of FL from a naive, gentle and simple girl to a smart , strong and straight forward girl is really amazing.... thanks author