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Yan Was 5 Year old when his father died in a Battle.
the Battles was to protect the people from demon in the end qin family personal army got annihilated and After his Father Dead Yan Family members Start to Bully Yan And His Mother, Sister.
Yan Born without a Bloodline,in this cultivation world every Person Need a Bloodline to cultivate.
One day yan Mother Fall ill and he was Finding A Herb That Can Cure Her Mother, He found them But when he was About go some of his clansman beat him like a dog and make him unable to walk or stand, They Broke yan Leg,hand, They Let Yan Die In that Forest.
But Seddenly he heard a voice after that when he woke the system give yan The Power to Walk on cultivation path.
He swear on his life he will kill evey single Demon and find out who was the culprit that kill his Father.
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I want a Mis Thic Dragon Vampire system that would be nice, okay but seriously besides some funny grammar mistakes and not so funny mistakes it's good.
Author Here Hope You all are liking this novel and i am very excited because in this 4day my reader view has increase and my novel finally got a novel rate 4.3 and many people are saying that my story deployment is good but i am getting some grammar Error. about the reader Those who are supporting me and my novel i am very thankful for them and i will soon fix the early chap errors but after 25 you can see that my novel doesn't have that much error that has in past
you really need to fix that synopsis its extremely off puting the grammar is rediculously poor, as if it was written by my 9 year brother, actually no not even he would make that many mistakes, get an editor ASAP cause english is clearly not your first language
Support this book! ๐ I don't mind Author-san's book having grammatical mistakes. The important thing is your book is amazing! You have this courage to make a story. You can use google docs to improvise this common mistakes. Humans are imperfect. You will improve day by day with practice and passion. Fighting! c(ใป`ฯยดใป โ)
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the story is good but the author couldn't make a good World and character Design so the story is bad but if like you said it is your first time writing so we can over look the facts of your mistakes
the story is good but you do many mistakes you have to solve that About the i like it and i wish that you don't drop a book like this hope you will continue ๐
It would help if you used Grammarly. I don't know If English is your second language, but youโre spelling is horrible.
bro like when wb recommended me this, I was like what misthicc ??? and then I saw vampire like gett an editor or Grammarly please also it's very off putting like I didn't even wanna read it from the title but the story i like it
my opinion about story development was great, it just have bad writing quality ( i understand that this is your begining in writing, and i don't mind actually), it just too difficult to read for someone with mind for relax reading cause you need to give more effort to read the writing and understand the meaning of your word. keep your work sir author, cheer up๐ค๐ค๐ค. Note : i will give my little suggestion for conversation, instead of write [system yes host] please use [system "yes host"] or you can use system [yes host]. so we can different between narration and conversation. thanks
I personally thunk it is cute that the author still has grammar mistakes but persists with the book......inspiring and love the plot with the character developmeny
The story is good i like it and it is a Martial but the novel has many error you must solve them.๐ and i will support this novel, I don't mind, and you should carry on the 39/40 chap was great nut your 1to25 chap has many error
The story is good and it is a Martial art novels i like it and the fighting design are goo to ๐But you spelling isn't good so i think you must learn grammar so you can write more good then this
the story is good like it but the story has many mistake you might need to solve them.๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
I really like the concept of the book, i would really like reading the book but the grammer errors really makes the book somewhat unreadable. I just wish the errors would be fixed so that i can continue reading the the book.