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Nice story .... Story and plots are nice .... There are some minor errors which i could correct easily .... Overall the story is good written ...
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Too much based on incest , not enough variety or variance in stories. Saw some misspellings which read a tad off. I’ve read better stories that have been better quality. However not terrible for a beginner writer in this topic.
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a compilation of smut short stories, not much to say about the characters and world. very straight forward, immediately jump to smut scenes.
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Nice story .... Story and plots are nice .... There are some minor errors which i could correct easily .... Overall the story is good written ...
Reveal Spoiler Too much based on incest , not enough variety or variance in stories. Saw some misspellings which read a tad off. I’ve read better stories that have been better quality. However not terrible for a beginner writer in this topic.
Reveal Spoiler Hismsnendjfjcjcnf d dncjcuusjsns f g dnkdisksns. Djekskenwj fee. Wkkfjdnsw Jackson weijgjndks fuiskwnfndh shire den hjdidejnae fee jfbene fkendnjw jeisijfjf diide Jew kfdkjdiei Jddu fideijewjevdhf frisk fee FHA’s cfjifnd djsiskemwms Fido’s video ddjjdkdkd figurine fudjejej fight gujfjfnff ddikfkdk did she fee gjfjffjd fididjddjudhnffi gfikds
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a compilation of smut short stories, not much to say about the characters and world. very straight forward, immediately jump to smut scenes.