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A short erotic tale about a young lady by the Jade is a single mother who has the weekend alone. What will she get up to
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I absolutely loved reading this. I really wished I was Jade and wondered why I haven’t met my Andy. The story was short and straight to the point. It is written in plain simple easy to understand English. The author has a way of paying incredible attention detail and I loved the way he went about describing every single moment. The way he described the characters, their outfits, the way they smelled and his detailed manner of every action they took. From the very first paragraph I wanted to know what was behind the open door. The story is written in a way where I was able vividly picture every moment occurring. He uses strong metaphors to get his point across. After reading this I look forward to what else he has, but I must ask, WHY DID IT END SO SOON