My Cultivation Augment System

LV 1

WrightWater

The author here, shamelessly reviewing my novel, I always wanted to write one novel, and this new Writing Prompt Contest inspired me to begin. I will upload two chapters per day, if you guys find any spelling or grammar mistakes feel free to point them out. Thanks for reading

LV 2

WaterfallEleven

Really liked the first 15 chapters, making an early review because the novel isn't vetoed yet and I cant support it with powerstones, gonna comeback later and review again after some time.

So after reading the first arc (30 chapters) i think I can give this a fair review, the character are good the author really tries to develop them but this make the pacing a bit slow sometimes, as for now the MC barely cultivated, but it looks like he will pick up his pace, things that I thnk would make the novel better would be more action and fights, developing the plot is nice but we need fight too. The spelling is good, but some times I find his grammar a bit weird

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This story is nice it would be better if author put more action on it there was just 3 fights till now and they were all small one , but its worth the read the character arent that dumb and they actually have development

LV 11

Rayne_Rue

According to the chapters I read so far they were quite okay , can't really say I have complains about them they are great and I love the characters in this book ,Yes I can't lie when I said I was interested in this book ,it really did intrigue me into reading more chapters than I thought I would and I love reading them , keep it up Author and do your best.. RECOMMENDED.