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its a good no one I just wish that you would have that it worked on more uploading it efficiency but besides that it's a pretty dope but novel
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Bro,sigue publicando mas, amo tu novela en serio. Me gusta la personalidad del mc, pero si son la mafia... Como pringaos consiguen dinero o que pasara si se meten con otra mafia, tiene un equipo especializado para eso?... En fin, esta novela es una joya. O estoy muy enfermo
To be honest its not bad, but the MC really has no consequences for any of his actions, he does things on a whim which i dont think gives the story much depth, if your reading this story for the sex scenes then yeah its great albeit not very detailed, but to be honest at some point the sex overpowers the story making it all fall flat, unless sex is a major mechanic in the story then the MC shouldnt be doing it so much
More!!!!! More!!!!!!!!! Moooooooorrrrrrrrrreeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!.............................. Fuck yeah!! Mooooorrrreee!
It’s pretty good the story is nice the only problem is that there are no pictures or drawings of the background or the characters you just use your imagination
( ✧Д✧) YES!!(๑˃̵ ᴗ ˂̵)و(๑˃̵ ᴗ ˂̵)و(๑˃̵ ᴗ ˂̵)و(๑˃̵ ᴗ ˂̵)و(๑˃̵ ᴗ ˂̵)و(๑˃̵ ᴗ ˂̵)و (￣∇￣) MORE UPDATES ∩( ✧Д✧)∩ ✺◟( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)◞✺ awesome story U・ᴥ・U
AMAZING!! Rough start but amazing "finish" 😍😍 I am definitely keeping up with this book! Absolutely loved it and read it all in one night! Can't wait for each new chapter update!!
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I am not going to be so shameless to rate my own novel full stars... I will grade it how I see fit. writing quality 3. needs work... stability updates 5. I release every day! story development 4. could use a lot more work! Character design 4. I make each character unique! world background... this is a hard one I rate it 2 and a half if I could... I need to work on that!
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its a good no one I just wish that you would have that it worked on more uploading it efficiency but besides that it's a pretty dope but novel
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Reveal Spoiler Bro,sigue publicando mas, amo tu novela en serio. Me gusta la personalidad del mc, pero si son la mafia... Como pringaos consiguen dinero o que pasara si se meten con otra mafia, tiene un equipo especializado para eso?... En fin, esta novela es una joya. O estoy muy enfermo
To be honest its not bad, but the MC really has no consequences for any of his actions, he does things on a whim which i dont think gives the story much depth, if your reading this story for the sex scenes then yeah its great albeit not very detailed, but to be honest at some point the sex overpowers the story making it all fall flat, unless sex is a major mechanic in the story then the MC shouldnt be doing it so much
More!!!!! More!!!!!!!!! Moooooooorrrrrrrrrreeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!.............................. Fuck yeah!! Mooooorrrreee!
It’s pretty good the story is nice the only problem is that there are no pictures or drawings of the background or the characters you just use your imagination
( ✧Д✧) YES!!(๑˃̵ ᴗ ˂̵)و(๑˃̵ ᴗ ˂̵)و(๑˃̵ ᴗ ˂̵)و(๑˃̵ ᴗ ˂̵)و(๑˃̵ ᴗ ˂̵)و(๑˃̵ ᴗ ˂̵)و (￣∇￣) MORE UPDATES ∩( ✧Д✧)∩ ✺◟( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)◞✺ awesome story U・ᴥ・U
AMAZING!! Rough start but amazing "finish" 😍😍 I am definitely keeping up with this book! Absolutely loved it and read it all in one night! Can't wait for each new chapter update!!
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I am not going to be so shameless to rate my own novel full stars... I will grade it how I see fit. writing quality 3. needs work... stability updates 5. I release every day! story development 4. could use a lot more work! Character design 4. I make each character unique! world background... this is a hard one I rate it 2 and a half if I could... I need to work on that!
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