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My Lost Romance: Last First Love
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A singer, a teacher and lots of fans and beliefs to take care of. What is going to be the fate of two people?
Taaliyah who aspire to become a teacher has always been in love with her childhood friend Derek who rejected her and left the country to achieve heights in his career as a pop singer.
Their connection ended there, after high school.
Years later, on an important day of Taaliyah's career, she found that he is back in her life, shockingly. Derek returned back as a famous singer while Taaliyah climbed the ladder as a teacher who yet had alot to accomplish in life as a beginner. But Derek decided to hinder her growth while trying to get his incomplete school degree and win her back. But things get complicated when Min Ah and Irfan crossed both their lives.
The bitter sweet moments, and the love hate relationship leads to one trouble after the other. But will she accept his offers years after him running away from her.
Excerpt:
"You get off me," Taaliyah said angrily, trying to take his hands off her hips. She could never forgive him after all these years.
"I won't," Derek had that alluring mischievous smile on his face enough to cause chaos in a woman's heart.
"It's school, Its shameful to get caught, am a teacher here," she explained to him. He began to run his hands down her neck and unbuttoned her shirt. "Derek stop,"
"I don't care, I will show you today, what did you call me, say it," he said and inserted his hands into her shirt, around her hips pulling her closer. It was intimidating to her. She turned her head away, but he touched her cheek and made her look into his eyes. He felt her heart pounding loud against his as he moved closer and brushed his lips on her.
"Derek no," she whispered but it did not stop him, standing behind the half shut door in the 8th grade classroom after school hours. Taaliyah could hear people outside, still walking. But she got lost, in his arms, as he deepened his kiss. She held on to his shirt tight.
It's about first love and Slice of life !!! it will be as as real as possible and slowly progressing because I want the story to be authentic!!! Please do support the novel, read it, and enjoy!!
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I really love this work...... It's really penned beautifully and highlighting each and every events. This author has really touched my heart and I can feel This Work is really written from the core of the heart, giving exact feelings that is required...... Waiting for more......💖🥰
I am addicted to this novel Omg what should I do Ms Author Please help me out I read all 60 chapters in one day using 3 accounts... Now I want more When will I get 😭😭
Hello everyone!! This is a new novel I have started writing participating for WSA 2021 !! Hope you guys will enjoy it !!! Do read it !! [img=recommend][img=recommend]
I have been searching for a beautiful novel Now I got this Its really beautiful novel please upload more chapters I can't wait for other chapters
This story has really touched my heart........... I feel like I'm addicted to it. It represents the difficulty of the children and their changes in their puberty. It also shows the evolution of the love between two friends. It also shows the daily problems between the elders... Overall, It's really a beautiful and heart-touching novel......
A precious gem! I like how close to reality this story is! The family conflict is relatable and the characters are realistic! This is a good read!
It was a good story. I enjoyed it while reading . It is less interesting in first chapter but after that it becomes interesting . Overall the story was decent
I was easily pulled in by the synopsis, the small excerpt especially. Lol what a tease that was. The story is nicely written and the author has a good and understandable writing style. Sometimes I got a bit confused but as I read on things got more clear. I'm looking forward to continuing the journey of Derek and Taliyah or is it Taaliyah? (Dear author, The name in the synopsis and novel is different) Overall, this is also a hidden gem that has the potential for greatness and tremendous success. [img=recommend]
I can't deny the fact that this one is interesting and at the same time a refreshing story for readers. Overall, it's an engaging story so far. Such an amazing and great novel of yours Author. Keep writing, Author.
The story is good. Plot is interesting. Characters are young i guess the main story after this childhood background which makes me want to know what happens sooon. The background setting of the story is great, it is so real and vivid that reader can see it. But update daily so that we can keep and proofread too. Great story.
I like the beginning, I like the language and style adopted. I like the cute characters they are lovely and gives that school vibe well. There is an interest whole reading wanting to know more. If so it is already developing well. The plot. I love it. And I want to know more Please update more author. [img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend]
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The story appears to be happening in a new, interesting and very novel setting. I loved the tiny details, I love how food are presented, all the images used are on point, there is a great background information, especially the families, traditions, their beliefs and the system. The language is also simple and good. I cannot wait to read more and find what happens to the characters. the combination of teacher and a singer, it's going to be a bang ! please update daily author.
The story has real and original plot. I wonder how author came up with such a realistic story. The narration is great. The emotions are authentic, images are vivid, the language is simple, the descriptions are wow and change of scene from one to another, i like how the author has detailed it and make it clear about what is happening in the chapter. The characters and story, its very relatable too. Thank you author for such a sweet story.
I love the cover, synopsis, very very eye-catching and beautiful. The first chapter is a bit lengthy and we all love long chapters. This book is worth reading. The book has the potential to hook readers. So far I'm loving this story. Hope the Author continue to provide chapters.
It's good and refreshing. Do update daily. [img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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It's a lovely story. I especially like the plotline, which isn't that far away from being realistic, and it's not cliché. The characterization was nicely done, as the characters' traits and behaviors are too human and relatable. The story development was good, and so was the world background. I couldn't say much about the writing style since it was well-written. There were only a few minor errors at some parts as it was still good and doesn't affect the story that much. I also admire the Author for keeping up a stable update of chapters. I wish you the best of luck, Author!
good novel ................................................................................................................................................................................................
A refreshing plot line with romance between a teacher and a singer🤩. The details of the story are described in a well manner especially the family setting. I love the stories where authors try to take the families also along with the main couple lives. Do check this story and enjoy this lovely romantic story. All the best author for this contest😘. Saranghae❤️
It is rare to come across with a love story with a realistic plot. At any point of your life you might've seen a couple like Derek and Taaliyah- childhood sweethearts and how their love blooms. But what makes this story different from others? the relatable scenarios. The school life, friends and family, everything feels relatable. The author did a great job in portraying the emotions of the main leads without any fail. The world build-up and the supporting characters arcs are well written and I must say that, this book got a way to attract the reader's attention. Kudos to author for coming up with a refreshing idea. I am rooting for you, Hwaiting 👍❤️❤️❤️