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Interesting RPG sort of system story. Apocalyptic planet. Why doesn't everyone have a system. A beautiful mage, unthinking (a little) mech hero. Poor farming villagers. Atlantis, or as half a dozen other fantasy/sci fi godly cities.
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Has potential. It is quite early to make a review since there is only 13 chapters but the author needs learns to write better and just update more. Besides that I like his creativity. The story is really interesting if you think of the other possibilities for the story besides what it might have originally intended. Maybe I am hyping the story up to much but again it has potential
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact kenreview@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
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Interesting RPG sort of system story. Apocalyptic planet. Why doesn't everyone have a system. A beautiful mage, unthinking (a little) mech hero. Poor farming villagers. Atlantis, or as half a dozen other fantasy/sci fi godly cities.
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Has potential. It is quite early to make a review since there is only 13 chapters but the author needs learns to write better and just update more. Besides that I like his creativity. The story is really interesting if you think of the other possibilities for the story besides what it might have originally intended. Maybe I am hyping the story up to much but again it has potential