My third life: Mass Effect Gamer Edition

LV 4

Jazpex

upon making this review there are only 5 chapters available Writing quality: writing is really good the only things that need improving are some spellings and some forgotten words Story development: as of chapter 5 the story has had good development its not too slow to feel like its dragging itself or too fast like its just running as fast as it can Character design: without out spoiling the story much i like the mc and what he is building and the cast of oc's is pretty bland character wise except for one wich is our good doctor Updating stability: writer of this fanfic has other stories that have no chapters at all and that makes me little skeptical about him continuing this after sometime if no one reads this as i myself really like this book and cant wait to read more World backround: the world backround is really good as the world it takes place in is the mass effect universe wich is vast and rich with all kinds of stories Reviewer's final notes: this is my second favorite mass effect story in here and i really hope it doesnt get dropped as i cant wait what happends next in the story