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A Gem, i would place this novel with Lord of mysterious simply based on potential, the characters arent cutouts they make rational and irrational decisions that fit there character Im very happy that a new original has found its way to the top Pros Potential for the story to go anywhere Origional idea that has a unique spin on an monster system Stable uploads Im not able to guess the plot or what will happen next Cons I need more chapters and the chapters fly by due to this Give it a try, its intriguing where the story is progressing with little predictables that are a common turn off for the system oriented genre
I genuinely love the concept behind this, and the story in general. The reason for the 4-stars instead of 5, however, is the author's lack of proper punctuation. There are a great deal of run on sentences, and not nearly enough punctuation to even everything out. It's like the difference between saying "Let's go eat Grandma!" and "Let's go eat, Grandma!" As far as I'm concerned, the errors severely break the immersion, to the point where this story is more of a "sometimes" story, rather than an "all the time" story. Other than that, though, I love it :)
Was hooked from the very beginning, having laughs and a few emotional moments.
I kept hearing this book on different ADS. I started listening to it on a different app. But the cost of listening to it was way too high. So I started to look forward elsewhere. It's a little bit cheaper on this app. So far. I'm just way too addicted and I need to finish this story. I'm already a hundred and forty chapters in and I need to know the rest!!!
This is the 1st book I have purchased from this app. The story line has kept me on the edge of my seat so far. Just wish that I didn't have to spend so money in order to read a good book..
So i haven’t read the entirety of the other spinoff stories from the author but i hard a lot on how they’re all interconnected and that warrants a high rating for world background. The points taken from that were definitely from the end of the story where it felt like the author was lazing off on describing the world and environment around them. There would be mentions of how there was an entire new universe but we could never really understand the scope of how big some settings were.
If you enjoy novels that jump around with multiple points of view and go back in time with a long stretch without anything to do with the main character this book is for you. I really enjoyed the main character’s storyline but there was too much back and forth with characters POV that I didn’t care about. Had to put it down.
it was really good at the start but if got more irrating as the story goes on has Quinn never matures in any way for the longest of time and he get all the prize and title only for those responsible to be pushed on other and get credited for it and don't like how forced the romance get after a death of a certain character and they try to force sexual thing in the story just for it and to start forcing sexual on said female character even though it doesn't fit there personally in a succubus to justify it
repetitive, OP character- No depth, no exiting stories or personalities. I dropped it after several thousand pages in. Seemed pointless to me to continue. It is btw. the same with the other novel from this author- it is the same all over. I do not get the high rating. This is not great work. It is mediocre at best.
Writing this review at 570, I don't know if I can continue reading this book, someone please give me the strength to keep reading, also please tell me Vorden doesn't get written out of the story as it looks like in the character popularity stuff. someone give me strength to keep reading via telling me the white knightery ending at some point, and don't say im wrong about the knighting chapter 570
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loved it Quinn is my favorite person in the world to read about he's so interesting of a person I hope to read more of him every day
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absolutely awesome! I love the story line, the characters development and its well written.you'll should check out 'rise of the royal blue jaoji-iheassai sword. ' it's obsessive !
Awesome and very unique story, especially with vampires and zombies. Interesting characters. Would like to see this as anime or movie series. [img=fp][img=coins]
this is an amazing story ..the writer has done a great job at everything he did..m
just go ahead and read this book it's the best yet totally deserves its rating
The best of the best that I can't find the word to define. JKS is a monster! Much love to Quinn and Sil.
This novel is the best novel i have ever read , there is no comparison of other novels to this novel's story . I thanks the author of this book for writing such an amazing novel. but I want to know that is this story ended or will carry on . please tell what will happen after ch 2545
Honestly at first I thought it was an alright book, but after reading it it was far better then I thought it would be and can’t wait to read more from this author
After about 3 weeks of 3-4 hour reading each night, I finished the novel as a means to just combine three of my childhood favorite story topics. I grew up with shows like Buffy the Vampire Slayer and Angel, was at one point a game tester, and for the last few years, until recently, I was a computer teacher and tutor. This story off the get-go spoke to me as I began reading it. Writing Quality: As a former teacher, I can't help, but point out the grammatical and spelling errors throughout the book, but they aren't egregious. The point is still found in the story presented. Stability of Updates: I wasn't around for most of the initial run but as someone has done some writing in the past... I know it's no easy task to write over 2000 chapters continuously and consciously. Story Development: This was the most trouble I had with the story, but maybe that's because I'm a major DnD player who builds dynamic worlds. Overall early on and even into the middle chapters the story had moments of downtime... but once I hit the final saga especially right at the end of the arc that led into the final arc... I remembered vividly becoming angry because I just wanted the MC to have sometime with their found family and friends before rushing off to fight the end boss. Character focus for people other than the MC towards the end felt disappointing too. The ending, for me, was heartbreaking... Even in the end the MC wasn't able to enjoy the happy life he had fought so hard to make his. Character Design: I loved the different explanations of the Vampire/Demon/Creature breakdowns. Towards the end I was sad when several characters were made just to have somebody to throw away... and then the MC didn't have enough time to focus on the lives that were sacrificed for him. The descriptions for each character could have been a bit more in depth in the later chapters, but early on I felt what most of the characters looked like. World Background: The Multiverse is expansive and things were happening that weren't just from the MC's point of view, that takes a lot of skill to see things from multiple perspectives. Again most of my harsh rating is mostly due to last saga of the book, no real description of the places the MC visits past losing to his ancestor felt fleshed out enough. I don't want to spoil the final arc for those still reading either, but the ending just felt entirely too rushed even from the prespective of the multiverse.
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So far I have been loving this book. I read through all that was out in an afternoon. My blood was boiling at the end, asking for mooooaaaarrrrr. I literally have been looking for a vampire book just like this for so long. The way the system works, the way the character has embraced, but not been consumed by his vampirism, I’m fucking hooked. I love it. Okay so, rant over, actual review time. If you want a book that has strong potential to last up to the 1000’s of chapters without being boring through most of it? This is it. You been looking for an actually solid vampire book that isn’t about “boo hoo I’m a vampire” or “ **** I hate vampires let’s kill em” and actually has threshed out intentions behind actions, this is the one. The big upside, is that like other good authors, when the author realizes that he might have made a ****y wucky and made the next part of the book too hard for the character unintentionally , he gives the character a bit of plot armor the actually makes sense instead of a ****ty glaring armor. And when the author actually plans to make it hard for the character? Bam! Boi get slapped and stands back up. This is the book for you. You disagree? Your wrong. It’s for you. 🩸 🩸 🩸
Reveal Spoiler A Gem, i would place this novel with Lord of mysterious simply based on potential, the characters arent cutouts they make rational and irrational decisions that fit there character Im very happy that a new original has found its way to the top Pros Potential for the story to go anywhere Origional idea that has a unique spin on an monster system Stable uploads Im not able to guess the plot or what will happen next Cons I need more chapters and the chapters fly by due to this Give it a try, its intriguing where the story is progressing with little predictables that are a common turn off for the system oriented genre
I genuinely love the concept behind this, and the story in general. The reason for the 4-stars instead of 5, however, is the author's lack of proper punctuation. There are a great deal of run on sentences, and not nearly enough punctuation to even everything out. It's like the difference between saying "Let's go eat Grandma!" and "Let's go eat, Grandma!" As far as I'm concerned, the errors severely break the immersion, to the point where this story is more of a "sometimes" story, rather than an "all the time" story. Other than that, though, I love it :)
Was hooked from the very beginning, having laughs and a few emotional moments.
I kept hearing this book on different ADS. I started listening to it on a different app. But the cost of listening to it was way too high. So I started to look forward elsewhere. It's a little bit cheaper on this app. So far. I'm just way too addicted and I need to finish this story. I'm already a hundred and forty chapters in and I need to know the rest!!!
This is the 1st book I have purchased from this app. The story line has kept me on the edge of my seat so far. Just wish that I didn't have to spend so money in order to read a good book..
So i haven’t read the entirety of the other spinoff stories from the author but i hard a lot on how they’re all interconnected and that warrants a high rating for world background. The points taken from that were definitely from the end of the story where it felt like the author was lazing off on describing the world and environment around them. There would be mentions of how there was an entire new universe but we could never really understand the scope of how big some settings were.
If you enjoy novels that jump around with multiple points of view and go back in time with a long stretch without anything to do with the main character this book is for you. I really enjoyed the main character’s storyline but there was too much back and forth with characters POV that I didn’t care about. Had to put it down.
it was really good at the start but if got more irrating as the story goes on has Quinn never matures in any way for the longest of time and he get all the prize and title only for those responsible to be pushed on other and get credited for it and don't like how forced the romance get after a death of a certain character and they try to force sexual thing in the story just for it and to start forcing sexual on said female character even though it doesn't fit there personally in a succubus to justify it
repetitive, OP character- No depth, no exiting stories or personalities. I dropped it after several thousand pages in. Seemed pointless to me to continue. It is btw. the same with the other novel from this author- it is the same all over. I do not get the high rating. This is not great work. It is mediocre at best.
Writing this review at 570, I don't know if I can continue reading this book, someone please give me the strength to keep reading, also please tell me Vorden doesn't get written out of the story as it looks like in the character popularity stuff. someone give me strength to keep reading via telling me the white knightery ending at some point, and don't say im wrong about the knighting chapter 570
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absolutely awesome! I love the story line, the characters development and its well written.you'll should check out 'rise of the royal blue jaoji-iheassai sword. ' it's obsessive !
Awesome and very unique story, especially with vampires and zombies. Interesting characters. Would like to see this as anime or movie series. [img=fp][img=coins]
this is an amazing story ..the writer has done a great job at everything he did..m
just go ahead and read this book it's the best yet totally deserves its rating
The best of the best that I can't find the word to define. JKS is a monster! Much love to Quinn and Sil.
This novel is the best novel i have ever read , there is no comparison of other novels to this novel's story . I thanks the author of this book for writing such an amazing novel. but I want to know that is this story ended or will carry on . please tell what will happen after ch 2545
Honestly at first I thought it was an alright book, but after reading it it was far better then I thought it would be and can’t wait to read more from this author
After about 3 weeks of 3-4 hour reading each night, I finished the novel as a means to just combine three of my childhood favorite story topics. I grew up with shows like Buffy the Vampire Slayer and Angel, was at one point a game tester, and for the last few years, until recently, I was a computer teacher and tutor. This story off the get-go spoke to me as I began reading it. Writing Quality: As a former teacher, I can't help, but point out the grammatical and spelling errors throughout the book, but they aren't egregious. The point is still found in the story presented. Stability of Updates: I wasn't around for most of the initial run but as someone has done some writing in the past... I know it's no easy task to write over 2000 chapters continuously and consciously. Story Development: This was the most trouble I had with the story, but maybe that's because I'm a major DnD player who builds dynamic worlds. Overall early on and even into the middle chapters the story had moments of downtime... but once I hit the final saga especially right at the end of the arc that led into the final arc... I remembered vividly becoming angry because I just wanted the MC to have sometime with their found family and friends before rushing off to fight the end boss. Character focus for people other than the MC towards the end felt disappointing too. The ending, for me, was heartbreaking... Even in the end the MC wasn't able to enjoy the happy life he had fought so hard to make his. Character Design: I loved the different explanations of the Vampire/Demon/Creature breakdowns. Towards the end I was sad when several characters were made just to have somebody to throw away... and then the MC didn't have enough time to focus on the lives that were sacrificed for him. The descriptions for each character could have been a bit more in depth in the later chapters, but early on I felt what most of the characters looked like. World Background: The Multiverse is expansive and things were happening that weren't just from the MC's point of view, that takes a lot of skill to see things from multiple perspectives. Again most of my harsh rating is mostly due to last saga of the book, no real description of the places the MC visits past losing to his ancestor felt fleshed out enough. I don't want to spoil the final arc for those still reading either, but the ending just felt entirely too rushed even from the prespective of the multiverse.
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So far I have been loving this book. I read through all that was out in an afternoon. My blood was boiling at the end, asking for mooooaaaarrrrr. I literally have been looking for a vampire book just like this for so long. The way the system works, the way the character has embraced, but not been consumed by his vampirism, I’m fucking hooked. I love it. Okay so, rant over, actual review time. If you want a book that has strong potential to last up to the 1000’s of chapters without being boring through most of it? This is it. You been looking for an actually solid vampire book that isn’t about “boo hoo I’m a vampire” or “ **** I hate vampires let’s kill em” and actually has threshed out intentions behind actions, this is the one. The big upside, is that like other good authors, when the author realizes that he might have made a ****y wucky and made the next part of the book too hard for the character unintentionally , he gives the character a bit of plot armor the actually makes sense instead of a ****ty glaring armor. And when the author actually plans to make it hard for the character? Bam! Boi get slapped and stands back up. This is the book for you. You disagree? Your wrong. It’s for you. 🩸 🩸 🩸
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