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Chapter 2: Chapter 2: "Something Seems to be Wrong with the System"

As hours passed, and Smoke, now more accustomed to the quirks of the "Pirate's Legacy System" (PLS), began to sense a disturbance in its functions.

Smoke: Hey, PLS, can you provide me with some skills, Devil Fruits, or templates? I need to be ready for whatever this world throws at me.

PLS: {I'm sorry, Host. Something seems to be blocking my channel to the One Piece World at the moment. I cannot provide you with anything.}

Smoke: What do you mean? You were working just fine before. And wait, what do you mean by the channel to the One Piece world? Aren't we in the One Piece world?

PLS: {I am not sure in which world we are, Host, but don't worry. It's a temporary issue. I assure you, I'm working to resolve it.}

Smoke lets the information sink in. Panic begins to creep into his voice.

Smoke: Temporary? This system is crashing, isn't it? What's happening?

PLS: {No, Host. It's not a crash. There's a disruption, but it's manageable. I just can't access certain functions right now.}

Despite PLS's reassurance, Smoke grumbles internally, fearing the worst. The island, once a place of training and mystery, now feels like an isolated prison.

Smoke: (grumbling) Temporary, my foot. What if I'm stuck here forever? What if I can't become the Pirate King because of this glitchy system?

PLS: {Host, please calm down. Panicking won't solve anything. Let me provide you with a solution suitable for the current situation.}

Smoke, though still uneasy, nods reluctantly.

Smoke: Fine, what's the solution?

PLS: {For now, I can offer you a basic level exercise routine used by the Navy. It's a comprehensive training method suitable for remodeling your body to face future challenges.}

Smoke: Navy? I'm supposed to be a pirate, not a marine.

PLS: {Think of it as a foundation, Host. This training will make your body adaptable to various situations, a crucial aspect for a future Pirate King.}

Reluctantly, Smoke agrees. The next few days are filled with grueling body conditioning exercises. Each morning, as the sun rises over the horizon, Smoke engages in intense workouts guided by the holographic projections of PLS. The rhythmic sounds of his punches and kicks echo through the lush forest, intertwining with the natural symphony of the island.

In these six months, Smoke faces various difficulties. The island's terrain becomes both an ally and an adversary. Rocky cliffs, dense jungles, and unpredictable weather test his endurance and adaptability. The absence of Devil Fruit abilities or advanced combat skills pushes him to rely on his innate strength and agility.

PLS: {Host, face the challenges. Adapt and overcome. This training is not just about physical strength; it's about resilience and resourcefulness.}

Smoke, though initially frustrated, learns to appreciate the simplicity of the training. His muscles, once frail, begin to show signs of refinement. The grumbles are replaced by focused determination.

As the six months pass, Smoke stands on the same shore where he first woke up. His physique has transformed, and the island's mysteries are no longer a threat but a challenge to be conquered.

Smoke: I never thought basic Navy exercises would get me this far.

PLS: {Sometimes, simplicity is the key, Host. You've grown stronger. Now, let's resume our journey to becoming the Strong.}

With newfound strength and determination, Smoke looks at the horizon, ready to face whatever challenges the One Piece World has in store for him. The disrupted connection with the system becomes a mere hiccup in the grand adventure that lies ahead.

The sun was setting on the horizon, casting an orange glow over the tranquil island. Smoke, after hours of intense training, sat by the shore, catching his breath. As he wiped the sweat from his brow, a nagging thought lingered in his mind.

Smoke: Hey, PLS, something feels off. I've been training hard, but I don't sense any improvement these past few weeks. It's as if no matter what I do, my body won't grow anymore. What's happening?

PLS: {Host, the disturbance I mentioned earlier is affecting your training. The connection to the One Piece World remains blocked, inhibiting the effectiveness of the exercises.}

Smoke's eyes narrowed.

Smoke: So, all this effort is in vain?

PLS: {Not in vain, Host. The training still benefits your physical condition, but it's not as effective as it could be. I'm working to resolve the issue, but it might take some time.}

Smoke sighed, frustration evident in his voice.

Smoke: A Strong man can't afford wasted time. I need to figure things out now.

PLS: {I understand your concern, Host. Let me provide you with the best alternative in the meantime.}

Smoke, though skeptical, nodded for PLS to continue.

PLS: {I have been trying to connect although unsuccessful. There are some results. I have obtained a Devil fruit, and I think it might give you that push to break through.}

Smoke: Really?? Why haven't you told me about it before?

PLS: {Host, you should look at yourself now. If not for the panic and helplessness, would you have worked so hard? Now you have a focused mind, and with your mentality, you won't shy away from hard work anymore. Tell me, host, if I told you before, would you have worked so hard? Forged your mind?}

Smoke: I guess not as much… but I would have… maybe!?

Smoke: So what's the Devil fruit?

PLS: {Human-Human Fruit, Model: Daibutsu}

Smoke: Huh!??? NO FREAKING WAY! The fruit of marine marshal SENGOKU?? Is he dead? Am I in a different timeline? Or AM I IN AN ENTIRELY DIFFERENT WORLD?

PLS: {I think Host, we should set sail to explore this world. I think something on this island seems to be blocking me.}

Smoke: OKAY LET'S GO anyway. I am bored with this island already. There seems to be nothing here—rocks, forest, and animals!! I need to see HUMAN CIVILIZATION NOW…

Smoke: But wait, how do I get off this island?? I don't have navigation skills. Heck, I don't even have a BOAT!!!

PLS: {Worry not, host. As a comprehensive system, although most of my abilities seem to be restricted, I can provide you with basic raft-building knowledge and basic navigation knowledge.}

Smoke: Great, share it with me.

So, the boy starts building a raft according to system instructions and prepares to set sail on the sea, excited to see what the future awaits him. Two days later, after checking the raft, making sure everything was ready, Smoke looks back at the island one last time.

Smoke: Taking a Deep Breath LET'S SET SAIL…

The moon hung in the inky sky, casting a gentle glow upon the vast ocean as Smoke set sail into the unknown. The rhythmic sound of waves became his companion, and the sea breeze carried a promise of undiscovered lands.

Smoke: (whispering to himself) Here's to a new adventure. 

As the raft glided through the waves, the island disappeared on the horizon, becoming a mere memory of Smoke's transformative journey. The stars above bore witness to a young man, fueled by determination and curiosity, navigating the sea of uncertainties in pursuit of his destiny.


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