Naruto: Reborn as Konoha’s Invisible Assassin [UPDATED]

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Caedus_Aldric

so small mistakes that canbbe rectified easily like flying thunder raijin is not namikaze clan specialty, saying even after three years he is not chunin is a bit of a stretch since he is under jiraya sensei i mean he might not be a genius but cmon not even a chunin other than that the fanfic is good a solid 3/5 nothing less,nothing more

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Rimuru_Tempest_6699

Mano tôp continua assim!!! Vc já pensou em criar uma FanFiction onde o Naruto é o homem Aranha do Narutovesro? Ou é filho da Capitãn Marvel ou é um clone dela sem que ela sabia . Ou um onde ele é filho da Jean Gray!?

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rifael_irdhannn

"As a consistent reader and fanfiction critic (with the disclaimer that I will praise good work and critique what falls short), I feel this fanfic, despite having an interesting premise, has fallen into the trap of shallow narration. The early Academy arc was quite good; conversations flowed well, the atmosphere felt harmonious, and the MC's interactions with canon characters were convincing. However, a flaw was apparent from the start, as the author failed to explain the system's mechanics and how the MC's power increased, leading to a sudden OP leap in ability when fighting Kakashi (though this is somewhat excusable). The peak failure of the story occurs after graduation, especially when the MC is placed on the elite team with Minato, Kushina, and Jiraiya—an extraordinary setup that is completely wasted. The missions become a series of stiff, perfunctory narratives lacking essential details; the author neglects to describe vital elements of shinobi life, such as: how the MC conducts rigorous training, the process of learning new jutsus (especially from Jiraiya, including deep experience and knowledge of Fuinjutsu or sealing techniques), mission income allocation, total finances, the purchase process for shinobi tools, or even simple personal interactions with his mother, Kushina. This vagueness leaves the MC's jutsus unclear and makes the pacing feel extremely slow. Up until the latest chapter, the story only presents empty narration without any feel, indicating that the author is confused about the direction of the plot. The author urgently needs to make fundamental improvements by using The Wind Calamity as a detailed reference for world-building, stopping the vague time skips, and adding logical depth to every plot progression."

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Parthiban_G

The fic seems to be a whole package. The MC is humorous with a growth type system. Looking forward to seeing how it develops.

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Schneeeee

I will change the ratings after you add more chapters, keep up the good work with this ff and your other ff especially the Madara one I really like that one

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Samin_Samin_0233

Tbh this is a good read.....a really good read. Characters feel natural and not emotionless robots. Good pacing and everything. The story's also developing naturally. As for complaints its just minor ones. Like lack of Lock's drip collection. And all that jazz. All in all you are doing a great job just please don't make him Madara/Hashirama level out of nowhere.

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Daoist8JP0t9

I love that there are dota elements here. Thank you author!

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Darkiling

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Darkiling

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Darkiling

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mohi_ahm

This is a good read.....an excellent read. Characters feel natural and not emotionless robots. Good Character Design and everything. The story's also developing naturally.

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sacrificium

A great Naruto Fan-Fic highly recommend. Not overly saturated with cliche plot. Has a unique flow. Keep up the good work. Greatly looking forward to more chapters.

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Darkiling

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Darkiling

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TywadSH

as of c24 it’s pretty good.

LV 1

Nowelanw

So, the idea was good, but the execution was poor. Lots of errors, inconsistencies, non-canonical stuff. I really thought and hoped the quality would improve, but it just kept declining, and I couldn't take it anymore and quit after reading 40+ chapters. I'll list a few points; this will be a spoiler, I warned you. So, in the graduation exam, Kakashi defeats a Chunin (and here in the author's world, the village only produces 6 Chunin a year, imagine, the elite among the elite). At the time, Kakashi and the MC were equal, meaning if Kakashi defeated the Chunin, then the MC is also at Chunin level. But then, two years later, he's still a ginin, and his strength has also regressed, so he's unsure of himself against genin in direct combat, especially considering he was under the guidance of a Kage-level shinobi. The author, in an attempt not to belittle the MC, went so far that it was impossible to read this nonsense. I don't recommend reading this. People usually read fanfiction to relieve stress, basically for pleasure, but here you'll find nothing but stress and a lowered IQ.

I just finished catching up, and wow, your storytelling is incredibly vivid. The pacing, the way emotions are described, and the detail in every scene made it feel like I was watching it unfold rather than just reading. The characters have such distinct personalities, and the world-building is so clear that I could easily imagine it as a webtoon or graphic novel. Honestly, the visual energy in your writing makes it perfect for that kind of adaptation. I’d absolutely love to see this story brought to life through art someday!