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Chapter 16: A missing teammate

It took a whole night of clones working to write the first book "Avatar: The Last Airbender".

(okay, so... what now? who will read this?).

Naruto wonders, flipping through what ha had written, the plot was the same, and he wasn't planning on changing it, but the backstory was a little different.

A whole new continent where there are far more people who use chakra but differently, they don't need hand seals, and there ware only four elements with supplements on the side.

[you don't have friends do you?].

Naruto could only sigh at this, he wasn't friends with anyone outside of his team, sure he talked to some but he wouldn't go to them for something like moving the couch.

So in the end, he decided to go to the third Hokage, he had a grandson after all.

as he was walking through the village, his thoughts trailed off to his Teammate, the male one.

(God, he's useless, even when he's male, I thought he would at least train).

with a sigh, he refocused on the road in front.

not even saying anything to the receptionist, he opens the door and barges in, hand in a two figured salute.

"Yo! I'm back... With a book".

"..."

"..."

"..."

three people just looked at him with blank expressions, seven if he counted ANBU that thought that they were masking their presence.

hearing no answer, he decides to pay attention to the other two that are there with him.

one he knew very well, it was Orochimaru, while the other he never met personally, but knew him nonetheless.

"...Ah, it's the pervert".

the blonde says absently, causing two to snicker and one to deadpan at him.

"For your information, My name is Jiraya, the toad sage, and I'm no pervert.... I am a Super Pervert!".

this came from a giant of a man, with waist-long white hair that was tied in a low ponytail, was wearing a red kimono top, gray pants and... ware those elevated sandals, no those ware elevated wooden slippers.

"Okay, anyway, I wrote this children's book, since you have a grandson and all, could he read it and give me some feedback?".

Jiraya just face faults at how easily he was dismissed, while Orochimaru is more interested in the book the troubles of his teammate.

"...Okay naruto, Will do, Do you mind if I read it?".

the third Hokage asks, interested in what the whiskered Genin, getting a nod in response, he flips to the first page and reads the first few lines, Jiraya also walks around the table to read over the old man's shoulder.

"Naruto, I heard what you did...".

"..."

The blonde stood there silently as he waited for his master to continue.

"...Good job".

Naruto sweatdropped, not expecting praise for committing mass murder.

"uuh... Thanks?".

Orochimaru nodded and handed him a book named "Chakra: limitless possibilities".

(Weird name but okay... it was even written by him... Hmmm).

he was curious but sealed the book in one of his speaking scrolls in his vest pocket.

"Master, I may need your help with something".

Orochimaru raised an eyebrow, he never asked for help, never complained, training him was like copying from one book to another, so helping him with his problem should be interesting for him.

"Alright, go to Traning ground twelve, I'll finish up and meet you there".

___

It was a few days after that incident and Satsuki had missed the training for three days in a row.

and now he was going to the Uchiha compound to check on her and he was pretty sure he wouldn't get easy access.

he had to suppress a chuckle at that, even if he was denied access, there was always a way for a ninja, and that went double for him.

walking up to the front gates, he received a Sharingan reinforced glare from the two guards.

"... I'm here to visit my teammate Satsuki Uchiha".

The two guards just kept glaring at him for a few seconds pissing him off.

"She's not feeling well, come back at a later date".

said the one on the left, and then started ignoring him, too bad he missed the smile that spread on his face before he turned and walked away.

only to turn the corner and jump over the wall.

(heh, plebs).

taking the roofs, while channeling chakra to his legs, surprising the sound of his footsteps, he managed to reach the clan heads house, which was in the middle of the district... how convenient.

(no guards inside the district, what are they? Idiots?).

Naruto thought with a sweatdrop, he had not seen any patrol inside, so if someone had got past the front gate guards, he would not be stopped.

[...you should have expected this, they're the all-mighty Uchiha, a good thing they don't act as they did in some of those fanfictions you have read, then it would be a disaster].

Naruto could only agree if they started yelling their clan name for the world to hear would be... unpleasant.

finally reaching the door, he knocked and waited for it to open, sure he could sneak into Satsukis's room, but that would make him seem like a pervert.

The door opening snapped him out of his thoughts, and the door was opened by an... Older Satsuki?

(...who?).

"How can I help you?".

said the black-haired woman, looking down on him with a raised eyebrow, Literally.

"I'm here to check on Satsuki, she hasn't come to team training for a while now".

Narutos response got the woman's other brow to join its twin.

"Oh, it's nice of you to check up on my little sister, come in".

(...)

"..."

[hey! snap out of it].

(...)

"..."

[Naruto.exe has stopped working].

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(AN: lol, im not going to reveal what he needed help with until later, *queue the evil laugh*. have fun finding out what he came up with. PS: it's not a move from anime, came up with some BS myself).


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