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Luna10
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Daoist612860

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Daoist612860

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Luna10
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Daoist612860

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sweetpea1972

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3yr
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sweetpea1972

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3yr
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EMmA101
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I reviewed this novel five months ago. I am here to tell you that this is a very, very good read. The author usually updates once a week. The only negative, and I mean the only negative, is the grammatical errors. The author has other novels, anyone who likes this novel should check them out. So, the rating is 4.4 because: Grammer and updating once a week.

3yr
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sweetpea1972

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3yr
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sweetpea1972

This is such a good novel with ,ive.ly characters. Just one thing is the update is slow but so worth it when a new chapter appears. 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁

3yr
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EMmA101
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I really like this novel. It is well thought out. There is depth to the characters that makes me want to root for them, especially the female lead. The only big negative is the slooooow updates.

3yr
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sweetpea1972

This author has a amazing gem for a novel. It's not often you read something like this. This book is well worth the read. 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁

4yr
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MokouFriedChicken

Beyond the occasional grammar hiccups,the story is fairly servicable. A more realistic take on a well explored genre, this story has the potential to go really far. I'll be keeping an eye on this as it develops.

4yr
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Luna10
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I like the female lead because even though she time travel she seems to be loyal or something that can't heal overnight so it's give our ML to give hope to woo our FL back

4yr
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BaeVida
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It is really a nice story. Just starting, the storyline is good. The first chapter is captivating and so touching, after giving everyone your very best, you were treated like an old doll that needs to be discarded. Good one author, would definitely add to my library. There are a few grammatical errors but I know you'd work on it. U get a 5 star

4yr
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Luna10
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Lots of love love πŸ‘‘πŸ‘˜β˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜β˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜β˜ 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘 ☁😘😘😘😘😘☁ ☁☁😘😘😘☁☁ ☁☁☁😘☁☁☁ β˜πŸ’ŸπŸ’Ÿβ˜πŸ’ŸπŸ’Ÿβ˜ πŸ’ŸπŸ’ŸπŸ’ŸπŸ’ŸπŸ’ŸπŸ’ŸπŸ’Ÿ πŸ’ŸπŸ’ŸπŸ’ŸπŸ’ŸπŸ’ŸπŸ’ŸπŸ’Ÿ β˜πŸ’ŸπŸ’ŸπŸ’ŸπŸ’ŸπŸ’Ÿβ˜ β˜β˜πŸ’ŸπŸ’ŸπŸ’Ÿβ˜β˜ β˜β˜β˜πŸ’Ÿβ˜β˜β˜ ✨🌸🌸✨🌸🌸✨ 🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸 🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸 ✨🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸✨ ✨✨🌸🌸🌸✨✨ ✨✨✨🌸✨✨✨

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sweetpea1972

Love love love πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“

4yr
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sweetpea1972

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4yr
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Tejanankar

It is very good story. I'm totally loved this story. 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😘😘😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍 😘😘😘😘

4yr
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Tejanankar

It is really nice story. There are some grammatical mistakes. There is confusion between sentences. But overall story is really interesting. I daily wait for updates.

4yr
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sweetpea1972

A totally different view on transmigration novel. I love the female lead and how she just wants a quiet life and the twist the author did when she went back. I really didn't expect a lot of what's happening. A must read.

4yr
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sweetpea1972

This is a really cute story. πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„

4yr
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POTATOESAREBAE

This is so well written with an amazing story line, so I can’t wait for more chapters to be released xx πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ’—πŸ’ž Author~~ about those chapters...... HuRrY Up ThIs ShAmELeSs ReAdEr, CaN’t WaiT AnY LoNgEr 😭😭

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JamonIberico

Despite a few grammar mistakes and messed up sentences, I kept reading it in one go. Even though it became frustrating a few times due to me not being able to figure out the meanings. But would I bother complaining about a story that did not captivate me ? Rethorical question I believe. Its overall charm outshines any flaws I noticed so far, and that is worth the 5 stars I gave it. :)

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EMmA101
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This is really a well thought out story. The only negative is the grammar and spelling. I hope the author will continue and soon get an editor. πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ‘πŸ‘

4yr
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Luna10
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Daoist612860

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Daoist612860

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Luna10
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Daoist612860

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sweetpea1972

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3yr
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sweetpea1972

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3yr
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EMmA101
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I reviewed this novel five months ago. I am here to tell you that this is a very, very good read. The author usually updates once a week. The only negative, and I mean the only negative, is the grammatical errors. The author has other novels, anyone who likes this novel should check them out. So, the rating is 4.4 because: Grammer and updating once a week.

3yr
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sweetpea1972

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3yr
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sweetpea1972

This is such a good novel with ,ive.ly characters. Just one thing is the update is slow but so worth it when a new chapter appears. 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁

3yr
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EMmA101
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I really like this novel. It is well thought out. There is depth to the characters that makes me want to root for them, especially the female lead. The only big negative is the slooooow updates.

3yr
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sweetpea1972

This author has a amazing gem for a novel. It's not often you read something like this. This book is well worth the read. 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁

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MokouFriedChicken

Beyond the occasional grammar hiccups,the story is fairly servicable. A more realistic take on a well explored genre, this story has the potential to go really far. I'll be keeping an eye on this as it develops.

4yr
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Luna10
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I like the female lead because even though she time travel she seems to be loyal or something that can't heal overnight so it's give our ML to give hope to woo our FL back

4yr
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BaeVida
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It is really a nice story. Just starting, the storyline is good. The first chapter is captivating and so touching, after giving everyone your very best, you were treated like an old doll that needs to be discarded. Good one author, would definitely add to my library. There are a few grammatical errors but I know you'd work on it. U get a 5 star

4yr
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Luna10
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Lots of love love πŸ‘‘πŸ‘˜β˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜β˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜β˜ 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘 ☁😘😘😘😘😘☁ ☁☁😘😘😘☁☁ ☁☁☁😘☁☁☁ β˜πŸ’ŸπŸ’Ÿβ˜πŸ’ŸπŸ’Ÿβ˜ πŸ’ŸπŸ’ŸπŸ’ŸπŸ’ŸπŸ’ŸπŸ’ŸπŸ’Ÿ πŸ’ŸπŸ’ŸπŸ’ŸπŸ’ŸπŸ’ŸπŸ’ŸπŸ’Ÿ β˜πŸ’ŸπŸ’ŸπŸ’ŸπŸ’ŸπŸ’Ÿβ˜ β˜β˜πŸ’ŸπŸ’ŸπŸ’Ÿβ˜β˜ β˜β˜β˜πŸ’Ÿβ˜β˜β˜ ✨🌸🌸✨🌸🌸✨ 🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸 🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸 ✨🌸🌸🌸🌸🌸✨ ✨✨🌸🌸🌸✨✨ ✨✨✨🌸✨✨✨

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sweetpea1972

Love love love πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“

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sweetpea1972

πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’¨πŸ’¨πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’¨πŸ’¨πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’

4yr
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Tejanankar

It is very good story. I'm totally loved this story. 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😘😘😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍 😘😘😘😘

4yr
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Tejanankar

It is really nice story. There are some grammatical mistakes. There is confusion between sentences. But overall story is really interesting. I daily wait for updates.

4yr
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sweetpea1972

A totally different view on transmigration novel. I love the female lead and how she just wants a quiet life and the twist the author did when she went back. I really didn't expect a lot of what's happening. A must read.

4yr
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sweetpea1972

This is a really cute story. πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„

4yr
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POTATOESAREBAE

This is so well written with an amazing story line, so I can’t wait for more chapters to be released xx πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ’—πŸ’ž Author~~ about those chapters...... HuRrY Up ThIs ShAmELeSs ReAdEr, CaN’t WaiT AnY LoNgEr 😭😭

4yr
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JamonIberico

Despite a few grammar mistakes and messed up sentences, I kept reading it in one go. Even though it became frustrating a few times due to me not being able to figure out the meanings. But would I bother complaining about a story that did not captivate me ? Rethorical question I believe. Its overall charm outshines any flaws I noticed so far, and that is worth the 5 stars I gave it. :)

4yr
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EMmA101
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This is really a well thought out story. The only negative is the grammar and spelling. I hope the author will continue and soon get an editor. πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ‘πŸ‘

4yr
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