/ Urban / Not perfect enough for Love
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“Fated” that’s what you call meeting and falling in love with the same person even if they are not who they
say they are…fated, is what you call crying on the same shoulder ever year and every life time…fated is what
you call meeting after parting many times, fated is you, fated is us, fated is love, friendship, family and
even the messed up events that lead me to you...we are fated Adam.
Aziza is the home of war between the spies and Mafias. The future heirs, however, were promised to each other during their childhood to end the war. Salama, the mafia heir, marries her boss, Adam, the spy heir, and their love story begins with hate and despair.
After years of longing and fighting, they both must choose to keep their island in peace or war.
'Salama. I was told that napalm is a gut-wrenching chemical that eats the flesh away... But I'd rather drink the napalm than lose you. You're the cure to all the chemicals my father used to burn me...'
'I can not love an evil man, I wish I could cripple my heart and make it void of your memory...'
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I just recently bumped and read this story and I say this is kind of underrated with bigger potential. Well written and deserve to get a full five star! If you are looking for a story with romantic vibes, don't hesitate and start reading this now. I like this story hope that the author won't just drop it like the others. The more I read it, the more I want to finish it. Hope the author constantly update its chapter. ❤️
Great work, I love how the author gave vivid description of characters and events. The first chapter alone is enough to keep one glued to their seats. Good job author, keep it up.
as a picky reader im really enjoying this book. do continue updating, the povs are confusing so do work on that. but so far im loving it cant wait for more!
The writing quality is good with fun characters. The vocabulary is superb, I would say the novel will be interesting and I am reading it. keep it up Author.
Writing this review after reading 10 chapters. I like the story but it was a little confusing at first with regards to the introduction of the characters. I'm giving this a chance in my library for i know there's always room for improvements. I hope to read more of this novel 😊😊
Writing Quality: The writing vocabulary is good, with good command on the language to describe expressions and scenes accurately. There are several minor grammatical mistakes throughout the story. Besides that, there are inconsistencies in spacing and capitalization that can be quite distracting. I would also suggest the author to translate the Islamic terminologies such as Assalamualaikum (Peace be upon you) and such for readers not familiar with it for a better reading quality. Stability of Updates: Looking at the history of updates, it is fairly consistent. 5 stars. Story Development: I really like the difference of interest the character has and the connection of it to the past, present and future. The jump between characters can be quite confusing, changing between Nura and Zafar. I find the dual perspective interesting but it can be done better. Maybe give a subtitle before you start? For example, [Nura's POV]. Character Design: Haha, already a rebellious start in the story. I like it, it gives flavour to your characters. The actions your characters have, flashbacks and monologues all contributes to a clear idea on how the character behaves. Well done! 5 stars. World Background: I enjoyed the background of Islamic neighbourhood, the parents disapproval with art and such. However, it wasn't really fleshed on and was cut really short. It feels really one-sided. Why does the parents disapprove on that? Have they tried it, or its because solely on society's expectations? If so, how would they feel about it when she told them about it? Are there fellow artists who had the same situation? How about the biker gang? What do they do besides competing? How are their relationship with the community? Do they fear them, or just impassive? What would happen from that relationship? There are so much to explore besides the interaction between the characters.