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Kr1st3n
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Love this story!!!! I like all that I have read from this author!

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Blue_Shell

Very cute story! I was thinking it would be different based on the cover art, but it was much better than I thought it would be!

6mth
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Spinikos

Can't stop reading all of your books. Your character development is always good and the story goes at a good pace.

8mth
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erbier

every EVERY story of yours is good! idt there was any one story of yours i did not like. ur amazing

1yr
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Aduiavas

I love this story. It makes me laugh, cry both happy and sad tears and smile. Also, I would say that the second volume is the best, so much sweetness and happy tears 😭

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Sassy1997

I really loved the story, Abby coming to the novel world was a complete surprise and I lov how they tried to recreate the modern world.[img=update][img=recommend]

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Aduiavas

I love this book, as I love most of Mclorrycats books! This one took me a while to get into, as I am not normally a fan of "older days" type stories, but eventually I got hooked like I always do πŸ₯° I must say, the second part of the story was also cute, though a bit more predictable. I like how it expanded the world though πŸ™‚

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Ruby_rosie

It is a simple and very heartwarming story, I loved every characters. The grammar and writing style are very clean. Being an author myself I look up to you.

2yr
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Abigail_Capps_0679

πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’– this story was abSolutely aMazing! i love the ending after the second part was added. you are such a great author and i caNt wait to start reading another one of your stories!

2yr
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Jovi_Line

This novel is pretty good to read. The mc's personality is interesting. It's a story with royalties and the mc is a transmigrator though she doesn't have a system. But she got an advantage from the knowledge she learned when she's still on Earth. There's also politics involve cause well, it's royalties. It's expected. Fighting for the throne, betrayal, chess pieces, etc.

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2yr
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Abigail_Capps_0679

So far im loving this book! I’m on chapter 55 and loving all yje twists in the story! Im curious to see what happens to Katie next as the story continues!

2yr
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sgcuddlebug

Absolutely love the novel! I was torn when I found out what was going on, but now that I have finished it, it couldn't have been better the way it went! so in love with Mcllorycat's writing style!! I get so involved with the characters I don't want to put it down! to the point I've been reading while working!! I will have to try to pace myself on the next one! I finished this one in just a few days!!!

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Fl0wers4MiLady

This is an incredible story from start to finish. I always tend to be more critical of books I'm invested in but having only read this once it was finished, I can't think of a single fault! Main character Katie & Abbey might be a little to brilliant but it does make sense in the scope of the story. Nearly all the characters come across as real people. Please read this if you enjoy a transmitigation story

2yr
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_Tornado_

great story, I was waiting for Abby and Blais to traveled to the country where Blais got the music box from but I do feel like this ending was more suited

2yr
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MeMay
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I’m really enjoying this novel. It’s a great idea about getting a Second chance at life. Lots of funny moments. I can’t wait to see how the rest of the plot unfolds and how the story is influenced by Katie’s influence. if you like this novel, I highly recommend the author’s other stories too.

3yr
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okaykaykay

I read it when it was completed so I dont know how often it was updated but I loved the story. It did not disappoint. The author kept me guessing and wanting to read more. I love the characters, and the plot of the whole thing. It’s a fun and perfect novel for some light reading. Can’t say enough good stuff about this book!

3yr
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jd1270168

This book is fascinating! The plot is fresh and inviting. The characters are amazing. I’m so glad the author’s sister convinced her to add onto it and include more content. If this book were in print, I would probably buy a physical copy. 10/10 Would recommend!

3yr
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Sara_Wilcox

I read another of this author’s works, and loved it, so I checked out her other works. I LOVE this book! The cheeky title drew me in, but Katie and Al made me stay. And I adore how it switched over to... Another character’s story towards the end. This author is a true artist and pro. Thank you for this wonderful story! I look forward to re-reading it❀️

3yr
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willow13

A great read This author is consistently great with all of her novels and gives all of her characters unique voIces I recommend this and all of her books

3yr
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Michelle_Preston

I’ll admit it took a couple of chapters to reel me in but I was definately hooked. The characters are interesting and get you invested in their lives. The author came up with lots of fun scenarios that a character who knows they are in a book would have to overcome. There are a few subversions of expectations (at least mine were) and I had several moments of cheering out loud. Definately recommend!

3yr
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MochaWafer

This story was cute. Read it. Have to ask though. Why does each of your books have massive time skips at the end? I would spend more money happily to get the story that we missed.

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Lauralmarina

This book should have way more votes. it is so good. I love the characters and the story line. I was surprised at the direction the book took in the beginning. I thought she would end up falling for her brother’s friend.

3yr
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cornonthecob

I can totally get behind the FL in this story. She brings a perspective not often seen in transmigration novels and the whole story is really funny to boot!

3yr
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girrlit
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Halfway through, can't believe it took me soo long to find it. I really like the MC and her struggles with her new life, her understanding of the plot and life. It feels quite real and makes her relatable.

3yr
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Kr1st3n
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Love this story!!!! I like all that I have read from this author!

5mth
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Blue_Shell

Very cute story! I was thinking it would be different based on the cover art, but it was much better than I thought it would be!

6mth
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Spinikos

Can't stop reading all of your books. Your character development is always good and the story goes at a good pace.

8mth
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erbier

every EVERY story of yours is good! idt there was any one story of yours i did not like. ur amazing

1yr
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Aduiavas

I love this story. It makes me laugh, cry both happy and sad tears and smile. Also, I would say that the second volume is the best, so much sweetness and happy tears 😭

1yr
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DaoisttG3KuY

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1yr
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Sassy1997

I really loved the story, Abby coming to the novel world was a complete surprise and I lov how they tried to recreate the modern world.[img=update][img=recommend]

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2yr
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Aduiavas

I love this book, as I love most of Mclorrycats books! This one took me a while to get into, as I am not normally a fan of "older days" type stories, but eventually I got hooked like I always do πŸ₯° I must say, the second part of the story was also cute, though a bit more predictable. I like how it expanded the world though πŸ™‚

2yr
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Ruby_rosie

It is a simple and very heartwarming story, I loved every characters. The grammar and writing style are very clean. Being an author myself I look up to you.

2yr
View 1 Replies
Abigail_Capps_0679

πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’– this story was abSolutely aMazing! i love the ending after the second part was added. you are such a great author and i caNt wait to start reading another one of your stories!

2yr
View 0 Replies
Jovi_Line

This novel is pretty good to read. The mc's personality is interesting. It's a story with royalties and the mc is a transmigrator though she doesn't have a system. But she got an advantage from the knowledge she learned when she's still on Earth. There's also politics involve cause well, it's royalties. It's expected. Fighting for the throne, betrayal, chess pieces, etc.

2yr
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S_N_4028

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2yr
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Abigail_Capps_0679

So far im loving this book! I’m on chapter 55 and loving all yje twists in the story! Im curious to see what happens to Katie next as the story continues!

2yr
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S_N_4028

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2yr
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sgcuddlebug

Absolutely love the novel! I was torn when I found out what was going on, but now that I have finished it, it couldn't have been better the way it went! so in love with Mcllorycat's writing style!! I get so involved with the characters I don't want to put it down! to the point I've been reading while working!! I will have to try to pace myself on the next one! I finished this one in just a few days!!!

2yr
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Fl0wers4MiLady

This is an incredible story from start to finish. I always tend to be more critical of books I'm invested in but having only read this once it was finished, I can't think of a single fault! Main character Katie & Abbey might be a little to brilliant but it does make sense in the scope of the story. Nearly all the characters come across as real people. Please read this if you enjoy a transmitigation story

2yr
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_Tornado_

great story, I was waiting for Abby and Blais to traveled to the country where Blais got the music box from but I do feel like this ending was more suited

2yr
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MeMay
LV 12 Badge

I’m really enjoying this novel. It’s a great idea about getting a Second chance at life. Lots of funny moments. I can’t wait to see how the rest of the plot unfolds and how the story is influenced by Katie’s influence. if you like this novel, I highly recommend the author’s other stories too.

3yr
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okaykaykay

I read it when it was completed so I dont know how often it was updated but I loved the story. It did not disappoint. The author kept me guessing and wanting to read more. I love the characters, and the plot of the whole thing. It’s a fun and perfect novel for some light reading. Can’t say enough good stuff about this book!

3yr
View 0 Replies
jd1270168

This book is fascinating! The plot is fresh and inviting. The characters are amazing. I’m so glad the author’s sister convinced her to add onto it and include more content. If this book were in print, I would probably buy a physical copy. 10/10 Would recommend!

3yr
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Sara_Wilcox

I read another of this author’s works, and loved it, so I checked out her other works. I LOVE this book! The cheeky title drew me in, but Katie and Al made me stay. And I adore how it switched over to... Another character’s story towards the end. This author is a true artist and pro. Thank you for this wonderful story! I look forward to re-reading it❀️

3yr
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willow13

A great read This author is consistently great with all of her novels and gives all of her characters unique voIces I recommend this and all of her books

3yr
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Michelle_Preston

I’ll admit it took a couple of chapters to reel me in but I was definately hooked. The characters are interesting and get you invested in their lives. The author came up with lots of fun scenarios that a character who knows they are in a book would have to overcome. There are a few subversions of expectations (at least mine were) and I had several moments of cheering out loud. Definately recommend!

3yr
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MochaWafer

This story was cute. Read it. Have to ask though. Why does each of your books have massive time skips at the end? I would spend more money happily to get the story that we missed.

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3yr
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Lauralmarina

This book should have way more votes. it is so good. I love the characters and the story line. I was surprised at the direction the book took in the beginning. I thought she would end up falling for her brother’s friend.

3yr
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cornonthecob

I can totally get behind the FL in this story. She brings a perspective not often seen in transmigration novels and the whole story is really funny to boot!

3yr
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girrlit
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Halfway through, can't believe it took me soo long to find it. I really like the MC and her struggles with her new life, her understanding of the plot and life. It feels quite real and makes her relatable.

3yr
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