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Well its a good story so far and the mc is also op which is contradicting the title. English could improve a lot, sometime had trouble understanding the sentences. Overall its an OK fan-fic.
How could someone with so many powers and a longinus level sacred gear not be overpowered?! And i think it would ve better It you used some sort of application to correct the grammar.
This is a great story. The plot is developed very well. The OC is not stupid, so itβs already very good. for me you don't have to be the smartest, just not being a donkey or an idiot. The OC has been training very early, to increase and control his power, it is not just got strong. Relationships are being built on a foundation, it is not what "are found today, and one says: I like you. And another: you are the love of my life. I really like Dxd. Congratulations on the story.
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There is NOT 'not too OP', OP is OP there isn't middle ground... ( Λ Β³Λ)β₯-////-(=w=) (ββ’α΄β’β)β€( Β΄ β½ ` )(γ₯οΏ£3οΏ£)γ₯(β§β½β¦)\(ΒΊβΒΊ)/(*^*)( Λ Β³Λ)β₯-////-(=w=) (ββ’α΄β’β)β€( Β΄ β½ ` )(γ₯οΏ£3οΏ£)γ₯(β§β½β¦)\(ΒΊβΒΊ)/(*^*)(β―ΰ² ηΰ² )β―οΈ΅ β»ββ»(β―Β°β‘Β°οΌβ―οΈ΅ β»ββ»(β₯οΉβ₯)
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It was really good i can't wait till more plz upload more plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππPlz plz upload more
Well its a good story so far and the mc is also op which is contradicting the title. English could improve a lot, sometime had trouble understanding the sentences. Overall its an OK fan-fic.
How could someone with so many powers and a longinus level sacred gear not be overpowered?! And i think it would ve better It you used some sort of application to correct the grammar.
This is a great story. The plot is developed very well. The OC is not stupid, so itβs already very good. for me you don't have to be the smartest, just not being a donkey or an idiot. The OC has been training very early, to increase and control his power, it is not just got strong. Relationships are being built on a foundation, it is not what "are found today, and one says: I like you. And another: you are the love of my life. I really like Dxd. Congratulations on the story.
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There is NOT 'not too OP', OP is OP there isn't middle ground... ( Λ Β³Λ)β₯-////-(=w=) (ββ’α΄β’β)β€( Β΄ β½ ` )(γ₯οΏ£3οΏ£)γ₯(β§β½β¦)\(ΒΊβΒΊ)/(*^*)( Λ Β³Λ)β₯-////-(=w=) (ββ’α΄β’β)β€( Β΄ β½ ` )(γ₯οΏ£3οΏ£)γ₯(β§β½β¦)\(ΒΊβΒΊ)/(*^*)(β―ΰ² ηΰ² )β―οΈ΅ β»ββ»(β―Β°β‘Β°οΌβ―οΈ΅ β»ββ»(β₯οΉβ₯)
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