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Chloe, a 17 year old, was the only girl born in the family, she felt lonely and wanted siblings. Her mother divorced when she was only 6 years old. Chloe's father then remarried to a rich lady who has divorced with her husband. Chloe's going to be step mother has 13 sons and could never have a girl. Chloe will have to move in to a house full of 13 men.
FYI - I got this book idea from an anime called "Brothers Conflict" my story is mostly different from the anime.
This story is in first person.
*I dont read the chapter after writing so there might be typos*
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The book is nice, has great qualities, such as the emotions portrayed, if you were to elaborate on these emotions, readers would be able to emerse themselves within your book. At times where I expected to be sad, you skipped over these emotions. Only thing I've got to say is, elaborate on your emotions, relationships are built that way, can't really leave someone without explaining why.
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