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Write a review1, Character starts out way too OP for the world setting. 2, Even before his story has actually truly began. He already has the approval and peace of mind he has sought all his life after the introductionary chapters. 3, It goes for a rather tired simplistic hero-story design(it can work, but considering the introduction - That chances of it working out are slim to none. 4, The story messes HEAVILY with the very story basis for story it is based on. It 'seems great' so far, but I do not see this story panning out in the long run... Credits to the author tho, the author knows how start off by garnering the readers sympathy to immerse them in the story. But like I said, pretty much fullfilling all the dreams of his MC from the get go, kinda takes away the *******. Not just for the readers, but more problematically for the MC. It creates a void that once again has to filled(not saying it can't, not at all. But it sets a very high bar). The slow updates do speak towards the author ripping out his hair in frustration over this issue aswell.
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******************************** Good work! ****************************************** ***************************** And i need more! ***************************************
I just came across this fanfic!!! I seriously hope you havenβt dropped it as thereβs been no updates for a while. If you have then prepare to feel my wrath..........in a strongly worded post.
................. Mais capΓtulos, por favor .............................. ........ NΓ£o deixe cair ...................................... ........... πππ
.................More chapters please...................................... Don't drop................................................. πππ
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A very interesting fanfic with lots and lots of potential, it is very detailed and well written, hasn't been updated for 3 mths when I wrote this. It's worthy of your time to read the couple of chapters. It will leave you hanging. I hope that if you drop this author you don't delete it so that others will have a read. Amazing workπππ if this is continued I believe that it will have one of the top ten spot in the ranking
1, Character starts out way too OP for the world setting. 2, Even before his story has actually truly began. He already has the approval and peace of mind he has sought all his life after the introductionary chapters. 3, It goes for a rather tired simplistic hero-story design(it can work, but considering the introduction - That chances of it working out are slim to none. 4, The story messes HEAVILY with the very story basis for story it is based on. It 'seems great' so far, but I do not see this story panning out in the long run... Credits to the author tho, the author knows how start off by garnering the readers sympathy to immerse them in the story. But like I said, pretty much fullfilling all the dreams of his MC from the get go, kinda takes away the *******. Not just for the readers, but more problematically for the MC. It creates a void that once again has to filled(not saying it can't, not at all. But it sets a very high bar). The slow updates do speak towards the author ripping out his hair in frustration over this issue aswell.
no up .............................................................................................................................
******************************** Good work! ****************************************** ***************************** And i need more! ***************************************
I just came across this fanfic!!! I seriously hope you havenβt dropped it as thereβs been no updates for a while. If you have then prepare to feel my wrath..........in a strongly worded post.
................. Mais capΓtulos, por favor .............................. ........ NΓ£o deixe cair ...................................... ........... πππ
.................More chapters please...................................... Don't drop................................................. πππ
πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
A very interesting fanfic with lots and lots of potential, it is very detailed and well written, hasn't been updated for 3 mths when I wrote this. It's worthy of your time to read the couple of chapters. It will leave you hanging. I hope that if you drop this author you don't delete it so that others will have a read. Amazing workπππ if this is continued I believe that it will have one of the top ten spot in the ranking