One Piece: Kozuki Shinnosuke

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Drako_0692

The story is pretty good so far, both the main character's personality and the minor characters. My only complaint would be the gifts from the gods they give it (at least the system is irrelevant and harmless in the story).

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Shun_Woill

History and good training but the context should be developed a little. Like for example talking about their training or their activity as a bounty hunter during this course there this time even if it is not very developed

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I_am_truck_kun

3 chapters in and it looks promising.

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SlowWittedSong

interesting writing style but try to expand the dialogues and add little details to make the story seem more complete. I'm very interested in where your story will lead, please continue

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Scarface3699

Everything moves too fast and the dialogue is mediocre, as a result you're not invested in anything. Everything is the bare minimum description like fights and people. All in all pretty bad

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Kaushik_15

please write a Review it can help in the advancement of the story.