/ Fantasy / Our Astral Path
Synopsis
Three friends end up inside an unknown world after being dragged into a strange lake.
Finding themselves inside an unknown world, they need to survive.
It didn't took them long to find out that this new world they arrived, isn't anything like earth.
They need to get stronger to survive on this savage world.
Their Astral Path to greatness, begins!
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Only the first chapter was edited by an editor, the following chapters will be 100% me with my average english.
So please don't bury me in criticism about how badly I am. I'm well aware, that english isn't my strength.
I'm writing 3 Stories at the moment so...
In a good week 3 chapters, in a bad week 1 chapter.
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Hey buddy, I gonna be honest with this. The plot is really amazing, but you should describe the characters more, and what happened with them to find the lake that led to the other world. Check the punctuation. Keep the story up, and don't drop it.👍
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The story is really unique and I'm loving all the characters and the powers, the Grammar is good and the update speed isn't bad, continue with the good work author