I generally enjoy Gamer stories so you've got me there.
However there is still a lot of improvement that could be made. However since this is only the first chapter I'll wait for more before I make any critisims or suggestions.
I generally enjoy Gamer stories so you've got me there.
However there is still a lot of improvement that could be made. However since this is only the first chapter I'll wait for more before I make any critisims or suggestions.
I generally enjoy Gamer stories so you've got me there. However there is still a lot of improvement that could be made. However since this is only the first chapter I'll wait for more before I make any critisims or suggestions.