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The title of the story is good. It makes one interested in reading it. The story have potential. It's a pity though. The pervert quality of the mc made this story a bit annoying. I mean, it's like he's trying hard to be a pervert gentleman. And the mc always focus on the private parts of other characters, like daydreaming something bad about it, like a b*tch in heat.
If you have any respect for women don't read this story. Author described in early chapters a woman as a ***** in heat. MC is just a lustful maniac that cares nothing about the people around them unless if it's a beautiful girl. Romance feels very rushed if it can even be considered romance at all, since it's basically just the MC using women to vent his desire, though author tries to cover that up with the women falling in "love" with him. Thankfully most harem stories are not like this. Maybe since it's only 20 chapters in things may change but I won't be reading this unless they change the earlier chapters. The fact that some(not all) novels that have dubious consent use more respectful language should tell you all you need to know.
Una historia frustrante una puta mierda,un MC de mierda que es tan pasivo como una puta haciendo su trabajo,unos pov de una Loli vampiro que me importa una mierda y el MC es una señorita su sirvienta quiere sexo y el es la típica puta japonesa
Too busy rereading it to write much,buy😁👌😈😀💀🗣️👀👁️👏👁️🙌👏🙌👁️👏👏🙌🙌🙌👏🙌🙌👏👏🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌👏🙌🙌🙌👀👁️👁️👀👁️👁️👀👁️👁️👁️👁️
Greatbook !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 01000001 01101100 01101100 01001000 01100001 01101001 01101100 Bone_Crusher!!!!!
Great 👌 novel and I'm eager to continue reading. I hope sir bonecrusher will be met with many muses and good fortunes to continue writing.
Please continue your work when you can and I hope you live a long and prosperous life and are reincarnated into a mighty king with an all powerful system to accompany you. Until then please lead a pleasant life glorious and mighty Bonecrusher.
I would quite enjoy seeing where this story goes from here and I would especially like to see Max take over the world or something like that! I'd still like the story just as much even without world domination, I just really want to see him accomplish something big.😈
Please please don’t drop this novel. I will offer unto you all the power stones at my disposal if you’ll just continue the story for a few millennium.
Its a very interesting take on a very popular story and I might like this story just as much as Overlord, so I really hope the author continues it.
i really liked, just hope the autor dont drop mdjifjeufheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeujuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuhddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd69
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
Really great book. This book basically had ehat Overlord doesnt have. Like hes skeleton this onr though death mage still retain human form.
more chapters. +18 milf. +harem. .........................................................................................................................................................................................
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waiting for the scenes +18 xD, and more milfs apart from myra's mother. .........................................................................
interesing. ........................................................................................................................................................................................
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Nice......... Keep going and do mention if you ever decide to drop it plz..hate to have the book there for weeks waiting to see if it will ever update.
good. ...........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Yes, I'll shamelessly review my own novel to increase rating :p If you like OP MC and huge harem then do give this novel a try, I'm sure you'll love it.
Really curious to find out how it goes in the future, cuz for now I really really liked and enjoyed it. I just hope the MC doesn't turn into a scumbag Oh and yea, the story does have potential in it
I love your novel! It is a great story! I’m a representative editor from Stary.ltd. If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact adaren06*@*gmail.com(delete *).
The title of the story is good. It makes one interested in reading it. The story have potential. It's a pity though. The pervert quality of the mc made this story a bit annoying. I mean, it's like he's trying hard to be a pervert gentleman. And the mc always focus on the private parts of other characters, like daydreaming something bad about it, like a b*tch in heat.
If you have any respect for women don't read this story. Author described in early chapters a woman as a ***** in heat. MC is just a lustful maniac that cares nothing about the people around them unless if it's a beautiful girl. Romance feels very rushed if it can even be considered romance at all, since it's basically just the MC using women to vent his desire, though author tries to cover that up with the women falling in "love" with him. Thankfully most harem stories are not like this. Maybe since it's only 20 chapters in things may change but I won't be reading this unless they change the earlier chapters. The fact that some(not all) novels that have dubious consent use more respectful language should tell you all you need to know.
Una historia frustrante una puta mierda,un MC de mierda que es tan pasivo como una puta haciendo su trabajo,unos pov de una Loli vampiro que me importa una mierda y el MC es una señorita su sirvienta quiere sexo y el es la típica puta japonesa
Too busy rereading it to write much,buy😁👌😈😀💀🗣️👀👁️👏👁️🙌👏🙌👁️👏👏🙌🙌🙌👏🙌🙌👏👏🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌🙌👏🙌🙌🙌👀👁️👁️👀👁️👁️👀👁️👁️👁️👁️
Greatbook !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 01000001 01101100 01101100 01001000 01100001 01101001 01101100 Bone_Crusher!!!!!
Great 👌 novel and I'm eager to continue reading. I hope sir bonecrusher will be met with many muses and good fortunes to continue writing.
Please continue your work when you can and I hope you live a long and prosperous life and are reincarnated into a mighty king with an all powerful system to accompany you. Until then please lead a pleasant life glorious and mighty Bonecrusher.
I would quite enjoy seeing where this story goes from here and I would especially like to see Max take over the world or something like that! I'd still like the story just as much even without world domination, I just really want to see him accomplish something big.😈
Please please don’t drop this novel. I will offer unto you all the power stones at my disposal if you’ll just continue the story for a few millennium.
Its a very interesting take on a very popular story and I might like this story just as much as Overlord, so I really hope the author continues it.
i really liked, just hope the autor dont drop mdjifjeufheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeujuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuhddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd69
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
Really great book. This book basically had ehat Overlord doesnt have. Like hes skeleton this onr though death mage still retain human form.
more chapters. +18 milf. +harem. .........................................................................................................................................................................................
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HmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmHmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
Reveal Spoiler waiting for the scenes +18 xD, and more milfs apart from myra's mother. .........................................................................
interesing. ........................................................................................................................................................................................
..............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Nice......... Keep going and do mention if you ever decide to drop it plz..hate to have the book there for weeks waiting to see if it will ever update.
good. ...........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Yes, I'll shamelessly review my own novel to increase rating :p If you like OP MC and huge harem then do give this novel a try, I'm sure you'll love it.
Really curious to find out how it goes in the future, cuz for now I really really liked and enjoyed it. I just hope the MC doesn't turn into a scumbag Oh and yea, the story does have potential in it
I love your novel! It is a great story! I’m a representative editor from Stary.ltd. If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact adaren06*@*gmail.com(delete *).