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alright I'm gonna say something when you put *with a huge grin* or something try and put like name said with a huge grin it makes the writing seem much better
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I'll be shameless and give myself 5 star anyway this is my first story I hope people will give me the POWER to do a good job if you find error plus tell me
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alright I'm gonna say something when you put *with a huge grin* or something try and put like name said with a huge grin it makes the writing seem much better
gooodgooodgooodgooodgooodgooodgooodgooodgooodgooodgooodgooodgooodgooodgooodgooodgooodgooodgooodgooodgooodgooodgooodgooodgooodgooodgooodgooodgooodgooodgooodgooodgooodgooodgooodgooodgooodgooodgooodgooodgoood
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I'll be shameless and give myself 5 star anyway this is my first story I hope people will give me the POWER to do a good job if you find error plus tell me
Please write a comment to tell me your ideas or to tell me what you think of the storie Enjoy the storie~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~