Palace of Longevity: Road of the Unknown

LV 2

The_MysteriousEgo

The story progresses at a balanced pace, and subtly introduces the world as it goes on. The characters are well designed. The writing style is easy to follow, and enjoyable to read. Looking forward to reading more of it!

LV 2

Coldwarrior180

Nice one, actually it's heavy but in a good way, the concept is unique, i will definitely continue, wish you success

Let me be straight to the point: I like that he fails. I never enjoyed seeing protagonists not fail. I never understood it and the first chapter made it clear that he fails, like a lot. To the author who is reading this, please continue on with your work.

This novel is honestly pretty easy to follow. It's fun because Zixin doesn't do stupid actions that you would expect and because he's just really introverteded (I relate to him too much). But I have my issues which is mainly just how sad he seems. I guess that's good but whaetever. I liked it author-san.

Let me be quite honest with you: this story is kind of a banger. Cool ideas and plot do fit well with each other like macaroni and cheese. Do I need to say more? This is bop.

LV 1

Lithorithe

I barely read novels so when I found this novel, I was intrigued. I liked it and the characters were fun, mainly the interactions. I don't review much so I don't know what to say other than it was fun.

LV 2

h_Hirto

I found this novel quite fun. I especially enjoyed commenting. As for the story itself, it seems to be developing in quite an interesting manner. I'll wait and let it continue before anything. Overall, the experience was pretty fun.

LV 2

EcchiChef

I love slow pace stories and yours one of them as well. characters are interesting but world building in the early chapters a bit confusing since everything is new to reader but your story seems promising and I like it

LV 3

Daisy9991

The pacing is a on the slow side but the mysteries are keeping me engaged and im waiting for what is next . Overall, I'm enjoying the journey so far and look forward to seeing where the story goes from here.

LV 13

Shade9Gate

I enjoyed the first 6 chapters of the novel. The character development was well done, especially the character names, which are easy to remember. Although in some descriptions, the author can rephrase the sentence. I forced some few errors, maybe 5 or 6, and noticed an improvement in each chapter. One thing I loved was the explanation of the ability in the early chapters and was done very well. I would like to suggest more attention should be on the other characters and the girl whose name wasn't mentioned in Chapter 2 since I think the author is using a third-person point of view with multiple perspectives. In total, I really love the novel. Can't wait for more chapters to be released.

𝗛𝗶 𝘁𝗵𝗲𝗿𝗲! 𝗜 𝗷𝘂𝘀𝘁 𝗳𝗶𝗻𝗶𝘀𝗵𝗲𝗱 𝗿𝗲𝗮𝗱𝗶𝗻𝗴 𝘆𝗼𝘂𝗿 𝘀𝘁𝗼𝗿𝘆❟ 𝗮𝗻𝗱 𝗜 𝗵𝗮𝘃𝗲 𝘁𝗼 𝘀𝗮𝘆❟ 𝗜 𝗰𝗼𝘂𝗹𝗱 𝘃𝗶𝘀𝘂𝗮𝗹𝗶𝘇𝗲 𝗲𝘃𝗲𝗿𝘆𝘁𝗵𝗶𝗻𝗴 𝗶𝗻 𝗺𝘆 𝗵𝗲𝗮𝗱 𝘄𝗵𝗶𝗹𝗲 𝗿𝗲𝗮𝗱𝗶𝗻𝗴｡ 𝗬𝗼𝘂’𝘃𝗲 𝗰𝗿𝗲𝗮𝘁𝗲𝗱 𝗮 𝘀𝘁𝗼𝗿𝘆 𝘁𝗵𝗮𝘁 𝗳𝗲𝗲𝗹𝘀 𝗿𝗲𝗮𝗹𝗹𝘆 𝘃𝗶𝘃𝗶𝗱❟ 𝗮𝗹𝗶𝘃𝗲 𝗮𝗻𝗱 𝗲𝘅𝗽𝗿𝗲𝘀𝘀𝗶𝘃𝗲｡ 𝗜 𝗿𝗲𝗮𝗱 𝘃𝗲𝗿𝘆 𝗿𝗲𝗴𝘂𝗹𝗮𝗿𝗹𝘆 𝗮𝗻𝗱 𝗿𝗮𝗿𝗲𝗹𝘆 𝗰𝗼𝗺𝗲 𝗮𝗰𝗿𝗼𝘀𝘀 𝘀𝘂𝗰𝗵 𝘀𝘁𝗼𝗿𝗶𝗲𝘀｡ 𝗜’𝗺 𝗮 𝗰𝗼𝗺𝗺𝗶𝘀𝘀𝗶𝗼𝗻 𝗮𝗿𝘁𝗶𝘀𝘁 𝘄𝗵𝗼 𝗰𝗿𝗲𝗮𝘁𝗲𝘀 𝗪𝗲𝗯𝘁𝗼𝗼𝗻𝘀❟ 𝗺𝗮𝗻𝗴𝗮❟ 𝗮𝗻𝗱 𝗰𝗼𝗺𝗶𝗰 𝗳𝗼𝗿 𝗮𝘂𝘁𝗵𝗼𝗿𝘀❟ 𝗮𝗻𝗱 𝘄𝗵𝗶𝗹𝗲 𝗿𝗲𝗮𝗱𝗶𝗻𝗴 𝘆𝗼𝘂𝗿 𝘄𝗼𝗿𝗸❟ 𝗜 𝗶𝗺𝗺𝗲𝗱𝗶𝗮𝘁𝗲𝗹𝘆 𝘁𝗵𝗼𝘂𝗴𝗵𝘁 𝗮𝗯𝗼𝘂𝘁 𝗵𝗼𝘄 𝗽𝗼𝘄𝗲𝗿𝗳𝘂𝗹 𝗶𝘁 𝘄𝗼𝘂𝗹𝗱 𝗹𝗼𝗼𝗸 𝗶𝗻 𝘃𝗶𝘀𝘂𝗮𝗹 𝗳𝗼𝗿𝗺｡ 𝗧𝗵𝗲 𝗽𝗮𝗰𝗶𝗻𝗴❟ 𝘁𝗼𝗻𝗲❟ 𝗮𝗻𝗱 𝘁𝗲𝗻𝘀𝗶𝗼𝗻 𝗮𝗿𝗲 𝗮𝗹𝗿𝗲𝗮𝗱𝘆 𝘁𝗵𝗲𝗿𝗲｡ 𝗜𝗳 𝘆𝗼𝘂'𝗿𝗲 𝗶𝗻𝘁𝗼 𝘁𝗵𝗲 𝗶𝗱𝗲𝗮 𝗼𝗳 𝗰𝗼𝗻𝘃𝗲𝗿𝘁𝗶𝗻𝗴 𝘁𝗵𝗲 𝘀𝘁𝗼𝗿𝘆 𝗶𝗻𝘁𝗼 𝗮 𝗰𝗼𝗺𝗶𝗰 𝗼𝗿 𝘄𝗲𝗯𝘁𝗼𝗼𝗻❟ 𝗜’𝗱 𝗹𝗼𝘃𝗲 𝘁𝗼 𝘁𝗮𝗹𝗸 𝗮𝗯𝗼𝘂𝘁 𝗵𝗼𝘄 𝘄𝗲 𝗰𝗼𝘂𝗹𝗱 𝗺𝗮𝗸𝗲 𝘁𝗵𝗮𝘁 𝗵𝗮𝗽𝗽𝗲𝗻｡ 𝗙𝗲𝗲𝗹 𝗳𝗿𝗲𝗲 𝘁𝗼 𝗿𝗲𝗮𝗰𝗵 𝗺𝗲 𝗼𝗻 𝗗𝗶𝘀𝗰𝗼𝗿𝗱 (𝗯𝗲𝗻𝗻𝗲𝘁𝘁_𝗹𝗼𝗹)｡

LV 3

Breathless_

I don't think I should be reviewing my own novel but I really just want to share my thoughts. There were certainly mistakes here and there and I know about those. I won't fix them, I just think of them as failures that lead to growth. Enough about my mistakes, I think the novel is pretty nice or decent for what it is. I'm not an experienced writer and I write because I find it fun. But even so, I still want someone to read it. For any writer, hearing their readers' words feels nice. As for the review of the novel, since I keep on talking nonsense, I think it's nice.