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I’m up to ch. 30 at the moment, I’m so fascinated by this fanfic, it has me shocked, absorbed, excited, hysterical and amazed how it is so well connected with its origin in a twisted circumstance that brings it together. The MC is 11 right? The Demi-Titan has why more character and personality then the origin story MC & Co-MC! The fanfic has an unexpected pov of the MC i always feel like I’m see through the eyes of an 18 or 25 year old man but I keep forgetting his body is that of a kid!?
Great read.There was a good background as I found that all characters got their respective attention. the comedy was good and I loved the development.The author made this story look like the origin of his on series of fanfics that are interconnected but distinct in their own way, and I love it.Amazing work author. 😄😁
ok that was something you have to like perrsy Jackson to enjoy this story.
THE BEST Percy Jackson fanfiction ever!!!Simply unbelievable journey in a familiar world with a brand new character.
Good book, I don’t really read Percy Jackson fan fics, but glad I read this one. 10/10 would read again
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Amazing, one of the best, not even, probably THE BEST Percy Jackson fanfic out there, very well done, 5/5, 10/10, 700/700. Amazing story, unexpected turns, and a bunch of hilarious comedy.
Lembrando a mim mesmo: Comecei a ler, mas não suportei a personalidade, história inserção do MC...............................................
Perhaps one if the best fanfics I have ever read, definitely at least the best Percy Jackson Fanfic I have ever read. This story was addictive I read faster try to absorb this master peace than almost any other thing I have ever read. This story is worth your time l, and while bit perfect its imperfections is one of its endearing qualities.
Not bad) 😁Cool story.)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!)))))))))))).
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Hello there, I've just finished reading the story. So, I'm here to leave my review. It might contain spoilers, so be warned. 1) The writing is good, with rarely any spelling or grammar errors. (1 point) 2) The overall plot is interesting, based on the Percy Jackson franchise with a mix of Lovecraft. If I had to have a complaint was that it almost isn't fanfic. I mean. In the beginning, there were the PJ Stories from the cannon books. But that quickly was forgotten and focused more on Pantheon's (greek especially) mythologies. It was nice. But rarely an actual Percy Jackson world story. In resume, it is a good story but hardly a PJ fan-fic. (0.5 Points) 3) Character development was nice. Mc was dumb sometimes but eventually, he leaned. Maybe it was intentional or the Author was correcting things as he saw complaints in the comments. There were many funny moments. I laughed many times. It would have been nice if the humor was kept throughout the story, unfortunately, the ending was too much drama (change destiny kind of drama) (0.5) 4) I personally like seeing and imagining (in fanfic) the things that aren't shown in canon and an MC that does things differently from the original. Since the story left out many Percy Jackson and practically became another thing altogether it did not fulfill my desire for fanfic. (no points) 5) The story had many plots and mysteries. Much left to explore. But still good. There could have been many more interactions and in my opinion. The end was resolved much too fast. ( 0.5 points) My final count is 2.5 out of 5. It doesn't mean it's bad. It is actually really good. It just didn't have all the things I was expecting. I recommend you to read this fanfic. It is a good read.
irritating. sometimes I think. what is the most annoying. Ah, I remember that novel😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮
A fantastic story, full of grammatical errors but I don't care. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------
Yet another great on from our lord. One of the few I read till the end, it was humorous, good romance and good original events.
made me laugh out loud dozens of times, made me get all quiet, and then happy then sad and empty. emotional Rollercoaster, 10/10 happy ending with the bean 10/10, expected ending 0/10.this was an awesome story!
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what to expect????? . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . this novel will literally kill you by laughing
it's pretty good, it's the first novel of Percy Jackson that I read and I liked, but could have more caracter and world development, and some more explanation.
It was an amazing book, front to back. If I could forgot it just to be able to read it all over again, I would. A little sad we didn’ get a Shiva battle but the ending made up for it. It seemed a bit stressed but you made it both fast and also entertaining. Good Job.
great story, funny. complete story, beginning middle and end, didn't feel rushed and didn't over stay its welcome on filler. Would recommend.
The best book I've ever seen, the combined funny and entertaining in the start to dark and sad at the middle and end is incredible. And the romance wow.
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Great story. It's cool that the R.O.B. that transmigrated people in his other ffs was the protagonist of this one. Although I wish he'd have had any interaction with Leto.
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Such... diabolical, horrible, nauseating, terrible tricks. I will never in my life offend this author... because his tricks are not human at all.
The mc spent most of the story fighting against a losing battle just to lose in the end.Too depressing. Although i liked the idea of the book it had much more potential and could have been pivotal idea to the whole story with a chapter with reality bending ,origin magic , control of fundemntal physical forces or even sorce magic
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Absolutely mental the ending hit me like a truck. There are plenty of grammatical errors but they aren't very noticeable so you can ignore that. There character descriptions are lacking in both detail and being there. The crossovers were unexpected but not that bad. And no the ending is not truck-kun
I’m up to ch. 30 at the moment, I’m so fascinated by this fanfic, it has me shocked, absorbed, excited, hysterical and amazed how it is so well connected with its origin in a twisted circumstance that brings it together. The MC is 11 right? The Demi-Titan has why more character and personality then the origin story MC & Co-MC! The fanfic has an unexpected pov of the MC i always feel like I’m see through the eyes of an 18 or 25 year old man but I keep forgetting his body is that of a kid!?
Great read.There was a good background as I found that all characters got their respective attention. the comedy was good and I loved the development.The author made this story look like the origin of his on series of fanfics that are interconnected but distinct in their own way, and I love it.Amazing work author. 😄😁
ok that was something you have to like perrsy Jackson to enjoy this story.
THE BEST Percy Jackson fanfiction ever!!!Simply unbelievable journey in a familiar world with a brand new character.
Good book, I don’t really read Percy Jackson fan fics, but glad I read this one. 10/10 would read again
goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood
Amazing, one of the best, not even, probably THE BEST Percy Jackson fanfic out there, very well done, 5/5, 10/10, 700/700. Amazing story, unexpected turns, and a bunch of hilarious comedy.
Lembrando a mim mesmo: Comecei a ler, mas não suportei a personalidade, história inserção do MC...............................................
Perhaps one if the best fanfics I have ever read, definitely at least the best Percy Jackson Fanfic I have ever read. This story was addictive I read faster try to absorb this master peace than almost any other thing I have ever read. This story is worth your time l, and while bit perfect its imperfections is one of its endearing qualities.
Not bad) 😁Cool story.)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!)))))))))))).
Divertido hasta hasta el último cap Blablablablabalabalablabalabalabalabalabalabalabalabalasbslsbslsbsslsbslsbslssbslsbslsbsslsbslsbsslsbslsbsslsnslsbslbslssbslsbslsbslsbsslsnslsnslssbslsnslssblssbslsbslsbslsbslsbsslsbsl
Reveal Spoiler Hello there, I've just finished reading the story. So, I'm here to leave my review. It might contain spoilers, so be warned. 1) The writing is good, with rarely any spelling or grammar errors. (1 point) 2) The overall plot is interesting, based on the Percy Jackson franchise with a mix of Lovecraft. If I had to have a complaint was that it almost isn't fanfic. I mean. In the beginning, there were the PJ Stories from the cannon books. But that quickly was forgotten and focused more on Pantheon's (greek especially) mythologies. It was nice. But rarely an actual Percy Jackson world story. In resume, it is a good story but hardly a PJ fan-fic. (0.5 Points) 3) Character development was nice. Mc was dumb sometimes but eventually, he leaned. Maybe it was intentional or the Author was correcting things as he saw complaints in the comments. There were many funny moments. I laughed many times. It would have been nice if the humor was kept throughout the story, unfortunately, the ending was too much drama (change destiny kind of drama) (0.5) 4) I personally like seeing and imagining (in fanfic) the things that aren't shown in canon and an MC that does things differently from the original. Since the story left out many Percy Jackson and practically became another thing altogether it did not fulfill my desire for fanfic. (no points) 5) The story had many plots and mysteries. Much left to explore. But still good. There could have been many more interactions and in my opinion. The end was resolved much too fast. ( 0.5 points) My final count is 2.5 out of 5. It doesn't mean it's bad. It is actually really good. It just didn't have all the things I was expecting. I recommend you to read this fanfic. It is a good read.
irritating. sometimes I think. what is the most annoying. Ah, I remember that novel😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮
A fantastic story, full of grammatical errors but I don't care. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------
Yet another great on from our lord. One of the few I read till the end, it was humorous, good romance and good original events.
made me laugh out loud dozens of times, made me get all quiet, and then happy then sad and empty. emotional Rollercoaster, 10/10 happy ending with the bean 10/10, expected ending 0/10.this was an awesome story!
Reveal Spoiler what to expect????? . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . this novel will literally kill you by laughing
it's pretty good, it's the first novel of Percy Jackson that I read and I liked, but could have more caracter and world development, and some more explanation.
It was an amazing book, front to back. If I could forgot it just to be able to read it all over again, I would. A little sad we didn’ get a Shiva battle but the ending made up for it. It seemed a bit stressed but you made it both fast and also entertaining. Good Job.
great story, funny. complete story, beginning middle and end, didn't feel rushed and didn't over stay its welcome on filler. Would recommend.
The best book I've ever seen, the combined funny and entertaining in the start to dark and sad at the middle and end is incredible. And the romance wow.
Reveal Spoiler Great story. It's cool that the R.O.B. that transmigrated people in his other ffs was the protagonist of this one. Although I wish he'd have had any interaction with Leto.
Reveal Spoiler Such... diabolical, horrible, nauseating, terrible tricks. I will never in my life offend this author... because his tricks are not human at all.
The mc spent most of the story fighting against a losing battle just to lose in the end.Too depressing. Although i liked the idea of the book it had much more potential and could have been pivotal idea to the whole story with a chapter with reality bending ,origin magic , control of fundemntal physical forces or even sorce magic
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Absolutely mental the ending hit me like a truck. There are plenty of grammatical errors but they aren't very noticeable so you can ignore that. There character descriptions are lacking in both detail and being there. The crossovers were unexpected but not that bad. And no the ending is not truck-kun