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Waking up in the MCU was a headache considering the dangers that lay ahead. Being Peter Parker was at least a good start.
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this is either bad translation or the characters has the ability to switches their gender willy-nilly.
The Grammar is just bad. If I’m reading and I have to reconfigure what I’m reading in my head for it to make sense then even the lightest sense of immersion is ruined.
The best Spider-Man fanfic I've ever read! Worth reading! . The best Spider-Man fanfic I've ever read! Worth reading! . The best Spider-Man fanfic I've ever read! Worth reading!
very good work with creativity in cool points, I recommend creating the inventions of the superior spider and other technologies like virtual reality.
Hey, can you tell me what SI means? I keep seeing it on here but I’m not really familiar with it.
Can you double check your writing. I see misspellings and a the gender is often mistated.
I hurt myself trying to read this, the grammar is awful and sometimes words are missing completely. If you are translating directly from Spanish, at least read your translation out loud to make sure it makes sense in English. Also it suffers from the lack of "show don't tell", everything is narrated in a journal like manner without any background details whatsoever.