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Write a reviewI'm gonna be honest. This story might seem to most as not that great. To me, this was the story that really brought me into certain concepts. I didn't even know what a CYOA (Choose Your Own Adventure) was. Nor did I know about Worm (and its God like CYOA's) and Essence Meta. I myself started to write a dxd story. Although there many reasons why, this was one of my biggest inspirations for it. Although the language quality isn't exactly EX-rank, I could still enjoy it. It's a shame it's ending now, but all good things must come to an end. Thanks for writing this story [even if it hasn't updated for at least a year]!
Bruhh.... This novel is soooo good...... Too good to be true..... Nice concept you got there...... Hahaha..... Its too bad that you not able to update again.... But I am still waiting for your update.... Author-san... Fight it on..... Life is like a wheel...
So is this dropped? ๐ด๓ ง๓ ข๓ ฅ๓ ฎ๓ ง๓ ฟ๐ด๓ ง๓ ข๓ ฅ๓ ฎ๓ ง๓ ฟ๐ด๓ ง๓ ข๓ ฅ๓ ฎ๓ ง๓ ฟ๐ด๓ ง๓ ข๓ ฅ๓ ฎ๓ ง๓ ฟ๐ด๓ ง๓ ข๓ ฅ๓ ฎ๓ ง๓ ฟ๐ด๓ ง๓ ข๓ ฅ๓ ฎ๓ ง๓ ฟ๐ด๓ ง๓ ข๓ ฅ๓ ฎ๓ ง๓ ฟ๐ด๓ ง๓ ข๓ ฅ๓ ฎ๓ ง๓ ฟ๐ด๓ ง๓ ข๓ ฅ๓ ฎ๓ ง๓ ฟ (Had to add the flags to make it go past 140 )
This fanfic is something else...I like it very much it just doesn't focuse in DXD World and MC has a Harem but is not trying to get all the girls. He just wants lo live in peace while having power to back it up!!!
This is just my opinion dont be mad. This story sucks ass and every thung is hapening way too fast. Reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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This story has a lot of potential yet fails to deliver as it seems to fall in the wish fulfilment category which while potentially not bad has gotten worse in grammar and spelling best suggestion is to find a native English speaker and get them to read each chapter before you post.
Reveal SpoilerThank....................................................................................................................................you
I just give him 5 stars without reading but i have one question is there a f.u.c.k.i.n.g harem or not be I don't want to read something with harem s.h.i.t
easy to read since the quality is quiet good, just need a clear plot since i feel it isn't flow that good and mc doesn't have a clear objective. overall your novel is good..
Fun read good crossovers and intelligent use of abilities. Looking forward for more hope to see you continue hopefully you will be able to make a good location to go next time
Very very very very very very very very very very nice to read. I absolutely love this.๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
So far it's doing great, like the way you mixed up different elements of different novel to create you own. The power of MC great and it like it.
It's great, seeing different elements of the original novel mashed up together to form it. Keep up the good work and keep on updating. All the best.
This is a good story. hahahahahahahahahahahaahahahahahaha i like ophis. fhsgfhdghsgfhsgfhsdsdgfbsdgfhsghjsghjsgjsfgjfsgjgjdfghj jjfjjjjjjjjjjhsdpotighusรนdpitjuhipsdjtgfhdfgh
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At the time of this review, it is on its 36th chapter I can sum this novel up in one word, comfortable. Like a warm blanket, not in a lazy writer way. Unlike most Op Mc novels the author doesn't focus too much on the fights but mostly on the connections. There's no walking around obstacles as Mc deals with trouble swiftly before going back to his identity as a boyfriend/mate It did admittedly start with power struggle being the main premise but recent chapters move closer towards the slice of life. I like it cause it a nice read to rest your brain after reading all the plot-twisting novels. Thank You don't drop
,๐คฝ๐คฃ๐คฝ๐ค๐คฝ๐ญ๐คฝ๐ค๐คฝ๐คฝ๐ค๐คฝ๐ค๐คฝ๐ค๐๐๐คฃ๐คฝ๐คฃ๐คฝ๐คฝ๐๐ค๐คฝ๐๐โโ๏ธ๐๐โโ๏ธ๐๐คฝ๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐๐โโ๏ธ๐๐ต๐ค๐ต๐โโ๏ธ๐๐โโ๏ธ๐คฝ๐๐ค๐คฝ๐ค๐๐๐ค๐ต๐ค๐๐ต๐ค๐ต๐ค๐ต๐ค๐ต๐ต๐โโ๏ธ๐๐โโ๏ธ๐๐๐โโ๏ธ๐ต๐โโ๏ธ๐ต๐โโ๏ธ๐๐ต๐โโ๏ธ๐ต๐๐
I quite like this fanfic, it has all the things I enjoy in a story and mc; op mc, romance, world travel, comedy, beatdowns, mc pulling weeds at the roots. I like that one of the mcโs main love interests is Ophis, it is not often that I see that. Usually she is made into a little sister or something. So that is somewhat unique. All things considered, I really like this story and hope that it continues for a long time.
๐ฅฐ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐คฉ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐คฉ๐ฅฐ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐๐คฉ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ฅฐ๐คฉ๐๐๐คฉ๐คฉ๐๐คฉ๐คฉ๐๐๐๐คฉ๐คฉ๐๐๐๐คฉ๐คฉ๐๐๐๐ฅฐ๐คฉ๐๐๐๐คฉ๐๐๐๐คฉ๐คฉ๐๐๐คฉ๐๐๐๐คฉ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐คฉ๐
interesting enough to keep you entertained from start to finish while good enough to not drop.
I'm gonna be honest. This story might seem to most as not that great. To me, this was the story that really brought me into certain concepts. I didn't even know what a CYOA (Choose Your Own Adventure) was. Nor did I know about Worm (and its God like CYOA's) and Essence Meta. I myself started to write a dxd story. Although there many reasons why, this was one of my biggest inspirations for it. Although the language quality isn't exactly EX-rank, I could still enjoy it. It's a shame it's ending now, but all good things must come to an end. Thanks for writing this story [even if it hasn't updated for at least a year]!
Bruhh.... This novel is soooo good...... Too good to be true..... Nice concept you got there...... Hahaha..... Its too bad that you not able to update again.... But I am still waiting for your update.... Author-san... Fight it on..... Life is like a wheel...
So is this dropped? ๐ด๓ ง๓ ข๓ ฅ๓ ฎ๓ ง๓ ฟ๐ด๓ ง๓ ข๓ ฅ๓ ฎ๓ ง๓ ฟ๐ด๓ ง๓ ข๓ ฅ๓ ฎ๓ ง๓ ฟ๐ด๓ ง๓ ข๓ ฅ๓ ฎ๓ ง๓ ฟ๐ด๓ ง๓ ข๓ ฅ๓ ฎ๓ ง๓ ฟ๐ด๓ ง๓ ข๓ ฅ๓ ฎ๓ ง๓ ฟ๐ด๓ ง๓ ข๓ ฅ๓ ฎ๓ ง๓ ฟ๐ด๓ ง๓ ข๓ ฅ๓ ฎ๓ ง๓ ฟ๐ด๓ ง๓ ข๓ ฅ๓ ฎ๓ ง๓ ฟ (Had to add the flags to make it go past 140 )
This fanfic is something else...I like it very much it just doesn't focuse in DXD World and MC has a Harem but is not trying to get all the girls. He just wants lo live in peace while having power to back it up!!!
This is just my opinion dont be mad. This story sucks ass and every thung is hapening way too fast. Reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee Reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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This story has a lot of potential yet fails to deliver as it seems to fall in the wish fulfilment category which while potentially not bad has gotten worse in grammar and spelling best suggestion is to find a native English speaker and get them to read each chapter before you post.
Reveal SpoilerThank....................................................................................................................................you
I just give him 5 stars without reading but i have one question is there a f.u.c.k.i.n.g harem or not be I don't want to read something with harem s.h.i.t
easy to read since the quality is quiet good, just need a clear plot since i feel it isn't flow that good and mc doesn't have a clear objective. overall your novel is good..
Fun read good crossovers and intelligent use of abilities. Looking forward for more hope to see you continue hopefully you will be able to make a good location to go next time
Very very very very very very very very very very nice to read. I absolutely love this.๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
So far it's doing great, like the way you mixed up different elements of different novel to create you own. The power of MC great and it like it.
It's great, seeing different elements of the original novel mashed up together to form it. Keep up the good work and keep on updating. All the best.
This is a good story. hahahahahahahahahahahaahahahahahaha i like ophis. fhsgfhdghsgfhsgfhsdsdgfbsdgfhsghjsghjsgjsfgjfsgjgjdfghj jjfjjjjjjjjjjhsdpotighusรนdpitjuhipsdjtgfhdfgh
โโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโ โโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโ โโโโโโโโโโโ โโโโโโโโ โโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโ โโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโ โโ โโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโ โโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโ โโโโโโ โโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโ โโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโ โโโโโโโโโโโโโ โโโโโโโโ โโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโ โโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโ โโ โโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโ โโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโ
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At the time of this review, it is on its 36th chapter I can sum this novel up in one word, comfortable. Like a warm blanket, not in a lazy writer way. Unlike most Op Mc novels the author doesn't focus too much on the fights but mostly on the connections. There's no walking around obstacles as Mc deals with trouble swiftly before going back to his identity as a boyfriend/mate It did admittedly start with power struggle being the main premise but recent chapters move closer towards the slice of life. I like it cause it a nice read to rest your brain after reading all the plot-twisting novels. Thank You don't drop
,๐คฝ๐คฃ๐คฝ๐ค๐คฝ๐ญ๐คฝ๐ค๐คฝ๐คฝ๐ค๐คฝ๐ค๐คฝ๐ค๐๐๐คฃ๐คฝ๐คฃ๐คฝ๐คฝ๐๐ค๐คฝ๐๐โโ๏ธ๐๐โโ๏ธ๐๐คฝ๐โโ๏ธ๐โโ๏ธ๐๐โโ๏ธ๐๐ต๐ค๐ต๐โโ๏ธ๐๐โโ๏ธ๐คฝ๐๐ค๐คฝ๐ค๐๐๐ค๐ต๐ค๐๐ต๐ค๐ต๐ค๐ต๐ค๐ต๐ต๐โโ๏ธ๐๐โโ๏ธ๐๐๐โโ๏ธ๐ต๐โโ๏ธ๐ต๐โโ๏ธ๐๐ต๐โโ๏ธ๐ต๐๐
I quite like this fanfic, it has all the things I enjoy in a story and mc; op mc, romance, world travel, comedy, beatdowns, mc pulling weeds at the roots. I like that one of the mcโs main love interests is Ophis, it is not often that I see that. Usually she is made into a little sister or something. So that is somewhat unique. All things considered, I really like this story and hope that it continues for a long time.
๐ฅฐ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐คฉ๐ฅฐ๐ฅฐ๐คฉ๐ฅฐ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐คฉ๐๐คฉ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ฅฐ๐คฉ๐๐๐คฉ๐คฉ๐๐คฉ๐คฉ๐๐๐๐คฉ๐คฉ๐๐๐๐คฉ๐คฉ๐๐๐๐ฅฐ๐คฉ๐๐๐๐คฉ๐๐๐๐คฉ๐คฉ๐๐๐คฉ๐๐๐๐คฉ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐คฉ๐
interesting enough to keep you entertained from start to finish while good enough to not drop.