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It's absolutely abysmal. Characters and places are spelt incorrectly. There is no cohesiveness to the writing. Background isn't well explored and doesn't match whatsoever with the canon that it is so heavily based off of. Characters are one dimensional and have stale lines. I think its current 3.7 stars out of 5, is completely overblown and the novel should probably be around 2 stars.
When r u going to update next one..... Like the character of men from agares clan... Next one is akeno...then yasaka.....
More chapters......... More chapters ................... More chapters.......... More chapters .................. More chapters .......... More chapters ................ .
Please update faster and please don't drop this book......................................................................................... .
I really like your book ,unlike other fanfic yours in unique and different which attached my attention ,so i hope you can update faster n please don't drop your book....
..............xd...................................................................................................................................................
Saber Excalubur think just how cool it will be they want the 8 Excaliburs and Issei has the real one and original!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Really like the story so far just hope that chapter come soner qnd more daily since its a good story and hope you father gets well soon (post after reading chapter 4)
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Really good, I look forward to the continuation! He falls into my library without hesitation 140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...
OP from the start and please don’t drop the Fan-Fic Author I’m starting to get excited on the Action (Hentai) scenes..............Damn you 140 letters *fading*.............:3.......................(0w0)7
Reveal Spoiler
Update please🙏😭😭🙏🏻😭🙏🏻😭🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻😭😭😭😭😭😭🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻😭🙏🏻🙏🏻😭🙏🏻😭😭😭😭😭🙏🏻🙏🏻😭😭🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻😭😭😭😭😭🙏🏻😭😭😭😭😭🙏😭🙏😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭🙏🙏🙏🙏😭🙏🙏😭🙏🏻🙏🏻😭😭😭😭
It's absolutely abysmal. Characters and places are spelt incorrectly. There is no cohesiveness to the writing. Background isn't well explored and doesn't match whatsoever with the canon that it is so heavily based off of. Characters are one dimensional and have stale lines. I think its current 3.7 stars out of 5, is completely overblown and the novel should probably be around 2 stars.
When r u going to update next one..... Like the character of men from agares clan... Next one is akeno...then yasaka.....
More chapters......... More chapters ................... More chapters.......... More chapters .................. More chapters .......... More chapters ................ .
Please update faster and please don't drop this book......................................................................................... .
I really like your book ,unlike other fanfic yours in unique and different which attached my attention ,so i hope you can update faster n please don't drop your book....
..............xd...................................................................................................................................................
Saber Excalubur think just how cool it will be they want the 8 Excaliburs and Issei has the real one and original!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
More chapters!More chapters!More chapters!More chapters!More chapters!More chapters!More chapters!More chapters!More chapters!More chapters!More chapters!More chapters! More chapters! More chapters! More chapters! More chapters! More chapters! More chapters! More chapters! More chapters! More chapters! More chapters! Please
Really like the story so far just hope that chapter come soner qnd more daily since its a good story and hope you father gets well soon (post after reading chapter 4)
more more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more moremore more more more more
Reveal Spoiler Really good, I look forward to the continuation! He falls into my library without hesitation 140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...140...
OP from the start and please don’t drop the Fan-Fic Author I’m starting to get excited on the Action (Hentai) scenes..............Damn you 140 letters *fading*.............:3.......................(0w0)7
Reveal Spoiler
Update please🙏😭😭🙏🏻😭🙏🏻😭🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻😭😭😭😭😭😭🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻😭🙏🏻🙏🏻😭🙏🏻😭😭😭😭😭🙏🏻🙏🏻😭😭🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻😭😭😭😭😭🙏🏻😭😭😭😭😭🙏😭🙏😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭🙏🙏🙏🙏😭🙏🙏😭🙏🏻🙏🏻😭😭😭😭