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I really hope you don’t drop this and have been spending all this time writing because I really enjoyed this story and hope you continue I’d even spit ball ideas with you if you wanted
The wishes you picked were so trash. You contradict yourself saying i dont want a op mc then process to make him x100 stronger then a original the romance feels forced an the mc feels like a straight creep.
Reveal Spoiler I really hope this writer continues his story,I just read all af it and it’s a shame he stopped writing Please please please come back to this I need more of this
I don't recommend that you read this... it was good (with many inconsistencies and meaningless arcs, but still "good"), only the author just flushed everything down the toilet and flushed, first erasing a part of the MC's memory of the story , that was even acceptable, but he made it worse... he decided to add more worlds to it and completely erase the MC's memory from before he reincarnated (taking the full sense of him having reincarnated). it's just frustrating (it immediately drops the story after throwing it in the trash)... this author is basically useless (thanks for deleting my previous comment, which basically said the same thing 8D)
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not exactly my cup of tea, but I still wouldn't leave a bad review. where this might not tickle my fancy, it sure can capture the attention of others. don't let my review stop you from reading this if it interest you. it may be something that brings you joy
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hi great story love the hope ship aswell but i feel like he betrayed hope with not saying he wanted a heram thats when i dropped but still a great story i wont forget. from HYB
U know when the MC Sajid he wanted to not be too op I thought maybe this will be the one but that first wish though... I mean just with the powers of every vampire is enough for him to be the most powerful but to multiply it by 100 is a tad bit much don't you think😑😑😑
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Simply perfect!!! ..........................................................................................................................................
Very good story just wanted the author to post new chapters again: (((( ..............................................................
ok man it's super unrealistic character design and story development. so a complete stranger comes they(hope and company).trust him like there isn't any problem he just asks hope to show around out of nowhere they are not a least bit suspicious WOW. only reason world background has 5 star is bcz it's fan-fic
I like reading this in my freetime wich is literally like all day except 6 hours its a good story and has good character development so I suggest you read it 👍
I really like this story and harem choices for not let people discourage you from writing more and please continue I really like this story harem harem harem harem
Very good and love all the interesting twist in it. The comment has to be a 140 words so just ignore the rest jdjdjdndjdndjdjdjdjdjd
DUDE STILL THERE ? I HOPE THE AUTHOR WILL NOT DROP THIS NOVEL AND WILL CONTINUE WRITING IT AND WILL ALSO MAINTAIN THE UPDATE RATE NEW CHAPTERS PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEE 🔥🔥🔥🔥
Story has a good start and so far it's good, so please don't drop the novel it's been a long time since I've read a good novel. 📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖,
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Character has no substance. Guy : Fuck Me GIRL: FUCK YEAH The character has no personality, contradicts himself, but if you want to read, continue reading. Personally dont like it
If you want to read something with no development at all go ahead, First thing he does is ask to meet with Hope and he they let him, idk if that's not suspicious enough for them but i guess not. MC is some pathetic simp if you ask me. he's never liked any girls besides those on TVs and when he meets Hope for like what, the 2nd time? He goes up to her and suddenly kisses her for 5 minutes straight and she's perfectly fine with that, not even weirded out at all, it has no romance development at all lol. He goes and find that one coyote from TW that spent most of her life in the woods or something, he walks up to her and gives her food, not only did she just eat it not knowing it might be poisoned or anything she just goes and lay on his lap the moment she's done eating it, i guess his cooking skills made her forget he was a stranger just randomly pulling up.
This is a very good story, one of the best I've read and I hope you come back to continue working on it. I like your plan for jasper and keeping in the family and making him an understanding man.
Membros da seita anti-harém, esta fanfic não é para nós. Seita anti personagem OP, isso aqui não é para nós. Seita anti porcaria, isso não é para nós. Boa gramática.
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Please don't drop this Please don't drop this Please don't drop this Please don't drop this Please don't drop this Please don't drop this
MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! DON'T DROP IT!!! DON'T DROP IT!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! MORE!!! DON'T DROP IT!!! DON'T DROP IT!!!
I just have to say, I’ve been reading fanfics for a couple years now and you were actually my first read ever. I really enjoyed your style and have been trying to find more stories that hit my interest like yours, but that’s hard to find. I really hope you decided to come out of retirement and continue to write!
I really hope you don’t drop this and have been spending all this time writing because I really enjoyed this story and hope you continue I’d even spit ball ideas with you if you wanted
The wishes you picked were so trash. You contradict yourself saying i dont want a op mc then process to make him x100 stronger then a original the romance feels forced an the mc feels like a straight creep.
Reveal Spoiler I really hope this writer continues his story,I just read all af it and it’s a shame he stopped writing Please please please come back to this I need more of this
I don't recommend that you read this... it was good (with many inconsistencies and meaningless arcs, but still "good"), only the author just flushed everything down the toilet and flushed, first erasing a part of the MC's memory of the story , that was even acceptable, but he made it worse... he decided to add more worlds to it and completely erase the MC's memory from before he reincarnated (taking the full sense of him having reincarnated). it's just frustrating (it immediately drops the story after throwing it in the trash)... this author is basically useless (thanks for deleting my previous comment, which basically said the same thing 8D)
Reveal Spoiler not exactly my cup of tea, but I still wouldn't leave a bad review. where this might not tickle my fancy, it sure can capture the attention of others. don't let my review stop you from reading this if it interest you. it may be something that brings you joy
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hi great story love the hope ship aswell but i feel like he betrayed hope with not saying he wanted a heram thats when i dropped but still a great story i wont forget. from HYB
U know when the MC Sajid he wanted to not be too op I thought maybe this will be the one but that first wish though... I mean just with the powers of every vampire is enough for him to be the most powerful but to multiply it by 100 is a tad bit much don't you think😑😑😑
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Very good story just wanted the author to post new chapters again: (((( ..............................................................
ok man it's super unrealistic character design and story development. so a complete stranger comes they(hope and company).trust him like there isn't any problem he just asks hope to show around out of nowhere they are not a least bit suspicious WOW. only reason world background has 5 star is bcz it's fan-fic
I like reading this in my freetime wich is literally like all day except 6 hours its a good story and has good character development so I suggest you read it 👍
I really like this story and harem choices for not let people discourage you from writing more and please continue I really like this story harem harem harem harem
Very good and love all the interesting twist in it. The comment has to be a 140 words so just ignore the rest jdjdjdndjdndjdjdjdjdjd
DUDE STILL THERE ? I HOPE THE AUTHOR WILL NOT DROP THIS NOVEL AND WILL CONTINUE WRITING IT AND WILL ALSO MAINTAIN THE UPDATE RATE NEW CHAPTERS PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEE 🔥🔥🔥🔥
Story has a good start and so far it's good, so please don't drop the novel it's been a long time since I've read a good novel. 📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖,
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Character has no substance. Guy : Fuck Me GIRL: FUCK YEAH The character has no personality, contradicts himself, but if you want to read, continue reading. Personally dont like it
If you want to read something with no development at all go ahead, First thing he does is ask to meet with Hope and he they let him, idk if that's not suspicious enough for them but i guess not. MC is some pathetic simp if you ask me. he's never liked any girls besides those on TVs and when he meets Hope for like what, the 2nd time? He goes up to her and suddenly kisses her for 5 minutes straight and she's perfectly fine with that, not even weirded out at all, it has no romance development at all lol. He goes and find that one coyote from TW that spent most of her life in the woods or something, he walks up to her and gives her food, not only did she just eat it not knowing it might be poisoned or anything she just goes and lay on his lap the moment she's done eating it, i guess his cooking skills made her forget he was a stranger just randomly pulling up.
This is a very good story, one of the best I've read and I hope you come back to continue working on it. I like your plan for jasper and keeping in the family and making him an understanding man.
Membros da seita anti-harém, esta fanfic não é para nós. Seita anti personagem OP, isso aqui não é para nós. Seita anti porcaria, isso não é para nós. Boa gramática.
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I just have to say, I’ve been reading fanfics for a couple years now and you were actually my first read ever. I really enjoyed your style and have been trying to find more stories that hit my interest like yours, but that’s hard to find. I really hope you decided to come out of retirement and continue to write!