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Chapter 2: A new Start

I don't remember my name anymore...

I'm trying so hard to remember.... wait ...where is here?.....I forgot something...mm... what did i forget....urg... So lonely...what ...so how long has it been?.....

uh so i don't know what i used to be anymore i only have this endless thoughts that keep going around me but i don't understand.....wait...I feel ....yeah..i feel.... I remember now my name is Luke .....Luke.... I'm dead?...yeah..or probably in a long coma....Wait ...something is different than before.. the darkness is clearing up....yeah i can see a light ...wait is the light blue?...no,no,no i have already died, I cannot see another light! ....maybe the darkness has made me colourblind?.....no the light is there and it's getting bigger and bigger.....what's this place.... so cool... there are fluffy white things around me... what are they animals... no they look more like clouds... but what's with the blue background?.....wait.. those things are moving... THEY ARE ALIVE..... yeah they can help...

HELLO..HELLO..................................

I tried so many times to voice my thoughts, to talk but it appears i don't have a body anymore.....I don't understand what is going on...is like a big dream that you can't wake up from and keep going into different loops....wait if this is My dream maybe i can make things appear..like magic..yeah like those stories that i read...i know they are not real...but i can't help to wonder what IF....So Dammit ...this is my SPACE and i'm gonna imagine whatever i want.....

"THIS IS NOT YOUR SPACE"said a low rough voice that sounds as if they have a sore throat.

who said that?....wait is ANYBODY THERE...

"NO NEED TO INCREASE THE VOLUME OF YOUR THOUGHTS I CAN HEAR YOU WELL ENOUGH"

....uh...sorry...so who are you?...what am i doing here?...where is the exit?.. can i leave.?...

"I'M THE OWNER OF THIS SPACE, AND YOU ARE HERE BECAUSE YOU ARE DEAD AND THERE IS NO EXIT.YOU CANNOT LEAVE ...YOU CANNOT FIND YOUR PEACE...AT LEAST NOT YET"

so are you like a god..or something...oh what do you mean about me not finding my peace? .....

"YOU DIED BEFORE YOUR TIME WAS UP.....YOUR LUCK CHANGED FOR SOME REASON....AND WE ARE NOT SURE WHAT CAUSED THE DISTURBANCE ....BUT YOU GOT SO UNLUCKY THAT YOU GOT SICK WITH A SICKNESS THAT EFFECT 1 PERSON IN 1,000"

"I GOT TO SAY, THAT WAS SOME LUCK!"

what!...so ...this is your mess, you gotta fix it! like now!....

"SORRY KID..IS TOO LATE TO DO ANYTHING, THE ROOM YOU WERE BEFORE WAS THE ROOM WERE SOULS THAT DON'T BELONG TO EITHER SIDE END UP.... AND YOU SPEND AROUND A HUNDRED YEARS IN THAT PLACE , ALMOST COMPLETELY DISSOLVING INTO NOTHING.. YOU WERE ACTUALLY SO CLOSE WHEN I GOT YOU OUT.... YOUR BODY ON EARTH IS LONG GONE"

............so i can't go back nor i can move on?.....

"YEAH!... NOW YOU ARE GETTING IT!.... TOOK YOU LONG ENOUGH....SO YOU ARE STUCK WITH ME... WELL ... NOT IF YOU WANT TO SKIP THIS WORLD AND GO TO ANOTHER ... BUT I MEAN WHO WANTS TO GO!..RIGHT?"

..uh...so what is this thing about skipping worlds?... Is that better?...i mean here is great and everything but i want to you know...move on... i want to find my peace and you are great but...

SIGH

"UH... YOU KNOW, YOU ARE INTERESTING YOU ACTUALLY CAN COMMUNICATE WITH ME ...SO ...mmm...I'LL HELP YOU, BECAUSE I LIKE YOU AND YOU HAVE SO MUCH POTENTIAL...."

"SO WHAT KIND OF WORLD WOULD LIKE TO BE BORN IN?"

... i can choose a world?... if yes i would like to be born in a world of magic.. you know magic have always fascinated me ... like in the harry potter world and or in something similar if possible...

"VERY WELL, THAT WORLD IS POSSIBLE ... SO WHAT DO YOU TO BE BORN AS?"

REALLY!....I can actually live again... so i can choose which character i can be born as?....

"NO! YOU CANNOT CHOOSE A CHARACTER THAT ALREADY BELONGS IN THAT WORLD ....YOU HAVE TO BE BORN AS A NEW PERSON BUT YOU CAN CHOOSE YOUR BACKSTORY"

so you mean like i'm like and extra?....

"YES AND NO, FOR EXAMPLE YOU CAN CHOOSE TO BE BORN IN THE POTTER FAMILY AND BE HARRY'S TWIN BROTHER OR SOMETHING LIKE THAT... IT IS YOUR CHOICE ...BUT MAKE IT QUICK I CAN'T BE AROUND HERE ALL THE TIME!"

so that is how it works ... so let me see.. i don't want to born as Harry's brother as i will end up with his aunt family, and i don't want to starve to death... so ...i got it...one of my favourite characters of the books was Sirius Black... so i want to be reborn as his son if it's possible ...oh i also want to be born between another pure-blood , so can avoid some dangers from the story...yeah before i forget ,i want to live in good conditions at least until black escapes prison so like a good foster family or something...and so we are clear i also want to reborn as a male and if possible with good looks....

"THAT IS A LOT TO ASK, BUT SINCE IT WAS OUR FAULT YOU DIED I CAN MAKE IT POSSIBLE "

...So what happens now?...

"JUST A MOMENT I'M TRYING TO FIGURE A WAY SO THE ORIGINAL BACKSTORY IS NOT DAMAGED SO MUCH....FOUND IT... YEAH I'M JUST GOING TO TWIST IT ,JUST ENOUGH TO MAKE IT WORK...AND I GOTTA SAY IT IS A NICE TWIST..."

Wait what twist?.... hey why don't you answer?...hey...HEY ....

"IT IS COMPLETE... GOOD LUCK , YOU WOULD NEED IT.. TRY NOT TO DIE TOO SOON THIS TIME OK?"

WAIT...WAit....i said wait ...what did you do?....


CREATORS' THOUGHTS
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me again :)

so enjoy hope you'll like it

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