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Write a reviewThe title itself intrigues me to give this story a try and no doubt it is wonderful. This story has a bit of everything: Isekai, Romance, Reincarnation, Magic, and so on. That's the main reason I am really looking forward to the story to unfold. So far its a good read and lovely writing style. Kudo :)
Damn the isekai part took long. Please make the died part earlier. If you want to attract a wide range of readers then do this. If not then the readers will immediately drop it earlier than expected. You can see in isekai books that the first chapter contained the contents on how the mc died and what world he got reincarnated too. Well, I want to give my review more but my toothache like hell so I guess this is all.
Edward turning into kieran is interesting.. His human life is rather dull I say.. Kieran is so cute and curious about everything have to see whether he remember his past life. The path of choosing his after life is very nice.. only one suggestion keep paragraphs short..author do you love dandelion or lotus say.. I can say this much as it's still in developing phase.. nice attempt author
Reveal SpoilerLook, I'm biased because I wrote the book. I don't think it deserves a five star rating but if you'd check it out and let me know what you think, I would appreciate it very much.
The title itself intrigues me to give this story a try and no doubt it is wonderful. This story has a bit of everything: Isekai, Romance, Reincarnation, Magic, and so on. That's the main reason I am really looking forward to the story to unfold. So far its a good read and lovely writing style. Kudo :)
Damn the isekai part took long. Please make the died part earlier. If you want to attract a wide range of readers then do this. If not then the readers will immediately drop it earlier than expected. You can see in isekai books that the first chapter contained the contents on how the mc died and what world he got reincarnated too. Well, I want to give my review more but my toothache like hell so I guess this is all.
Edward turning into kieran is interesting.. His human life is rather dull I say.. Kieran is so cute and curious about everything have to see whether he remember his past life. The path of choosing his after life is very nice.. only one suggestion keep paragraphs short..author do you love dandelion or lotus say.. I can say this much as it's still in developing phase.. nice attempt author
Reveal Spoiler
Look, I'm biased because I wrote the book. I don't think it deserves a five star rating but if you'd check it out and let me know what you think, I would appreciate it very much.