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Chapter 70: Gotta get right outta here! 002/End

This was a rather short volume. I'll make the next one a bit longer.

In this volume, I made the action scenes sort of apparent. I could have dragged the fights on for a decent bit of time. The more chapters there are the better right? But I didn't want another Frieza vs Goku. The entire span was only 1 and a half hours after all.

I started getting slightly frustrated through this cuz the numbers weren't really going up. But then I concluded that I should stop worrying about the stats for a while. And start perfecting the earlier chapters. Mind you, it is my first time consistently writing this much without giving up halfway through.

It's been kind of exciting. But there's so much to fix rn that I'm getting overwhelmed. Let's just see where the story is headed for now.


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