Reincarnated as a Pay To Win Villain

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Father_Cosmos

Great story🫡. I just hope author won’t drop the story.

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diabolic_diablo

well I was out looking for copper but found gold..mc is not a traditional villain but one that could either help the protagonist or steal his chances depending on the situation and mission..so far no romance but looking at the current development there should be a harem(😉🤤😏)..mc does not 'cherish' jade girls and beats them if they are against him... till now story is pretty good..once more chapters have been uploaded I will give a more comprehensive review...update soon author

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anonymous_226

after many days I finally found an awesome cultivation novel with some new concepts , entertaining, interesting, good story. MY WHITE SPACE keep working hard n don't u dare to drop this novel 😤. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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StellaReads

Grammar is well placed. the story starts off cliche but it turns unique after a little while. the story is enjoyable and always leave me wanting more and more

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BOT_TUBE

Writing quality: very good no mistake s spotted yet also the way you have written it is very good.5 stars Story development : good for now as it has been just been 12 chapters also make him not destroy the protagonist like other villain novels. he can involve but not destroy the person to much.5 stars Character design: Very good but there aren't many characters so four stars. Update stability: fantastic as a lot of chapters has been released in a week pls add a goal for bonus chapters.5 stars World background: not much has been known about the world except sects,great families and cultivation realms so four stars from me

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Shehroz

Overall a very good novel. Obviously not great conecpt or anything new but still has good potential.

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MyWhiteSpace

Mandatory 5 star here.. Hi this is your author :) I am writing this review after finishing my 15th chapter and I am grateful for everyone that has supported this novel so far. This novel has a different concept of system unlike most of the other villain systems. You would either love/hate the novel as some of the novel plot is like the stereotype protagonist.... Finally, please let me know if I made any spelling/ grammar mistakes as English is not my first language :)

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FoxyTale

Its a good story to read when you have time because the overall feeling it gives off is that it’ not too much yet not to little

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KhunMisaki

A lost cost. I really like it, though fast pace, but the author didnt value his novel. It started good!

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puding_

after reading from chapter one until now I can proudly say that this novel is a good one, our mc is smart and op(obvi), but so far there's no romance or any sign of harem so for those that hated it. Give this novel a try you guys might like it who knows? And for our dear Author please have enough rest!!

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Aryan_Das_8652

Very Good Story until now. Looking forward to future development. MC is smart and op. I like that and hope more adventure .

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Elyas707

A good villain story with great potential from I have read so far (chapter29)i really hope it won't be dropped. Keep up the hard work Author.

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Seer_Of_Fate

Make it more exciting It doesn’t give blood rush

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Devil_Prince_Asura

Great story but if you create another pay to win story can you have something like this: Well, if I was you I would’ve made the main character transmigrated into a slave that was once a prince in the higher realm but was betrayed by his friend and his kingdom enemies. So his enemies crippled him, and made him a slave to humiliate him and through him into the lower realms. Later he learns that he has a pay to win system but the problem is he’s a slave and has no money. So he has to use his brain to solve how he will earn money either by killing the guards and the slave owner, or stealing all their money. Also give him a newbie gift package that helped him fix his crippled body and gain thieving, stealth skills first, and some money. The main character has to struggle in the beginning to gain wealth, strength, and women. Also, put them in a weak continent or realm first and work his way up to the top. You can still have heavens children and their villains all over to place to raise his strength. The pay to win system can still purchase anything.

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Poisoncheaker

Best read. Just when I was searching like mad for something new, this book came out without much expectation at first. But oh boy, I was wrong. This novel is one of the most enjoyable one.

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Azim_Sheaik

More more more!! w8ing for more chapters, don't listen to any bad reviews just read it your self and you will know if it's good or not.

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Ashton_Denton

Brand new just started reading just wanted to let the author know that I will only keep reading if it is free not a threat just so the author know

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Ego_Great

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Bob_Derp

Reading up to chapter 22, I could hardly find grammar errors. Well written story so far, with no loop holes. 5 Stars!

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Ethernal7

Despite the author discontinuing it, I think this story is pretty entertaining. I just want to talk about all the ways it could be better. First off, consistency. Like, the system gives MC a beginner's package in the 1st chapter, and it's never mentioned again. Also the use of system points is totally arbitrary. Just put some effort into making sure the system interface stays consistent, and most problems about the story, dissappear.Second, the way author notes are implemented is distracting. (A/N: I recommend doing something like this. Where you make a paragraph that is Cleary different from the rest.)That's all I really have to say. Dear author please consider these suggestions.