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me ha encantado el sistema mágico de el mundo de las semillas es muy divertido y lo que me gusto no por ser un pervertido zoofórico e etc. es que se pueda transformar en mujer y animales por ejemplo cuando se transformo en un knezel femenino y etc. me gustaría que siguieras puesto mas capítulos
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system, fking system. i hate any system. thank you author i don't wanna read you fanfic. ******"""""""""******** ******"""""""""******** ******"""""""""******** ******"""""""""********
author don't let the haters get you down I liked the scene were he turned into a female kneezle and I wish for more maybe have him decide that he likes it and wants more
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Fucked up story, Author is into zophilia and getting gangraped, i don't have the habit to kink shame, but the guy was like 5 to 8 years old at the time, thats just ****ed up man.
For my part, I found the story interesting, zoophilia does not bother me, since it is only written, I would not necessarily like to see it, I can simply skip the chapter, but based on the story, it is well structured, apart, Harry should launch a confusion spell on his uncles
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MY EYES, HOLY WATER WHERE ARE YOU. Fr though you are just nasty least add tags so we know what's gonna be in the story like I thought when I saw 18+ I was like YEssirr (I didn't read the reviews yet from now on never making that mistake again.) then this nigga(I'm black so chill) turns into a female cat wtf? Then gets gangbanged by *Shivers* male cats I actually started crying. (fr) I'm ok with fetishes but I'm straight my guy and into women and many others that read this are probably too. Idk if you was joking around or trolling if you werent but get some help.
i felt the need to write a review with all the hate in this section yes at chapter 8 some messed up stuff happens but every one who read the description knew stuff like this was likely on the side of rape that wast what happend the dude could turn back to a human at any time and leave he chose to continue thus not rape. This is the authors first time righting and should receive respect and if you dont like where the story is going give polite criticism and stop reading. I hope you see this author and come back to write some more hate is not what you should take just roll with the punches
What the hell first few chaps were like ok than it got super fucking weird like what the duck was the author thinking coulda been saved to but nah gotta fk animals weird man.........,
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honestly .... i could bear it that the AI from wmw ( Warlock of the Magus World) was not correct use, if you coppied somthing use it then as the same but it is not. the AI from wmw did not interact like your's . while i enjoyd the part from world seed and was on your way to do it right. but then the beastial $ex 18 + chapters there it was where it turned real wrong real fast. it had potential but it is lost .
My friend you seriously made him make love to cats, your imagination is really wild friend.🤣🤣🤣🤣😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😆☺️☺️😆☺️😆😆☺️😆☺️😆😆😆🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣😂
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So if he can tranform into male and female animals on a genetic level does that mean he's like loki who got banged by a giants horse and got pregnant and gave birth to sleipner the 8 leged horse of odin, so that means he can take the dragon hagrid gets from quiril and if it's female he can get a dragon army by breeding with them including phoenixes but please keep it all straight also there's that unicorn in the dark woods witch is female but dies because of voldemort also I'm okay with the xxx scenes it's okay also, PLEASE DON'T DROP!!!.😢
this is not for people who aren't into bestiality .................................................................................................................................................
To be as fair as possible, I don’t doubt that some people would like the R-18 scenes, however like a few fics I have seen it’s probably best if the author would add a warning of what the R-18 scene categories are before making it. In chapter 8 and - by extension - chapter 11 the kneazle **** was completely out of nowhere and turned many people off of the story when they could have just skipped it but be notified of any changes in the progress of the MC at the end of the current chapter or in the start of the next chapter. You can’t fix the past though and it might just be better if the author remakes the story or just adds warnings to each R-18 chapter. I’m NOT speaking from experience however so take everything I said with a grain of salt if the author decides to take my suggestions. Ps - the rating for updates is because he stopped 7 days from this review.
This is a good story and the idea is very good. All the reviews that say this isn't a good story mean that it isn't a good story for the. For me though it is one of the best and if you can get past the first R-18 scene you will find that he doesn't want to repeat that situation agian from what I understood. And you have to remember that it is also an ***** in a child's mind not just a child.
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Fucking disgusting novel with the MC turning into a female cat and getting raped by multiple male cats and enjoying it. Reading this made me almost break my phone. Absolutely disgusting fanfic what the hell. I feel physically ill.
unfortunately, it got removed I wish i made a backup of it ...................................................................................................................................................................
love chapter 8 love chapter 8 love chapter 8 love chapter 8 love chapter 8 love chapter 8 love chapter 8 love chapter 8 love chapter 8 love chapter 8 love chapter 8 love chapter 8 love chapter 8 love chapter 8 love chapter 8 love chapter 8 love chapter 8 love chapter 8 love chapter 8 love chapter 8 love chapter 8 love chapter 8 love chapter 8 love chapter 8 love chapter 8 love chapter 8 love chapter 8 love chapter 8 love chapter 8 love chapter 8 love chapter 8 love chapter 8 love chapter 8 love chapter 8 love chapter 8 love chapter 8 love chapter 8
me ha encantado el sistema mágico de el mundo de las semillas es muy divertido y lo que me gusto no por ser un pervertido zoofórico e etc. es que se pueda transformar en mujer y animales por ejemplo cuando se transformo en un knezel femenino y etc. me gustaría que siguieras puesto mas capítulos
Thanks for the hard Work 😍 Thanks for the hard Work 😍 Thanks for the hard Work 😍 Thanks for the hard Work 😍 Thanks for the hard Work 😍!
Reveal Spoiler system, fking system. i hate any system. thank you author i don't wanna read you fanfic. ******"""""""""******** ******"""""""""******** ******"""""""""******** ******"""""""""********
author don't let the haters get you down I liked the scene were he turned into a female kneezle and I wish for more maybe have him decide that he likes it and wants more
Thanks for the hard work 🙏 Thanks for the hard work 🙏 Thanks for the hard work 🙏 Thanks for the hard work 🙏 Thanks for the hard work 🙏
Thanks for the hard work 🙏 Thanks for the hard work 🙏 Thanks for the hard work 🙏 Thanks for the hard work 🙏 Thanks for the hard work 🙏
Reveal Spoiler Thanks for the hard work 🙏 Thanks for the hard work 🙏 Thanks for the hard work 🙏 Thanks for the hard work 🙏 Thanks for the hard work 🙏
Reveal Spoiler Fucked up story, Author is into zophilia and getting gangraped, i don't have the habit to kink shame, but the guy was like 5 to 8 years old at the time, thats just ****ed up man.
For my part, I found the story interesting, zoophilia does not bother me, since it is only written, I would not necessarily like to see it, I can simply skip the chapter, but based on the story, it is well structured, apart, Harry should launch a confusion spell on his uncles
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MY EYES, HOLY WATER WHERE ARE YOU. Fr though you are just nasty least add tags so we know what's gonna be in the story like I thought when I saw 18+ I was like YEssirr (I didn't read the reviews yet from now on never making that mistake again.) then this nigga(I'm black so chill) turns into a female cat wtf? Then gets gangbanged by *Shivers* male cats I actually started crying. (fr) I'm ok with fetishes but I'm straight my guy and into women and many others that read this are probably too. Idk if you was joking around or trolling if you werent but get some help.
i felt the need to write a review with all the hate in this section yes at chapter 8 some messed up stuff happens but every one who read the description knew stuff like this was likely on the side of rape that wast what happend the dude could turn back to a human at any time and leave he chose to continue thus not rape. This is the authors first time righting and should receive respect and if you dont like where the story is going give polite criticism and stop reading. I hope you see this author and come back to write some more hate is not what you should take just roll with the punches
What the hell first few chaps were like ok than it got super fucking weird like what the duck was the author thinking coulda been saved to but nah gotta fk animals weird man.........,
Reveal Spoiler continue pls pls pls .................................................................................................................................................
exp........................................................................................................................................................................................................................
honestly .... i could bear it that the AI from wmw ( Warlock of the Magus World) was not correct use, if you coppied somthing use it then as the same but it is not. the AI from wmw did not interact like your's . while i enjoyd the part from world seed and was on your way to do it right. but then the beastial $ex 18 + chapters there it was where it turned real wrong real fast. it had potential but it is lost .
My friend you seriously made him make love to cats, your imagination is really wild friend.🤣🤣🤣🤣😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😆☺️☺️😆☺️😆😆☺️😆☺️😆😆😆🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣😂
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So if he can tranform into male and female animals on a genetic level does that mean he's like loki who got banged by a giants horse and got pregnant and gave birth to sleipner the 8 leged horse of odin, so that means he can take the dragon hagrid gets from quiril and if it's female he can get a dragon army by breeding with them including phoenixes but please keep it all straight also there's that unicorn in the dark woods witch is female but dies because of voldemort also I'm okay with the xxx scenes it's okay also, PLEASE DON'T DROP!!!.😢
this is not for people who aren't into bestiality .................................................................................................................................................
To be as fair as possible, I don’t doubt that some people would like the R-18 scenes, however like a few fics I have seen it’s probably best if the author would add a warning of what the R-18 scene categories are before making it. In chapter 8 and - by extension - chapter 11 the kneazle **** was completely out of nowhere and turned many people off of the story when they could have just skipped it but be notified of any changes in the progress of the MC at the end of the current chapter or in the start of the next chapter. You can’t fix the past though and it might just be better if the author remakes the story or just adds warnings to each R-18 chapter. I’m NOT speaking from experience however so take everything I said with a grain of salt if the author decides to take my suggestions. Ps - the rating for updates is because he stopped 7 days from this review.
This is a good story and the idea is very good. All the reviews that say this isn't a good story mean that it isn't a good story for the. For me though it is one of the best and if you can get past the first R-18 scene you will find that he doesn't want to repeat that situation agian from what I understood. And you have to remember that it is also an ***** in a child's mind not just a child.
Reveal Spoiler Fucking disgusting novel with the MC turning into a female cat and getting raped by multiple male cats and enjoying it. Reading this made me almost break my phone. Absolutely disgusting fanfic what the hell. I feel physically ill.
unfortunately, it got removed I wish i made a backup of it ...................................................................................................................................................................