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Chapter 22: Editing

Today, I'm gonna spend the day going over my mistakes and fixing them.

I'll also change the characters' (like Dragon) ages since I'm well aware that I fcked up the timeline.

So, tomorrow will be a day to fix all my mistakes for the timeline!

(Translate to: I fcked up shits and I'm fixing them, so don't expect a chapter)

EDIT 1: It seems like Dragon was in his 30s when Roger was executed, so I'll fix it.

EDIT 2: Grammar issues, fixing timelines as well.

EDIT 3: Fixed the recruit camps stuff

EDIT 4: Fixed the names, grammar, and timeframes of some chapters.

EDIT 5: I fixed a lot of stuff, but there are bound to be some errors, so feel free to point them out. Also, I included some Roger in the previous chapters.


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