Reviews of Retirement is just the next great advancer. by Above_All - Webnovel

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Ballad

Ok so after reading story and giving it a fair shot I personally don't like it. The Story is a good idea but it's all over the place too much is happening randomly without context and it's just honestly hard to enjoy it. Not a bad story per se I've read way worst but it's just too messy, The plot makes no sense at all.

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Above_All

As of chapter 13

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Dumber_Singh

Fanfic STORY of Harry potter Universe and Marvel UNIVERSE... reached chappy 5.... ..... MC is hagrid from Harry Potter series. . . ........ [img=recommend]

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Ballad

Ok so after reading story and giving it a fair shot I personally don't like it. The Story is a good idea but it's all over the place too much is happening randomly without context and it's just honestly hard to enjoy it. Not a bad story per se I've read way worst but it's just too messy, The plot makes no sense at all.

2yr
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Above_All

As of chapter 13

2yr
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Dumber_Singh

Fanfic STORY of Harry potter Universe and Marvel UNIVERSE... reached chappy 5.... ..... MC is hagrid from Harry Potter series. . . ........ [img=recommend]

Reveal Spoiler
2yr
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