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This is a really good story, it has lots of potential! It starts a bit slow though, the story doesn't get interesting enough until Reyna has met the rest of the main characters, which is over chapter 10. Her journey up until then is quite interesting, but slow, and I could see why people would back out of it early. It gets kind of dark around some parts, especially the ones after you get a flashback back to Trophonia's past in the City of Angels. The chapters after that too. I feel like the author could have presented the backstory material in another way than a whole two chapters of flashbacks, but I'll give them points for not switching back and forth from past to present in those chapters. I look forward to the rest of it!!
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This is a really good story, it has lots of potential! It starts a bit slow though, the story doesn't get interesting enough until Reyna has met the rest of the main characters, which is over chapter 10. Her journey up until then is quite interesting, but slow, and I could see why people would back out of it early. It gets kind of dark around some parts, especially the ones after you get a flashback back to Trophonia's past in the City of Angels. The chapters after that too. I feel like the author could have presented the backstory material in another way than a whole two chapters of flashbacks, but I'll give them points for not switching back and forth from past to present in those chapters. I look forward to the rest of it!!
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Hey Webnovelist! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email kenreview@outlook.com We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). A brief introduction along with a few samples or links will be appreciated when reaching out. You might be our next top writer!