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I have been following the story when it only had fifty chapter and had seen the writing style of the author evolving as well as the character development. The starting part of the story is little rush but it's gets better with each character. It has been a great story and look forward to what is going to happen next in great magic world. Keep of the good work and release faster if possible.
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The grammar is pretty bad at first…. But by the end of chapter 8 it’s too terrible to go any further. This book had so much promise even if a bit rushed and with no character development for the female lead so far in the story. Thus author needs a proper translator or something to that effect.
I short-circuited my brain reading this, the story is good not your usual bland characters and world. "i feel sleepy now." "can you let me take a nap for a bit?"
Very nice to read. It has all the things i like: magic, op mc and harem. The grammer just needs a little polishing. Everything else is great.
I think the story is pretty good and very interesting. I would recommend to others, but this is just my opinion. Also have a great day everyone.
The book is really good, i like the story, the background and the overall developent. What i definitly dont like is the writing quality. Its not too difficult to get someone who corrects your grammar and putting it into a an auto checker is even easier. I dont know what happend but i hope it will turn better good work overall
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WHAT THE HELL!!!! This novel is really good, the only problem is the grammar... HEY!!! TO ALL EDITORS THERE, PLEASE HELP MR. AUTHOR!!!! it's so good i don't want to see a novel be ruined just for the grammar and what not about languages
This is that I have to go to the Moon by the way I don't have to go out of town for the weekend and I will be there at the same 😜🐱☺️😅🤣🙂 I have ah phone 77uicfkkdfkcmxls Zmfmflxmdmdfm the same time I don't have ah phone again and I will be there at the same time
Amazing world building and power system. For someone who doesn't have an editor, the author's grammar is so-so, but the amazing plot makes up for it. It's really an amazing novel and all I hope is for future improvements.
Hard to read grammar, the plot is nice to read and the story moves at a Pretty fast pace making it constantly enteraining but some of reincarnation and World building stuff gets a little hard to follw. Overall a worth it read if you can tolerate the bad grammar.
The story and world background are in fact very good - if you fight through spelling and grammar plus have some imagination... Problem is, writing quality is abysmal - especially in the first ~140-150 chapters. With abysmal, I mean 0 stars. The reader has to guess words (so you need to have imagination/be flexible), as the author writes things that he can impossibly mean. (I think there might be some kind of auto-correct which messes things up.) So spelling (even up to completely random words which sound similar) and grammar are the single largest problem up until ~140. Afterwards, there seems to be editing (which makes things soooo much better!). So 2 stars for writing, as things improve after all (and yet the larger part of chapters is still in bad quality). The latest chapters are marked "unedited" but seems even those are better than before (not that many mistakes). Character design is interesting as there is more to them than meets the eye (don't want to spoiler). My recommendation to the author: Please edit the chapters - especially the earlier ones, as you will mainly lose readers who will drop the story in rage. Your story has potential - but leaving things as they are is no good.
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I was drawn into the due how smooth everything was and how reasonable it was but after finding out that mc basically can't have any children just cause he awakened his bloodline it was kinda like a buzz plus I saw harem and r-18 In tags so I don't know if I want to continue or not cause honestly I don't see the point of being in a relationship with multiple girls if you can't have children it just seems to like that'll be boring like for all that he might as well put all his focus on getting stronger
first of all one of my favorite genre is romance although it isn't in the list of the genres. Instead there's Harem but I still expected the story to have a decent romance in it but no the romance part its quite disappointing for example Diana and ellie they were the first of kai woman but they barely get screen time almost as if they disappeared there isn't any kind of improvement in there relationships and honestly that's sucks. overall everything about the novel is pretty good the world development, the characters and the writing quality is quite good. and I also think the mc should improve more in the mental department cause he's too naive. the novel could have got a 5 star rating but the romance/harem part and the mc naivete drop the rating for me. and if you guys don't have problems with that I recommend it you guys then its pretty good.
The story is nice but the grammar and commas is killing it. Why don't the author write the novel without commas, it will be easier for all of us.
Can you check out my novel, Blood Ties(Ketsuen)? Also, I got the chills so many times toward the end of this book. It completely blew my mind. It managed to surpass my high expectations AND be nothing at all like I expected. Let me preface this with an apology. If I sound stunningly inarticulate at times in this review, I can't help it. My mind is completely fried. This novel was relentless. Take-no-prisoners. Driven. Fast/-paced. (non-stop, etc.)...race to the end. Rip-roaring.
the story is generic but good, with the characters it's the same. But why change something that works? The only thing that annoys is that the grammar is sometimes horrendous. although who am I to speak? after all I use the translator xD
Fully Honest opinion here, and only got 70 chapters in In terms of plot, I thought the story was great, as it was based around an OP MC, with actual legitimate reasons for being OP, however I felt it failed in execution(but first time author, so understandable, and may have improved further down the line) I felt the plot was just being to rushed in all aspects, the author didn't delve into the characters emotions, the *** scenes were too crude, and the MC just seemed to keep conveniently finding family members for the sake of the plot. That being said, I did like the character of the MC, the world background was well thought out, and left a lot of room for a wider world out there, and cant comment on stability of updates, as I never caught up to the series P.S found at the start the author just chucked a lot of fancy names and titles and the start which was pretty useless, as I had no idea what they were or the importance of them. Overall, although I am criticizing the novel and only got 70 chapter in, it was still an enjoyable read, and if reading quality isn't a massive bug for you, id go right ahead and read
The cover got me and then the book sent me into another dimension. Your sentence construction brings life to each line you construct. I can't wait to see what's in the next line each time I read.
Me encanta la novela es genial he esperado por mucho [img=update] ojla puede tener muchos capitulos mas para poder seguir leyendo., pero a la escritora muchos saludos espero.
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So I'm reading thus far and all I can say is that the writing quality gets better as the chapter continues. You can really determine that this novel is more than decent and readable for most readers and I commend the author for doing this. The stability of updates may not be daily but as you can see from the dates, there are a couple of chapters released in a day so that is heavily compensated for those who released daily. The world-building is adequate, not rushed, or not slow. You can truly savor as though you're one of the adventurers in this novel! Thank you author for the job well done.
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So confusing, I’ve read for 4 chapters already but I still didn’t see anything related to reincarnation. Can anyone explain this to me? Appreciates. I give 5 stars to boost the novel for now, but if no explanation received, I will reduce it. Keep up with the good work. See ya.
Hone? I love the idea of the story but the grammer and writing style leaves a lot to be desired. i think you should find a partner who can proof read your chapters and help make it flow better
This novel has me hooked the story, characters, and world building sucked me in and I want more. On the other hand grammar is pretty bad I would recommend to use grammerly it's free and will automatically fix basic grammar problems. I cheat and use it on my English papers lol. Keep up the good work cant wait too see what happens next!!!
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Yes yes yes!! This is story telling at its finest for sure 😊 . The build up in this story has you on edge at times also just how op can kai get. Legendary. Really hope for the sake of the joy I get from reading this story that it continues. Worthy of two power stones..reading marathon with only 6 hrs sleep in 3 days. Every waking hour reading this incredible work of genius. Would have awarded a 5 star 🌟 but some words are muddled eg. Take and talk but aside from that you got love this story . Cultivation, magic ancient ruins, OP Mc and sub party.
I have been following the story when it only had fifty chapter and had seen the writing style of the author evolving as well as the character development. The starting part of the story is little rush but it's gets better with each character. It has been a great story and look forward to what is going to happen next in great magic world. Keep of the good work and release faster if possible.
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The grammar is pretty bad at first…. But by the end of chapter 8 it’s too terrible to go any further. This book had so much promise even if a bit rushed and with no character development for the female lead so far in the story. Thus author needs a proper translator or something to that effect.
I short-circuited my brain reading this, the story is good not your usual bland characters and world. "i feel sleepy now." "can you let me take a nap for a bit?"
Very nice to read. It has all the things i like: magic, op mc and harem. The grammer just needs a little polishing. Everything else is great.
I think the story is pretty good and very interesting. I would recommend to others, but this is just my opinion. Also have a great day everyone.
The book is really good, i like the story, the background and the overall developent. What i definitly dont like is the writing quality. Its not too difficult to get someone who corrects your grammar and putting it into a an auto checker is even easier. I dont know what happend but i hope it will turn better good work overall
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Reveal Spoiler WHAT THE HELL!!!! This novel is really good, the only problem is the grammar... HEY!!! TO ALL EDITORS THERE, PLEASE HELP MR. AUTHOR!!!! it's so good i don't want to see a novel be ruined just for the grammar and what not about languages
This is that I have to go to the Moon by the way I don't have to go out of town for the weekend and I will be there at the same 😜🐱☺️😅🤣🙂 I have ah phone 77uicfkkdfkcmxls Zmfmflxmdmdfm the same time I don't have ah phone again and I will be there at the same time
Amazing world building and power system. For someone who doesn't have an editor, the author's grammar is so-so, but the amazing plot makes up for it. It's really an amazing novel and all I hope is for future improvements.
Hard to read grammar, the plot is nice to read and the story moves at a Pretty fast pace making it constantly enteraining but some of reincarnation and World building stuff gets a little hard to follw. Overall a worth it read if you can tolerate the bad grammar.
The story and world background are in fact very good - if you fight through spelling and grammar plus have some imagination... Problem is, writing quality is abysmal - especially in the first ~140-150 chapters. With abysmal, I mean 0 stars. The reader has to guess words (so you need to have imagination/be flexible), as the author writes things that he can impossibly mean. (I think there might be some kind of auto-correct which messes things up.) So spelling (even up to completely random words which sound similar) and grammar are the single largest problem up until ~140. Afterwards, there seems to be editing (which makes things soooo much better!). So 2 stars for writing, as things improve after all (and yet the larger part of chapters is still in bad quality). The latest chapters are marked "unedited" but seems even those are better than before (not that many mistakes). Character design is interesting as there is more to them than meets the eye (don't want to spoiler). My recommendation to the author: Please edit the chapters - especially the earlier ones, as you will mainly lose readers who will drop the story in rage. Your story has potential - but leaving things as they are is no good.
👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀[img=faceslap]NOICE👨🏿🦲👨🏿🦲👨🏿🦲👨🏿🦲👨🏿🦲diwqpjiqHDFWUOA;EFHHWEOAWEFHFBGAWHFWILEHFWILAFWAFWFSFFWFWADDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
Reveal Spoiler I was drawn into the due how smooth everything was and how reasonable it was but after finding out that mc basically can't have any children just cause he awakened his bloodline it was kinda like a buzz plus I saw harem and r-18 In tags so I don't know if I want to continue or not cause honestly I don't see the point of being in a relationship with multiple girls if you can't have children it just seems to like that'll be boring like for all that he might as well put all his focus on getting stronger
first of all one of my favorite genre is romance although it isn't in the list of the genres. Instead there's Harem but I still expected the story to have a decent romance in it but no the romance part its quite disappointing for example Diana and ellie they were the first of kai woman but they barely get screen time almost as if they disappeared there isn't any kind of improvement in there relationships and honestly that's sucks. overall everything about the novel is pretty good the world development, the characters and the writing quality is quite good. and I also think the mc should improve more in the mental department cause he's too naive. the novel could have got a 5 star rating but the romance/harem part and the mc naivete drop the rating for me. and if you guys don't have problems with that I recommend it you guys then its pretty good.
The story is nice but the grammar and commas is killing it. Why don't the author write the novel without commas, it will be easier for all of us.
Can you check out my novel, Blood Ties(Ketsuen)? Also, I got the chills so many times toward the end of this book. It completely blew my mind. It managed to surpass my high expectations AND be nothing at all like I expected. Let me preface this with an apology. If I sound stunningly inarticulate at times in this review, I can't help it. My mind is completely fried. This novel was relentless. Take-no-prisoners. Driven. Fast/-paced. (non-stop, etc.)...race to the end. Rip-roaring.
the story is generic but good, with the characters it's the same. But why change something that works? The only thing that annoys is that the grammar is sometimes horrendous. although who am I to speak? after all I use the translator xD
Fully Honest opinion here, and only got 70 chapters in In terms of plot, I thought the story was great, as it was based around an OP MC, with actual legitimate reasons for being OP, however I felt it failed in execution(but first time author, so understandable, and may have improved further down the line) I felt the plot was just being to rushed in all aspects, the author didn't delve into the characters emotions, the *** scenes were too crude, and the MC just seemed to keep conveniently finding family members for the sake of the plot. That being said, I did like the character of the MC, the world background was well thought out, and left a lot of room for a wider world out there, and cant comment on stability of updates, as I never caught up to the series P.S found at the start the author just chucked a lot of fancy names and titles and the start which was pretty useless, as I had no idea what they were or the importance of them. Overall, although I am criticizing the novel and only got 70 chapter in, it was still an enjoyable read, and if reading quality isn't a massive bug for you, id go right ahead and read
The cover got me and then the book sent me into another dimension. Your sentence construction brings life to each line you construct. I can't wait to see what's in the next line each time I read.
Me encanta la novela es genial he esperado por mucho [img=update] ojla puede tener muchos capitulos mas para poder seguir leyendo., pero a la escritora muchos saludos espero.
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So I'm reading thus far and all I can say is that the writing quality gets better as the chapter continues. You can really determine that this novel is more than decent and readable for most readers and I commend the author for doing this. The stability of updates may not be daily but as you can see from the dates, there are a couple of chapters released in a day so that is heavily compensated for those who released daily. The world-building is adequate, not rushed, or not slow. You can truly savor as though you're one of the adventurers in this novel! Thank you author for the job well done.
Reveal Spoiler So confusing, I’ve read for 4 chapters already but I still didn’t see anything related to reincarnation. Can anyone explain this to me? Appreciates. I give 5 stars to boost the novel for now, but if no explanation received, I will reduce it. Keep up with the good work. See ya.
Hone? I love the idea of the story but the grammer and writing style leaves a lot to be desired. i think you should find a partner who can proof read your chapters and help make it flow better
This novel has me hooked the story, characters, and world building sucked me in and I want more. On the other hand grammar is pretty bad I would recommend to use grammerly it's free and will automatically fix basic grammar problems. I cheat and use it on my English papers lol. Keep up the good work cant wait too see what happens next!!!
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Yes yes yes!! This is story telling at its finest for sure 😊 . The build up in this story has you on edge at times also just how op can kai get. Legendary. Really hope for the sake of the joy I get from reading this story that it continues. Worthy of two power stones..reading marathon with only 6 hrs sleep in 3 days. Every waking hour reading this incredible work of genius. Would have awarded a 5 star 🌟 but some words are muddled eg. Take and talk but aside from that you got love this story . Cultivation, magic ancient ruins, OP Mc and sub party.