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Alright my third iteration lol, This novel is not the usual run of the mill cultivation novel you see out there. MC won't just blindly slaughter or save every dog and chickens he sees on the road lol. Pros - 1. A collected, mature(not beta) and playful MC who is not too cold that his face looks like a frozen block of ice without any expressions despite his tragic past. 2. Interesting and entertaining story and plot lines that would keep you guys on edge and want to read more. The plot won't be simply about leveling up and jumping to higher realms like other novels but there would be gripping, dramatic and heart wrenching events. 3. MC's girls won't be two dimensional nor would they be left behind and forgotten. They each play a important role in the story. The Romance has and will be well fleshed out unlike usual novels where MC simply chances upon a beauty and insta meet and have snu-snu. 4. The world building has been structured properly and the power levels explained(glossary also included). MC's powers are intriguing(Necromancy included oops spoiler) and not cliched. It would be fun for you guys to see how he is going to use them. 5. I think the writing quality is at least satisfactory that won't bore holes in one's brain. Till at most Chap 80, there might be elementary mistakes and small grammatical mistakes, but trust me I will edit it as soon as I get the time. First time writing so can't help it. Cons - 1. Please somehow hold on till chap 20 as I feel like I might have tried to convey the information in a poor way. Maybe some might not feel that way but for those who does, I can say that you won't regret if u read on after chap 40. 2. The story might seem like a slow start since I wanted to build up the world first and convey it to readers. Maybe this might not have been the best way but it does pick up pace from chap 50 onwards. Again this depends on one's perspective while some might feel the pace is fine. 3. I don't know if this is a con or what...but some might feel the mysteries are too annoying or something like that. But please be patient as they are revealed along with the plot and you guys won't regret reading further. Where's the fun if all the mysteries are shown to you all at the beginning of the story itself? ---- Finally, thank you for taking the time to at least look at my novel and reading it. Also, appreciate all the powerstones and support you guys are giving me :D P.S (Harem haters pls avoid this novel and don't post a review saying that you hate harem since I already mentioned it in the tags, ty)
WRITING QUALITY: -A commen phenomenon with Original Authors sadly is poor writing quality, however this guy is an execption. The use of punctuation, paragraphs of reasonable length meaning not too long or short, and overall a readable flow which is what we readers expect. Why shouldnt we if were investing our time into a story? A story that will take us on a rollar coaster of emotions. 5/5 STABILITY OF UPDATES: Since Ive binged this novel up to current chapter... I don;t have a full pciture to comment on. What I do appreciate though is a novel past 200 chapters still going strong. Several OAs ive been reading have fallen of the wagon out of knowhere sadly. Thankfully this guy is not one of them (fingers crossed) 5/5 STORY DEVELOPMENT: The Story mentions that there current world is just small part of a ever larger universe. This is to be assumed and people at this point shouldn't be suprised. Putting that aside we have enough story to understand the situation while leaving some mystery which I feel is necessary. Also the author has put a timetable out for the MC to reach a certain cultivation level so it wont be dragged on in ths same place. Enough Urgency to move everything forward 5/5 CHARACTER DESIGN: This is by far one of my favirote novels in this regard. Iv'e read enough old authors and new original authors to see well done characters. MC - Man who started off on the extreme side of benevolence only to get betrayed. So one can expect him to pendlum swing the other way, however he dosen't stay there long after his first 2 women heal some of his emotional wounds and give him some faith in humans again. With his companion Luna also forcing him to face some of his repeating traumatic patterns that do more harm then good to those around him and more importantly himself. Great stuff. 5/5 Harem Members - The 1st one has been shown to have a rough history while manging to keep her optimistic view on life in contrast to the MC (I know he was dealth a worse hands, but I still think this point has merit). Her power is strong enough to stick with the MC for the long run. Good Stuff. Dont need a weak lover in the cultivation world 2nd women while some may view her as too agreeable with the MC I like her overall. Growing up alone with no connection.. to finding the MC and not wanting to let go developing a possesive attitude border line Yandere.. to slowley understanding the way people interact all makes sense. Is it emotionally healthy? No, but how could it be given the world and her experiences. Others: Several potentail allies have been shown. Too early to say if they'll stick with the MC or not given the current plot. Still well thoughout charcters from the looks of it so far. WORLD BACKGROUND: This novel despite being over 250+ chapters in is still very mysterious. Multiple demensions if you zoom out to the max. While the current land mass may or may not be the only one. I wanted to give this a 4/5, however I understand its still too early to know such information so I'll give it a 5/5 in hopes clarity will happen soon. OVERALL: Worth the read. Truly. Cultviation stucture is easy to understand, charcters have depth and are develpoing. Story is progressing at a resonable pace. 5/5
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um author I think 11 months waiting is far more than many readers can get patient I mean if the novel is not to your expectations I don't know but as a reader who read the 801 chapters you mustn't Leave it like this it doesn't deserve it
are you going to countinue this novel or not? i am at 580 and i am having fun. if it's not going to countinue i better stop now.
super writing, but complete the story don't leave behind incomplete story, give it a good ending please .
AUTHORRRR why are you so freaking good ! WHYY? It is really hard to come by stories of this quality for cultivation but there has been no update for 8 months almost :O This is definitely one of the best for its genre on heree! So all I am asking is could you make maybe 3000-10,000+ more chapters thanks !
normally I don't care about how cliché is the plot of the book and this one is fun to read, so you should give this one a try
I’m at chalter 40 and things seem good so far. Can someone tell me when the mc is no longer the princess prisoner so I can skip.
In the beginning 100 chaps, mc seemed a bit stupid. He was making some stupid mistakes. But later on story improved. Even though his ability to kill people and then control their corpses seemed too overpowered, still the way he made use of those corpses, specially gale prince was quite clever. Also, I liked the friendship that mc was developing with rebel leader triton. But later that person being as the female rewa came as surprise to me. Although it was a good surprise, but i wished a good male friend also for mc. But i think it is impossible to wish a secondary male in harem stories. Overall it's a good story
The author nerfed the mc even though the mc should have more power from lifesteal. ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ………
One of the best Web Novels. I really love to see the romance between Valentina & Damien. Authors, please don't add any more wives to Damien's harem. Except for harem, everything is good.
This story is about a MC that is betrayed by people he trust and protected before jumping off the cliff and being reincarnated (but feels more like a transmigration). The storyline is fairly solid and is generally enjoyable to read. I rated this a 3.8, primarily because of the annoying plot armor that saves the MC, time after time due his 'machonism' to take on more than he can handle or unwillingness to be looked down upon. The MC just never seems to learn from his mistakes and as of late, his wariness of being used and betrayed again seems to be gone, replaced by your typical headstrong hero who voluntarily becomes the kingdom's savior. The MC is a sword master, but as of ch 90 or so, he has been in life and death situations saved only by plot armor without even wielding a sword all because he wants to experience his other skills according the author's comment. The harem element also seems forced, such as the random cat girl that saves the MC just has he was about to be killed after being greedy for some spirit plant.
loved the story so far till chap 343.... But after i really dont like it as whenever i read reincarnated stories i hate when MC's past is brought in . Although i havent read but all the lovers of mc are going to the girls of his past life who were closer to him
keep up the great work! This story is excellent and can't wait for you to finish it as you intend. Can't wait to see his anti-god power develop even further and the final battle of the novel I'm expecting it to be epic.
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can someone recommend a novel like this . . . . . . . . . 💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕
Looking forward for the future author! Keep with the good work!!! The characters have a nice chemistry together, and the interactions between then is pretty good too! Keep establishing good mysteries but don't forget to solve it
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its good but the start is so slow as a snail which is not my cup of tea the explanation is so long that could have been explain in short its feel like I'm reading Martial Peak novel again because of long explanation but i think it's good for not rushing the story I'm currently at chapter 37 which i don't if I should continue or not but yeah that's it... I have read a lot of book from this author so I think you will not be disappointed if you continue to read this.
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First long story on Wenbovel I've completely caught up with, now I feel empty :-( Honestly give this story a chance, it starts off slow but picks up quite nicely after the first 50 chapters, and the best part is the harem isn't forced or rushed at all
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The writing quality is good , the story is interesting and glued together , nothing bothers me too much , the girls are well written with personality although somewhat cliche , decent amount of snu snu , worth the time spent reading.
One of my favorite novel so far... Well can you recommend me good novel like this..................................................................................
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Very good novel I love the characters And they way the story is written! I cant wait for him to get a good power up soon so that he doesn’t Have to hold back as much!
I loved your story. A perfect series. Any one who wants to start go ahead you wont regret it. Only thing I think is it is a shower pace story compared to normal so expect large Arc. In the starting it felt similar to Against the god. Author can you please update glossary. It will be easier know cultivation levels for soul and some details about his women.
Currently read enough to write this review. The author did a great job in making the start enticing. Although the start is pretty slow, but hey what makes a great structure is its foundation.(pros and cons at the bottom if this is too long) I'll start with the MC. He had some dark sht past. In his past life he has been dubbed as a hero because he never killed anyone. Until he was betrayed by most of his friends whom he once protected (protected them from what? go and read the novel). He got reincarnated into a cultivation world as an adopted son of a patriarch. He also grew massive trust issue (well who wouldn't) and is now a lot more careful. If you have questions about his real family and if he cares for them, well they are not shown yet but hopefully soon(yes I am also excited for some familial fluff). The few characters that have appeared are well written. They are not flat. They are not those types who just sit on the side and cheer from what I've read. I can already see that this is not a one man army novel where the mc takes on the whole world alone. The harem is not rushed which is good. I can see that the author is planning on building a proper solid relationship with the potential harem member(s).That means r-18 will come a bit later(But Im sure author wont fail us when the time comes.). From what I said you can already guess that the romance in this novel is going to be great. The world building is amazingly done so far and has lots of potential. The mysteries being served to us are like a box full of treasures but you cant open it, it makes you want to dig into the authors brain and unveil them. I'll probably retract this review and write another one once more chapters are out. So to sum it up Pros: 1. The story is written well with its fair share of mysteries. 2. The harem is not being rushed 3. The world background is currently on its infancy but its got tons of potential 4. So far the characters that have shown up are well designed. For the development we'll have to see in the future Cons: 1. The slow start 2. Some lengthy explanations which could have been said with fewer words great novel and its worth giving a go
Alright my third iteration lol, This novel is not the usual run of the mill cultivation novel you see out there. MC won't just blindly slaughter or save every dog and chickens he sees on the road lol. Pros - 1. A collected, mature(not beta) and playful MC who is not too cold that his face looks like a frozen block of ice without any expressions despite his tragic past. 2. Interesting and entertaining story and plot lines that would keep you guys on edge and want to read more. The plot won't be simply about leveling up and jumping to higher realms like other novels but there would be gripping, dramatic and heart wrenching events. 3. MC's girls won't be two dimensional nor would they be left behind and forgotten. They each play a important role in the story. The Romance has and will be well fleshed out unlike usual novels where MC simply chances upon a beauty and insta meet and have snu-snu. 4. The world building has been structured properly and the power levels explained(glossary also included). MC's powers are intriguing(Necromancy included oops spoiler) and not cliched. It would be fun for you guys to see how he is going to use them. 5. I think the writing quality is at least satisfactory that won't bore holes in one's brain. Till at most Chap 80, there might be elementary mistakes and small grammatical mistakes, but trust me I will edit it as soon as I get the time. First time writing so can't help it. Cons - 1. Please somehow hold on till chap 20 as I feel like I might have tried to convey the information in a poor way. Maybe some might not feel that way but for those who does, I can say that you won't regret if u read on after chap 40. 2. The story might seem like a slow start since I wanted to build up the world first and convey it to readers. Maybe this might not have been the best way but it does pick up pace from chap 50 onwards. Again this depends on one's perspective while some might feel the pace is fine. 3. I don't know if this is a con or what...but some might feel the mysteries are too annoying or something like that. But please be patient as they are revealed along with the plot and you guys won't regret reading further. Where's the fun if all the mysteries are shown to you all at the beginning of the story itself? ---- Finally, thank you for taking the time to at least look at my novel and reading it. Also, appreciate all the powerstones and support you guys are giving me :D P.S (Harem haters pls avoid this novel and don't post a review saying that you hate harem since I already mentioned it in the tags, ty)
WRITING QUALITY: -A commen phenomenon with Original Authors sadly is poor writing quality, however this guy is an execption. The use of punctuation, paragraphs of reasonable length meaning not too long or short, and overall a readable flow which is what we readers expect. Why shouldnt we if were investing our time into a story? A story that will take us on a rollar coaster of emotions. 5/5 STABILITY OF UPDATES: Since Ive binged this novel up to current chapter... I don;t have a full pciture to comment on. What I do appreciate though is a novel past 200 chapters still going strong. Several OAs ive been reading have fallen of the wagon out of knowhere sadly. Thankfully this guy is not one of them (fingers crossed) 5/5 STORY DEVELOPMENT: The Story mentions that there current world is just small part of a ever larger universe. This is to be assumed and people at this point shouldn't be suprised. Putting that aside we have enough story to understand the situation while leaving some mystery which I feel is necessary. Also the author has put a timetable out for the MC to reach a certain cultivation level so it wont be dragged on in ths same place. Enough Urgency to move everything forward 5/5 CHARACTER DESIGN: This is by far one of my favirote novels in this regard. Iv'e read enough old authors and new original authors to see well done characters. MC - Man who started off on the extreme side of benevolence only to get betrayed. So one can expect him to pendlum swing the other way, however he dosen't stay there long after his first 2 women heal some of his emotional wounds and give him some faith in humans again. With his companion Luna also forcing him to face some of his repeating traumatic patterns that do more harm then good to those around him and more importantly himself. Great stuff. 5/5 Harem Members - The 1st one has been shown to have a rough history while manging to keep her optimistic view on life in contrast to the MC (I know he was dealth a worse hands, but I still think this point has merit). Her power is strong enough to stick with the MC for the long run. Good Stuff. Dont need a weak lover in the cultivation world 2nd women while some may view her as too agreeable with the MC I like her overall. Growing up alone with no connection.. to finding the MC and not wanting to let go developing a possesive attitude border line Yandere.. to slowley understanding the way people interact all makes sense. Is it emotionally healthy? No, but how could it be given the world and her experiences. Others: Several potentail allies have been shown. Too early to say if they'll stick with the MC or not given the current plot. Still well thoughout charcters from the looks of it so far. WORLD BACKGROUND: This novel despite being over 250+ chapters in is still very mysterious. Multiple demensions if you zoom out to the max. While the current land mass may or may not be the only one. I wanted to give this a 4/5, however I understand its still too early to know such information so I'll give it a 5/5 in hopes clarity will happen soon. OVERALL: Worth the read. Truly. Cultviation stucture is easy to understand, charcters have depth and are develpoing. Story is progressing at a resonable pace. 5/5
Reveal Spoiler um author I think 11 months waiting is far more than many readers can get patient I mean if the novel is not to your expectations I don't know but as a reader who read the 801 chapters you mustn't Leave it like this it doesn't deserve it
are you going to countinue this novel or not? i am at 580 and i am having fun. if it's not going to countinue i better stop now.
super writing, but complete the story don't leave behind incomplete story, give it a good ending please .
AUTHORRRR why are you so freaking good ! WHYY? It is really hard to come by stories of this quality for cultivation but there has been no update for 8 months almost :O This is definitely one of the best for its genre on heree! So all I am asking is could you make maybe 3000-10,000+ more chapters thanks !
normally I don't care about how cliché is the plot of the book and this one is fun to read, so you should give this one a try
I’m at chalter 40 and things seem good so far. Can someone tell me when the mc is no longer the princess prisoner so I can skip.
In the beginning 100 chaps, mc seemed a bit stupid. He was making some stupid mistakes. But later on story improved. Even though his ability to kill people and then control their corpses seemed too overpowered, still the way he made use of those corpses, specially gale prince was quite clever. Also, I liked the friendship that mc was developing with rebel leader triton. But later that person being as the female rewa came as surprise to me. Although it was a good surprise, but i wished a good male friend also for mc. But i think it is impossible to wish a secondary male in harem stories. Overall it's a good story
The author nerfed the mc even though the mc should have more power from lifesteal. ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ……… ………
One of the best Web Novels. I really love to see the romance between Valentina & Damien. Authors, please don't add any more wives to Damien's harem. Except for harem, everything is good.
This story is about a MC that is betrayed by people he trust and protected before jumping off the cliff and being reincarnated (but feels more like a transmigration). The storyline is fairly solid and is generally enjoyable to read. I rated this a 3.8, primarily because of the annoying plot armor that saves the MC, time after time due his 'machonism' to take on more than he can handle or unwillingness to be looked down upon. The MC just never seems to learn from his mistakes and as of late, his wariness of being used and betrayed again seems to be gone, replaced by your typical headstrong hero who voluntarily becomes the kingdom's savior. The MC is a sword master, but as of ch 90 or so, he has been in life and death situations saved only by plot armor without even wielding a sword all because he wants to experience his other skills according the author's comment. The harem element also seems forced, such as the random cat girl that saves the MC just has he was about to be killed after being greedy for some spirit plant.
loved the story so far till chap 343.... But after i really dont like it as whenever i read reincarnated stories i hate when MC's past is brought in . Although i havent read but all the lovers of mc are going to the girls of his past life who were closer to him
keep up the great work! This story is excellent and can't wait for you to finish it as you intend. Can't wait to see his anti-god power develop even further and the final battle of the novel I'm expecting it to be epic.
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can someone recommend a novel like this . . . . . . . . . 💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕
Looking forward for the future author! Keep with the good work!!! The characters have a nice chemistry together, and the interactions between then is pretty good too! Keep establishing good mysteries but don't forget to solve it
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its good but the start is so slow as a snail which is not my cup of tea the explanation is so long that could have been explain in short its feel like I'm reading Martial Peak novel again because of long explanation but i think it's good for not rushing the story I'm currently at chapter 37 which i don't if I should continue or not but yeah that's it... I have read a lot of book from this author so I think you will not be disappointed if you continue to read this.
Nice...............................................................,..............,........,........, Nice...............................................................,..............,........,........,
First long story on Wenbovel I've completely caught up with, now I feel empty :-( Honestly give this story a chance, it starts off slow but picks up quite nicely after the first 50 chapters, and the best part is the harem isn't forced or rushed at all
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The writing quality is good , the story is interesting and glued together , nothing bothers me too much , the girls are well written with personality although somewhat cliche , decent amount of snu snu , worth the time spent reading.
One of my favorite novel so far... Well can you recommend me good novel like this..................................................................................
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Very good novel I love the characters And they way the story is written! I cant wait for him to get a good power up soon so that he doesn’t Have to hold back as much!
I loved your story. A perfect series. Any one who wants to start go ahead you wont regret it. Only thing I think is it is a shower pace story compared to normal so expect large Arc. In the starting it felt similar to Against the god. Author can you please update glossary. It will be easier know cultivation levels for soul and some details about his women.
Currently read enough to write this review. The author did a great job in making the start enticing. Although the start is pretty slow, but hey what makes a great structure is its foundation.(pros and cons at the bottom if this is too long) I'll start with the MC. He had some dark sht past. In his past life he has been dubbed as a hero because he never killed anyone. Until he was betrayed by most of his friends whom he once protected (protected them from what? go and read the novel). He got reincarnated into a cultivation world as an adopted son of a patriarch. He also grew massive trust issue (well who wouldn't) and is now a lot more careful. If you have questions about his real family and if he cares for them, well they are not shown yet but hopefully soon(yes I am also excited for some familial fluff). The few characters that have appeared are well written. They are not flat. They are not those types who just sit on the side and cheer from what I've read. I can already see that this is not a one man army novel where the mc takes on the whole world alone. The harem is not rushed which is good. I can see that the author is planning on building a proper solid relationship with the potential harem member(s).That means r-18 will come a bit later(But Im sure author wont fail us when the time comes.). From what I said you can already guess that the romance in this novel is going to be great. The world building is amazingly done so far and has lots of potential. The mysteries being served to us are like a box full of treasures but you cant open it, it makes you want to dig into the authors brain and unveil them. I'll probably retract this review and write another one once more chapters are out. So to sum it up Pros: 1. The story is written well with its fair share of mysteries. 2. The harem is not being rushed 3. The world background is currently on its infancy but its got tons of potential 4. So far the characters that have shown up are well designed. For the development we'll have to see in the future Cons: 1. The slow start 2. Some lengthy explanations which could have been said with fewer words great novel and its worth giving a go