Chapter 27: Another Notice And BIG Question for you all
I am surprised that so many of you still want to read more of this, so I have decided to begin chapters again in the coming month.
The biggest issue with this fanfic was that I made it before I learned how to plan stuff out, so I have an idea of where I wanted it to be but messed up on how to get there. This fanfic has most of what I wanted but I noticed it has flow issues and unnecessary stuff.
Basically, this notice is that I am going to prob rewrite this fanfic, and change some stuff around. It will mostly remain unchanged but I am thinking of removing Mason from the story.
I had an idea of both of them fighting for control and mostly put him in as a way for Ruby to have memories of other fictions, but I am unsure if that is still a good idea. I feel like it adds unnecessarily complicated aspects to the story so I'm asking here to see if you would like for me to keep him and not rewrite or remove him.
With or without him, the story won't change much, and now that the new RWBY volume released, I can add emotions I didn't to Ruby. Mason pretty much is just a character I put in for some conflict/to give Ruby memories of not only RWBY but also other fandoms.
Anyways besides this one, I plan on continuing some other fanfics/rewriting some over this month as once I finish some big projects in my school I will have a lot of free time. I'm tellin ya, me having to work on a 15 page paper+memo+presentation over a random topic takes a lot of time.
Please feel free to comment on this post and depending on how anyone who reads this feels, I will keep or remove mason. I will still think about a possible rewrite or something else to make some aspects more clear, but the Mason problem is the major focus.
Thanks for all the support/comments asking for more, I will try my best with releasing some more in the coming month/months. If not of this then my adventure time fanfic.
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