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By the command of His Majesty, 31st emperor of the Carnel Empire, the 3rd prince Krauss Vortemund Carnel is to enrol in the Greenwich Institute of Magic and Combat.
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2 years ago, the emperor fell ill. With seven descendants of imperial birth and no confirmed crown prince or princess, the Carnel Empire had been divided into multiple factions internally.
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Charlotte. We are of the Albrecht family. The best Assassins in the Carnel Empire since it was founded. We serve not in war but behind the scenes. Assassination, spying, subterfuge, that is what we excel at. The ancestor stood beside the first emperor when they founded the empire and promised him to protect him and his empire while living in darkness.
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That damn intel was wrong. It seems like the target was ready for assassins to attack him and changed his schedule. If this was not an urgent mission, the best way to do this mission would have been to slowly infiltrate his residence as a maid and poison his food or slit his throat while sleeping.
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"I don't trust you."
"Then don't. I don't trust you either."
"Good then."
I got up to leave. However, before I could do so he called out to me again.
"Even if we don't trust each other, I still hope to work together."
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A world of magic and cultivation, with Saints and Legends that exist only in myths. This is the story of the love between an imperial prince and a genius assassin.
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I mean there's not much to say about this one, it's a pretty good (cultivation or magic, your power levels sound magic but I don't know lol?) set in kingdom fantasy novel . All generic but it's good. Author is generally good in writing but punctuation is not good, there are some errors and parts where it is awkward and does not flow well. Can definitely be improved. Characters are very shallow thus far, consider developing them because even now 6 chapters in they feel 2D despite you spending so much screentime on them and giving so much world description. The constant POV changes in first person are very awkward and ruins immersion, it can be executed better, may just be me but I found using first person strictly for one character and third person for the rest to be much better and more immersive from a readers perspective.
To keep it short for the reader: I enjoyed reading it. The writing quality is above average to the stuff you find here. The characters aren't always 2d. There is still a lot of room for improvement, but let's be honest, the novel only has like 7-chapters. It will become better. A theory chapter about the power-up system, or paths someone could concentrate on would also be nice. Questions such as can someone walk the path of a mage and combatant are questions I have for the time being. Sure, info dumps are boring, but some readers might be more interested in it. It also helps with understanding the novel better. But stuff such as an auxiliary chapter are things the author should focus on later on^^. As someone else already pointed out, the constant changing of the POV is sometimes executed awkwardly and could be done better. But these are just some minor stuff that will be improved on after getting more experience with writing^^. ********************************************************************** Now it's time for some criticism/ stuff the author should improve. Okay, let's start with what the reader always looks at first. Title, book cover, and summary. The book cover actually looks quite good, and I like it a lot. But as an author, you should take a quick look at the books at "New Tropes," "New Fiction" and "Potential Starlet" category, and ask yourself the question: "Would you as a reader, choose your book based on your book cover?" If your answer is yes, then it's good. The second problem is your summary. It's way too short. Whether someone reaches for a book or not is decided by the book cover. Whether someone opens the book is often decided by your summary. To put it nicely, your summary has a lot of room for improvement. To put it not so nice. Your summary is literally your tags ;) "Magic, kingdom, romance," are things that every fourth book here contains. What makes your book stand out from the others? Based on your summary the reader asks himself the following question: "Why should I, the reader pick your novel, from a new author if I can read about magic, kingdom, romance from a prominent author. (For example supreme magus: kingdom, magic, romance. I know your novel is different but that are some of the questions a reader would ask after reading your summary) So stop procrastinating and write a proper summary of the book!!!!!!!!! XD I hope I didn't word my review too harshly.
Intriguing! I feel like I am reading a light novel probably because of the length. I can see the plot even it just 8 chapters and the scenes were perfectly describe. Grammar is good! (I'm a bit envious xD) and the characters design was also great. The change of POVs however, was a bit frequent to me. Maybe because I was used to read novels with POVs being only change in the next chapter and not in the same one. I can also suggest to explain more the skills/arts they were using so I can imagine what is it (me smol brain has smol capacity xD) Anyways this novel has a great potential. It was clean to read and you won't be bored in every chaps since it was always intriguing! The author know his/her style so all I can say was— "Keep it up, Author![img=recommend]"
Now this is a plot that starts right from the first chapter. I like the portrayal of characters and the shifting perspectives. There isn't much to say about the world building as of yet (just 7 chapters in) but the power level seems systematic and well-planned. What I really find fascinating about this story is the overall flow, like really, I never felt the need to pause as a reader. This is a story that actively engages with it's audience. Definitely check it out.
Nice work!!! the story started on a very intense note. It's so gripping and nail biting novel. Do check out 👍👍 keep updating, author 😁 never stop!!
The Story is fascinating to an extent that grabs readers attention. Beautiful Pictures are created through these words. I love this Novel. I'm looking forward to it ! Great Work, Author.
(says chapter 2, i read all 5 chapters on my phone but am writing on my computer) My only problem with this is that it's too short right now :\ i love this novel so far, it's a really nice read so far and the double main characters/pov makes it even better and even more interesting. I have no problems with the grammar as well, the writing flows fairly nicely. Can't wait to see how this story is fleshed out, and to read further interactions between our 2 protagonists
A 5-star review! I want to describe the story as colorful and lively. I like how the characters were portrayed, and how the setting was described. The names of the characters and places are also cool and they fit the theme. Can't say that much for pacing yet, because the chapters are still few. Keep uploading, and good luck, author! ^^,
such a nice read. I love the flow of the story, it's top-notch. The power ranking and leadership portrayed in this book is very intriguing and nice. Will love to read more
This is a very interesting story featuring a rather prominent MC. Krauss... I enjoyed his wits and genuine leadership qualities. So far, he is definitely a worthy character for my investment, the second being obviously Charlotte. the writing quality is top notch and I enjoyed the read and the flow of the story. the Power ranking system is another feature that I enjoyed and am long forward to see it explored in a deeper fashion. excellently work Author
Hey guys, the author here. This time I tried to write something with a little bit of combat in it. Since it is my first time a cultivation/fantasy type novel, I have kept the power levels simple. Hope you guys enjoy it.