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Very interesting story. Good detailing of the world and descriptions of the characters are pleasant to read. Good luck author. thanks for the fantasy.
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spelt SchrΓΆdinger wrong multiple times, totally unreadable :p cumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcum
Word Count : 15k + Amount of swears: Barely Good plot: Yes, but rather wonky from time to time. Character design: Decent and memorable. A good one .
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and then I think it's the right thing about it that we can get the money out of nowhere and the game is the only way to make out the difference and I woke
The premise of the story is cool. The characters have potential. But it an in coherrent mess which seems to be a first draft. I wouldn't recommend it. I hope that the author keeps going and gets better. They seem to have potential.
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I think the review s are purchased because this is hard to follow and needs fast pass very early on in a better book I've seen people rage about that but not on this one.
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u are you in a det you are wrong about your house or your friends and the unicorns mostly in your life but they don't have a option for the last one or elders
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Reveal Spoiler
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Hi, I really like this book. Would you be interested in putting it on Mega Novel too? If you ever have the intention, just message or contact me through email: charlotte @meganovel.com
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Very interesting story. Good detailing of the world and descriptions of the characters are pleasant to read. Good luck author. thanks for the fantasy.
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Reveal Spoiler [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
spelt SchrΓΆdinger wrong multiple times, totally unreadable :p cumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcumcucumcumcumcumcumcumcum
Word Count : 15k + Amount of swears: Barely Good plot: Yes, but rather wonky from time to time. Character design: Decent and memorable. A good one .
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and then I think it's the right thing about it that we can get the money out of nowhere and the game is the only way to make out the difference and I woke
The premise of the story is cool. The characters have potential. But it an in coherrent mess which seems to be a first draft. I wouldn't recommend it. I hope that the author keeps going and gets better. They seem to have potential.
Nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice
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I think the review s are purchased because this is hard to follow and needs fast pass very early on in a better book I've seen people rage about that but not on this one.
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u are you in a det you are wrong about your house or your friends and the unicorns mostly in your life but they don't have a option for the last one or elders
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Reveal Spoiler πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
Hi, I really like this book. Would you be interested in putting it on Mega Novel too? If you ever have the intention, just message or contact me through email: charlotte @meganovel.com