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wanted to ask that does the system become the mc and what happens to the og mc, before reading
when I started reading this book I was like how will a system be in charge and take over while the human watches I thought it will be boring but it's really good and I was hooked right from beginning I would have given full starts but I think the updating stability is a little slow apart from that you have my love ππππ
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Seized by the System is a story about Fang Ning who has been possessed by a system after commenting on a website about a meteor. This novel has a interesting idea, but thats about it. While the idea is interesting, I don't see how you can make it work in a novel. Everything feels rather pointless. First off, the translation quality is decent. There isn't any obvious mistakes either, and compared to most translation novels this is already pretty good. Writing quality in general is average thought. (4/5 stars) Story development. This a comedy novel, meaning the story is rather lackluster. The only point of focus in this novel is the comedy, everything else is completely disregarded. The pacing is rather awful, there are random time skips really early on. The system fights for justice "just because". The power scaling is rather bad as well, I mean, they literally don't tell you anything. This is a "cultivation" novel, and we don't even know the main character's strength. Aside from that, the story is completely lackluster. It's extremely dull. (1/5 stars) The character design is disregarded as well. We have the main character, a procrastinator. This doesn't change. We also have a stupid system, this doesn't change. There are also plenty of women who are thirsting for the main character, but this doesn't matter as theres no romance. All other side characters are rather stupid as well, and this seems to be a running theme in Chinese comedy. (1/5 stars) World background is somewhat interesting. It's rather vague, but that might because I haven't read terribly far into the story. It's a world where various people have awakened super powers, and this ranges widely from super speed to cultivation masters. (3/5 stars) Overall, the story's premise was rather limited from the start, and as usual with most Chinese comedies, story development and character design are forgotten. I give this novel 2.8 stars out of 5.
Starts a little slow but gets more interesting As it goes on. Its a really interesting Story about a system taking over the host.π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°
On c65 and from very beginning all I can think of is. Dear Sir System, do you have or know any other idle system that is hard working, honest like you? Cuz I would like you to be my System...
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This novel is all over the place. Gives me the headache when the characters talk, translation might be the cause. The MC and System is relationship is so-so. MC feeling smart but he's not.
there are bots who vote 5 stars so to keep it fair vote 1 stars my man's can't let the system(bots) control us! ....................................................................
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I didnβt read any chapter yet. Will someone motivate me? If not then its free exp[img=exp], am I right? hehehhe... I only read the sypnosis and it looks good but when I read the viewers review, it was the opposite of my expectations huhuhu
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Hi , This is Tynan, I am an editor from another platform that focuses on adventurous Genre Fictions. After reading your βSeized by the Systemβ, I decided to contact you and if possible, to extend you an invitation on distributing your works. However, there are so little I can talk about it here. If you were interested, please contact me via tynan@ringdomstory.com , then I should take opportunity to discuss it with you in detail. It was a great pleasure to meet your story. Sincerely Tynan
its quite refreshing in the start, like any other novel. but its hard to make the story keep interesting. the story began to boring and boring, by the end the story began to fast forward where there are a lot of narration. but overall this story is a great one
This novel starts off great but then sadly takes a turn for the worse, by which I mean it gets racist as most modern Chinese tend to do sadly. Expect anyone not Chinese to either be evil and stupid or worship the protagonist cause 'reasons', Expect many insults towards Japan, India. Vietnam. Korea etc basically any country China doesn't get along with. I doubt the Authors ever get to see any of these reviews but stop the senseless racism ruining perfectly decent novels. Also, Lol @ webnovels hypocrisy when their own policy is against racism but they host all these blatantly racist novels.
Pretty good it translation quality is mediocre and I hate how the system keeps feigning weakness.
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I love everything about the idea the story had and further developed, there is nothing more I could say without sounding like the previous reviewers,so I will just say it is definitely worth a read.π§‘π
Pathetic utter waste of plot it was good until some Chinese supreme ideology started in this book basically all other countries are devil moron and Chinese are the most cultured blah blah Also they depicted Indian gods as devils mind it Shiva the destroyer can decimate a Chinese dragon(or a evolved snake) thousands of times over so mind it.
It was fun to read but MC never improve even a little with the story and I didn't understand the cultivation system of the world that's the only things I don't like about this story other than that it was good.
Good story but the author is as lazy as the protag and went over his head, overall a nice concept, could have been executed better than this
This is a very new concept at least for me and was already engaged after reading the first chapter. I would really like to appreciate the author for those smooth transition in scenes
This novel starts off great but then sadly takes a turn for the worse, by which I mean it gets racist as most modern Chinese tend to do sadly. Expect anyone not Chinese to either be evil and stupid or worship the protagonist cause 'reasons', Expect many insults towards Japan, India. Vietnam. Korea etc basically any country China doesn't get along with. I doubt the Authors ever get to see any of these reviews but stop the senseless racism ruining perfectly decent novels. Also, Lol @ webnovels hypocrisy when their own policy is against racism but they host all these blatantly racist novels.
wanted to ask that does the system become the mc and what happens to the og mc, before reading
when I started reading this book I was like how will a system be in charge and take over while the human watches I thought it will be boring but it's really good and I was hooked right from beginning I would have given full starts but I think the updating stability is a little slow apart from that you have my love ππππ
bit.ly/3LyRF1N ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
Seized by the System is a story about Fang Ning who has been possessed by a system after commenting on a website about a meteor. This novel has a interesting idea, but thats about it. While the idea is interesting, I don't see how you can make it work in a novel. Everything feels rather pointless. First off, the translation quality is decent. There isn't any obvious mistakes either, and compared to most translation novels this is already pretty good. Writing quality in general is average thought. (4/5 stars) Story development. This a comedy novel, meaning the story is rather lackluster. The only point of focus in this novel is the comedy, everything else is completely disregarded. The pacing is rather awful, there are random time skips really early on. The system fights for justice "just because". The power scaling is rather bad as well, I mean, they literally don't tell you anything. This is a "cultivation" novel, and we don't even know the main character's strength. Aside from that, the story is completely lackluster. It's extremely dull. (1/5 stars) The character design is disregarded as well. We have the main character, a procrastinator. This doesn't change. We also have a stupid system, this doesn't change. There are also plenty of women who are thirsting for the main character, but this doesn't matter as theres no romance. All other side characters are rather stupid as well, and this seems to be a running theme in Chinese comedy. (1/5 stars) World background is somewhat interesting. It's rather vague, but that might because I haven't read terribly far into the story. It's a world where various people have awakened super powers, and this ranges widely from super speed to cultivation masters. (3/5 stars) Overall, the story's premise was rather limited from the start, and as usual with most Chinese comedies, story development and character design are forgotten. I give this novel 2.8 stars out of 5.
Starts a little slow but gets more interesting As it goes on. Its a really interesting Story about a system taking over the host.π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°π₯°
On c65 and from very beginning all I can think of is. Dear Sir System, do you have or know any other idle system that is hard working, honest like you? Cuz I would like you to be my System...
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Reveal Spoiler This novel is all over the place. Gives me the headache when the characters talk, translation might be the cause. The MC and System is relationship is so-so. MC feeling smart but he's not.
there are bots who vote 5 stars so to keep it fair vote 1 stars my man's can't let the system(bots) control us! ....................................................................
$115,500 for the Best Adventure Novels +Get Hardcover Publish Hey Writers! Come to check out this adventure novel writing competition, both new and published stories can participate! This competition is mainly looking for four genres: Fantasy, Urban, Game, and Sci-fi. You can either submit your published works, rewrite some previous ideas, or create a new story if any given examples or tips inspired you! Web-fiction or Light Novel writing experience is desired, so you might be the winner! For more information, you may visit: https://bit.ly/2ObQnRy or contact EmailοΌluffyringdom@gmail.com
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I didnβt read any chapter yet. Will someone motivate me? If not then its free exp[img=exp], am I right? hehehhe... I only read the sypnosis and it looks good but when I read the viewers review, it was the opposite of my expectations huhuhu
Hi there! Are you looking for inspiration? You might want to check out our Prompts Writing contest! Apocalypse, Isekai, LitRPG... Follow the three provided prompts and take the chance to win up to $2,000! Please Google 70daysthemedwritingchallenge to find out more! This contest is free entry and open to any writer at any country. If you had any query, please feel free to contact ringdom_promptswriting@hotmail.com Good luck for writing!
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Hi , This is Tynan, I am an editor from another platform that focuses on adventurous Genre Fictions. After reading your βSeized by the Systemβ, I decided to contact you and if possible, to extend you an invitation on distributing your works. However, there are so little I can talk about it here. If you were interested, please contact me via tynan@ringdomstory.com , then I should take opportunity to discuss it with you in detail. It was a great pleasure to meet your story. Sincerely Tynan
its quite refreshing in the start, like any other novel. but its hard to make the story keep interesting. the story began to boring and boring, by the end the story began to fast forward where there are a lot of narration. but overall this story is a great one
This novel starts off great but then sadly takes a turn for the worse, by which I mean it gets racist as most modern Chinese tend to do sadly. Expect anyone not Chinese to either be evil and stupid or worship the protagonist cause 'reasons', Expect many insults towards Japan, India. Vietnam. Korea etc basically any country China doesn't get along with. I doubt the Authors ever get to see any of these reviews but stop the senseless racism ruining perfectly decent novels. Also, Lol @ webnovels hypocrisy when their own policy is against racism but they host all these blatantly racist novels.
Pretty good it translation quality is mediocre and I hate how the system keeps feigning weakness.
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Reveal Spoiler I love everything about the idea the story had and further developed, there is nothing more I could say without sounding like the previous reviewers,so I will just say it is definitely worth a read.π§‘π
Pathetic utter waste of plot it was good until some Chinese supreme ideology started in this book basically all other countries are devil moron and Chinese are the most cultured blah blah Also they depicted Indian gods as devils mind it Shiva the destroyer can decimate a Chinese dragon(or a evolved snake) thousands of times over so mind it.
It was fun to read but MC never improve even a little with the story and I didn't understand the cultivation system of the world that's the only things I don't like about this story other than that it was good.
Good story but the author is as lazy as the protag and went over his head, overall a nice concept, could have been executed better than this
This is a very new concept at least for me and was already engaged after reading the first chapter. I would really like to appreciate the author for those smooth transition in scenes
This novel starts off great but then sadly takes a turn for the worse, by which I mean it gets racist as most modern Chinese tend to do sadly. Expect anyone not Chinese to either be evil and stupid or worship the protagonist cause 'reasons', Expect many insults towards Japan, India. Vietnam. Korea etc basically any country China doesn't get along with. I doubt the Authors ever get to see any of these reviews but stop the senseless racism ruining perfectly decent novels. Also, Lol @ webnovels hypocrisy when their own policy is against racism but they host all these blatantly racist novels.