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1. Shiki is op and the author portrays that beautifully. 2. The blend of characters into his crew is brilliant and fun to read. 3. So far the grammar's good, plot is good, and word iteration is amazing Overall i'd give it 9/10 a solid ten if not for the lack of updates or word from the author.
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honestly really good. I'm actually impressed by this fanfic, the writing isn't garbage, the story is good and the idea is also very interesting, now if you just updated the story it would much better.
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I have high standards, yet this novel is the best. 👏👏👏 Good job, author. 😊 x xx xxx xxxx xxxxx xxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxx
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Hmm.... Interesting so far... The grammar is decent as well .. can't wait to see where this one goes... Hope you don't drop, author.........
alright so the story is damn good. One of the few good ones on this site. Author, post this story on spacebattles, sufficient velocity, and fanfiction.net. You reach a wider audience and get better reviews.
The fic has been quite promising so far, even though the author doesn't upload daily, I'm satisfied with his update speed. I'm looking forward to see where this story will go.
I can't wait to see what you would do in this Fic. I've read your Harry Potter one and it was absolutely delicious. No this is not a Typo bu the way.
Doesn't look like the shiki I know. A man who is still personally naive ... I mean meh ... he's too nice to everyone ?. This is the world of One Piece bro, even ants can kill you in seconds. It's annoying, you have to read One Piece: Reborn as a Fishman.
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good book, very good book, really very good book, actually really very good book, certainly actually really very good book, entirely certainly actually really very good book.
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This is quite well written. Infact on eif the few well written ones I have come across. Keep up the good work and hope you dont drop this fic.
bruh... kill Doflamingo and everyone else then steal Sugar😂 hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahhaha!😂
Only five chapters in and I already want at least 100 more seems seems really interesting and a new twist on one piece showing more of the oldion
Wow I'm not sure what already happened or not in this timeline, but this fic has a lot of Kingdom Building and Army Building potential. With his devil fruit he can make floating islands, so he could save Ohara and their knowledge, recruiting Olvia (Nico's mother) and Nico Robin herself. He could befriend, recruit future powerhouses and poach them like Shanks, Mihawk, Law, Ace, Sabo, Kuma, Urouge, Jewel Bonney, Tom the shipwright, Sun pirates (Jinbe), the Giants, the Drawves, Minks, people from Wano, Kuja (Hancock and her sisters), Capone Bege... Or convert future enemes into his crewmates like Gekko Moriah(aftee his crewmates were massacred), Vegapunk, Caesar Clown, Basil... He could also follow some people to get their future devil fruits and take them. There are so many possibilities!! I'm really excited about your fic. Personally I prefer daily chapters (or at least regular) even if they are short chapters so I don't forget the details of the story. I read many fictions and I m always more invested in the stories I know I get to read daily. Thank you and keep writing!
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hah finally found a new good fanfic,this fanfic one of the best read xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
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1. Shiki is op and the author portrays that beautifully. 2. The blend of characters into his crew is brilliant and fun to read. 3. So far the grammar's good, plot is good, and word iteration is amazing Overall i'd give it 9/10 a solid ten if not for the lack of updates or word from the author.
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honestly really good. I'm actually impressed by this fanfic, the writing isn't garbage, the story is good and the idea is also very interesting, now if you just updated the story it would much better.
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I have high standards, yet this novel is the best. 👏👏👏 Good job, author. 😊 x xx xxx xxxx xxxxx xxxxxx xxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxx
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Hmm.... Interesting so far... The grammar is decent as well .. can't wait to see where this one goes... Hope you don't drop, author.........
alright so the story is damn good. One of the few good ones on this site. Author, post this story on spacebattles, sufficient velocity, and fanfiction.net. You reach a wider audience and get better reviews.
The fic has been quite promising so far, even though the author doesn't upload daily, I'm satisfied with his update speed. I'm looking forward to see where this story will go.
I can't wait to see what you would do in this Fic. I've read your Harry Potter one and it was absolutely delicious. No this is not a Typo bu the way.
Doesn't look like the shiki I know. A man who is still personally naive ... I mean meh ... he's too nice to everyone ?. This is the world of One Piece bro, even ants can kill you in seconds. It's annoying, you have to read One Piece: Reborn as a Fishman.
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good book, very good book, really very good book, actually really very good book, certainly actually really very good book, entirely certainly actually really very good book.
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This is quite well written. Infact on eif the few well written ones I have come across. Keep up the good work and hope you dont drop this fic.
bruh... kill Doflamingo and everyone else then steal Sugar😂 hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahhaha!😂
Only five chapters in and I already want at least 100 more seems seems really interesting and a new twist on one piece showing more of the oldion
Wow I'm not sure what already happened or not in this timeline, but this fic has a lot of Kingdom Building and Army Building potential. With his devil fruit he can make floating islands, so he could save Ohara and their knowledge, recruiting Olvia (Nico's mother) and Nico Robin herself. He could befriend, recruit future powerhouses and poach them like Shanks, Mihawk, Law, Ace, Sabo, Kuma, Urouge, Jewel Bonney, Tom the shipwright, Sun pirates (Jinbe), the Giants, the Drawves, Minks, people from Wano, Kuja (Hancock and her sisters), Capone Bege... Or convert future enemes into his crewmates like Gekko Moriah(aftee his crewmates were massacred), Vegapunk, Caesar Clown, Basil... He could also follow some people to get their future devil fruits and take them. There are so many possibilities!! I'm really excited about your fic. Personally I prefer daily chapters (or at least regular) even if they are short chapters so I don't forget the details of the story. I read many fictions and I m always more invested in the stories I know I get to read daily. Thank you and keep writing!
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hah finally found a new good fanfic,this fanfic one of the best read xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
can yu being this back i really liked this