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Rewrite: A worker with a life he is happy to live. But unfortunately he died because of an earthquake.
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Writing Quality ............. ☆☆☆☆○ Story Development ..... ☆○○○○ Character Design ......... ☆☆☆○○ Updating Stability ........ ☆☆☆☆☆ World Background ....... ☆○○○○
I quite like the idea and premise of the story itself and the wishes that were chosen. However, the grammar and sentence structure could use A LOT of work, as while not unreadable or requiring some kind of super translating ability like when reading MTL novels it is hard to tell what is being said or told at times.
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like it actually keep on it 🔥🔥🔥🔥 ......... ........... .......... ....... . ... .. . . . . .. . ......... . . . . . ... . ..........
Read 12 chapters started good, but when plot started with straw hats and arlong its just copy/past from original with some lines from MC and his team! Has potential. Author don't ever do copy/past from original like that again!